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You wright to your belong

« on: January 12, 2010, 08:37:02 PM »

Any thing any where,
i put my feel my essence to something
some site,
A newcomer i see
once i did not get to see,
Any thing related to me goes far away i see
i want it back, "come close to me",
i wrote it, still it goes far,

someone takes the credit, but who?.
still i don't get to see my work, seen i got a response
But i click and wait...,again nothing to be seen, either the person who responded also
My work, i feel like a nikumpup that is being used
but then as the newcomer we have to abide the rules.
but then why the things we write not able to be seen just post more,
wait more, then we might be able to see ower belongings?....


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Re: You wright to your belong

« Reply #1 on: January 12, 2010, 08:41:40 PM »

What are your thaughts for this poem.
As i do not belive in rules for poetry,and what type of pattern it should be in.


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Re: You wright to your belong

« Reply #2 on: January 12, 2010, 09:20:48 PM »

nice thought Anu ji.....keep writing....welcome to yo


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Re: You wright to your belong

« Reply #3 on: January 12, 2010, 11:19:18 PM »

EVERY ONE HAS FREEDOM OF THOUGHTS .....I BELIEVE IN IMPROVISATION BUT CAN NOT URGE PEOPLE TO RESPOND ALL THE TIME....!!!!!!


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Re: You wright to your belong

« Reply #4 on: January 13, 2010, 08:27:06 AM »

Bahut khoob Anu ji.great creation.welcome to yo. icon_thumleft


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Re: You wright to your belong

« Reply #5 on: January 16, 2010, 08:13:19 PM »

Nice Anu JI


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Re: You wright to your belong

« Reply #6 on: January 28, 2010, 02:29:27 PM »

thanx for your comments


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Re: You wright to your belong

« Reply #7 on: January 28, 2010, 02:33:53 PM »

comments are to make you lift,
you know where you are,
in an aspiring world,
to share your feel and thaughts,

thanx to the people who appreciated my thaughts and feelings that i am trying to convey.