Ek sache shakhs ki sachii kahani...

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Hello friends...
Aaj main aap sab k beech ek kahani ko share karne ja rhi hu...ye ek aesi prem kahani hai jisme ek shakhs ne zindgi bhar mhbt k intezar main apna sab kuch gawa diya..vo aaj bhi apne khuabo ki haqiqat ko dhundh raha hai..thoda pagal hai thoda ziddi hai thoda nadaan hai per bahut hi pyara aur bade dilwala insaan hai.....tou chaliye kahani ko shuru karti hu ummed karti hu apko pasand ayegi......
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Ek insan tha jisne hamesha apni hi duniya mein rehna sikha tha..use tanhaiya pasand thi khud se baate karna pasand tha aur kisi ek ladki se beinteha mhbt karna pasand tha..ek aesi ladki jisne kabhi usse pyar nhi kiya..jisne kabhi use pyar ki nigah tak se nhi dekha..us insan ne us ladki k liye apna sab kuch jaise rok diya apni khushiya apni zindgi apni ibadat apna sab kuch bus usi ek ladki k ird gird simit kar liya tha...vo use bachpan se janta tha,pehle vo ek hi gali mein rehte the bus tabhi se use usse mhbt ho gyi thi,baad mein us ladki ne shift kar liya tou us ladke ko asal mein malum hua ki vo uske bina kitna adhura hai,uski umar bhi nhi thi pyar karne ki vo sirrf 14 saal ka tha,vo pagal tha bus use wahi ladki ka junoon sawar tha,use blank call karta aur vo bhi usi ladki k ghar k sath wali dukaan se per vo ladki janti thi ki use blank call kaun karta hai,isliye vo hamesha use bura bhala kehti aur ph kaat deti..school k naam pe us ladki k ghar k aage khada ho kar uske aane ki raah dekhta phir school ka waqt khtm hote hi apne ghar laut kar ache se tayyar ho kar jata aur phir usi ladki ka intezaar karta...har lamha bus ek hi dua hoti thi uske labo pe..kaash vo dikh jaye kaash vo bahr ajaye..aur jab vo aati tou vo use dekh kar apne khuda ko lakho baar shukriya ada karta aur kehta ki aaj vo itna khush hai jiitna pehle kabhi nhi hua..har baar jab bhi vo us ladki ko dekhta tou yahi kehta aaj se pehle mujhe itni khushi kabhi nhi hui...

Jab bhi barish hoti tou vo bhaag k jata aur us ladki k ghar k saamne khada hoke bus us barish ki bundo ko mehsus karta,har vo bund jo us ladki k ghar ko dekhte hue uske chehre ko chhuti use lagta jaise vo ehsas banke uske chehre ko chhu rahi hai,vo bahut khush hota jaise ek chhote se lamhe mein kitna kuch ji liya ho usne..phir jab achank kabhi barish band ho jti tou vo ghar laut aata tou asma ko dekhke kehta ki kal bhi isi trh barsna per merri jaan ka didar zarur karwa dena..

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«Reply #1 on: January 24, 2010, 05:00:48 PM »
Very touchy story dear...i like it plzzz complete karo naa...kya ye real story hai?
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«Reply #2 on: January 24, 2010, 05:16:22 PM »
thnx pari ji,ji haan ye SACHI KAHANI hai...poora zarur krungi pari ji per bahut hi lambi hai apko waqt nikalke aana hoga aur yahan ise padhna hoga..thik hai ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: January 24, 2010, 05:27:08 PM »

Vo us ladki k liye gift lata aur raat raat ko jagta aur unhe khud pack karta..phir agli subeh use jaa k courior se use bhejta jab ki vo ladki uske ghar se sirrf 5 min ki doori pe rehti thi jagah same thi bus block alag the...vo us ladki ko bheje hue gifts ki rasid ko sambhal k rakhta..hamesha jo bhi use acha lagta vo uske liye kharid liya karta tha aur use courior se bhej diya karta tha...vo ladki gift le leti thi per kabhi kuch kehti nhi thi..vo pata karta ki uska gift deliver ho gya hai tou vo us ladki k yahan ph karta aur janne ki koshish karta ki us ladki ka kya reaction hai per vo ladki use kuch nhi kehti thi...bus gusse mein ph kaat deti ya kabhi hold kar k rakh k chali jati aur vo ph pakdke khada rehta aur har baaat sunta rehta jab tak ki uske paise khtm nhi ho jate the,ya kayi baar tou aesa hota tha ki vo ladki ph hold kar k bahar dukaan pe aake us ladke ko ghurne lagti tou vo yu hi jhuth muth baate karne lagta aur jald hi ph rakh kar wahan se chala jata..aur phir door khada us ladki ko dekhta aur khushi mein jhumta hua aur ye sochta hua ghar laut aata ki ya khudaa aaj maine use apne kitne karib se dekha...bus uske gusse ki har ada ko yad karta aur khush hota..phir agle din ki aas mein sapne sanjote hue so jata..

AAGE KI KAHANI LAUT KAR LIKHUNGI ABHI CHALTI HU...
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«Reply #4 on: January 24, 2010, 06:46:31 PM »
Wah very touching story Geet ji,pliz jaldi se aur likh. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2010, 04:28:29 AM »
lovely story geet ji.pls jaldi aage likhiyega....
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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2010, 06:17:07 AM »
thnx pari ji,ji haan ye SACHI KAHANI hai...poora zarur krungi pari ji per bahut hi lambi hai apko waqt nikalke aana hoga aur yahan ise padhna hoga..thik hai ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

Haan ji insha Allah zarur waqt to nikaal naa hi hoga tumne kahani itni achi jo likhi hai.. icon_thumleft :clapping:intezaar rahega next part ka... love4
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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2010, 12:02:30 PM »
Thnx alot madhuji,think ji.pari ji,kaash ji aap sabhi ne merri kahani padhi..lijiye bina waqt zaya karte hue mein aage badhti hu...
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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2010, 12:26:58 PM »
Jab kabhi vo koi pyar bhari story dekhta tou uski tadap us ladki k liye badh jati aur vo dua karta ki kaash vo uski zindgi mein aa jaye,vo hamesha use blank calls kiya karta tha aur vo ladki apne mood k hisab se reaction deti thi uske calls ka,kabhi gussa hoti tou bura bhala kehti ache mood mein hoti tou us ladke ko chhedti,vo ladka har haal mein bus uska paas hone ka ehsaas chahta tha,na kabhi use kuch kehta tha bus chizo k zariye use apne jazbaat bayan karta aur khud ko sukoon dilane k liye use dekhne jata..diwano ki tarah uska picha karta phir chahe vo kahiin bhi jaye ya kisi k sath ho use kuch hosh nhi use malum tha tou bus itna ki vo uski JAAN thi..aur vo usse bahut pyar karta tha..uske aage use kuch smjh nhi aata tha..dekhte dekhte saal bit'te gaye aur ek din hamesha ki tarah us ladke ne use blank call kiya..tou us ladki k yahan koi tha us ladki ne ph uthaya aur hamesha ki tarah hold pe rakh diya...vo sunta raha us din vo ladka apne ghar pe tha aur gane sun raha tha...

Tabhi achanak kisi ne hold kiya ph uthaya aur dusri taraf se kisi k baat karne ki awaz aayi..vo ladki apni kisi saheli se uske baare mein kuch keh rahi thi,vo keh rahi thi ki yahi hai vo pagal jiske baare mein maine tujhe bataya tha..uski frend kehti mujhe baat karne de aur usne ph pe kaha ki kaun hai..vo ladka chup raha phir us ladki ne piche se kaha ki hi tou bol do merri frend hai..uski dost ne HI kaha tou us ladke ne bhi HI kaha..
uski frend kehti-AAP ISE PH KYUN KARTE HO AUR GIFTS KYUN BHEJTE HO.?...
Ladke ne kaha-BUS YU HI..MUJHE ACHA LAGTA HAI...
tou uski frend kehti-OK..
phir kehti ki-AAP ISSE KYA CHAHTE HO..
vo kehta-KUCH NHI..
uski frend ne kaha-KABHI ISSE MILE HO??
vo kehta-NHI MILAA TOU NHI HAAN PER ROZ DEKHTA HU..
uski frend kehti-ACHA MUJHSE MILOGE..
ladke ne pucha-KYUN MILNA HAI..(vo darr gya tha kahiin uski frend us ladke ki pitayi na karwa de)
uski frend kehti-BHAYI HUM BHI TOU DEKHE KI KAUN HAI VO DIWANA JO HAMARI DOST KO ITNA CHAHTA HAI..
ladke ne kaha-THIK HAI JAB APKE PAAAS TIME HO MUJHE BATA DENA MAIN AJAUNGA MILNE..
uski frend kehti-APNA NO. TOU DE DO..
ladke ne kaha-APKI FREND K PAAS HAI AAP USSE LE LENA..AAP MUJHE APNA NO. DE DO MAIN APKO CALL KAR LUNGA..(ladke ne uski frend ka no. apna darr kam karne k liya manga tha)aur uski frend  ne use no. de diya..phir achanak hi us ladki ne ph le liyaa apni dost se,
aur kehti-BADA IMPRESS KAR RAHE HO MERRI FREND KO...vo ladka chup raha
ladki phir boli-HO NAA PH PE???
vo bola-HAAN..(use yakin nhi ho raha tha ki vo ladki jise baat karne k liye kab se intezaar mein tha vo yu achanak itne apnepan k sath usse baat karegi..VO BAHUT KHUSH THA..)
vo ladki boli-YE KYA AJEEB GANA SUN RAHE HO??
vo bola-KYUN ACHA NHI HAI..
ladki boli-NAA..
usne pucha-ACHA BATAO TUM KAUN SA GANA SUNOGI??
vo boli-DIL DE DIYA HAI..(itefaq se vo gana us ladke ki playlist mein tha aur usne jaldi se use play kar diya aur use yu hi keh diya ki ye gana uska b fav. hai)..vo ladki gana sunti rahi aur vo uski sanso ki awaz ko sunta rha phir gana khtm hi hone wala tha ki
us ladki ne kaha-ACHA AB MAIN RAKH RAHI HU...aur ph kaat diya..ladka kuch kehta isse pehle hi usne ph kaat diya..vo ladka apni khuabo ko haqiqat mein tabdil hua dekh itna khush tha,ki mano maut bhi agar uske paas ajati tou vo khushi khushi apna leta,us din se usne uski frend ka naam ANGEL rakh diya,ab ANGEL bhi kahani mein shamil ho gyi thi....
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2010, 12:34:32 PM »
how sweet
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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2010, 12:47:31 PM »
Thnx pari ji..thoda add kiya hai ladke ki aur frend ki baate dobara padh lena plzz...


Ek din vo ladka kisi kaam se bahar gaya tha tou laut'te hue usne socha ki kyun naa uski dost se mil liya jaye..iss irade se nhi ki vo us ladki se uski frend dosti karwa degi balki uski hi aesi shakhs thi jiski wajah se usne us ladki se baat ki..aur vo use mil k tahe dil se shukriya ada karna chahta tha..

Usne angel ko ph kiya..uski frend ne ph uthaya..
ladke ne use pucha k agar vo free hai tou usse mil sakti hai??
uski frend kehti-THIK HAI 1 GHANTE MEIN MILTE HAI,PER VO MERRE SATH NHI AYEGI..
ladke ne kaha-MAIN JANTA HU..
aur phir vo uski batayi hui jagah pe aayi usse milne..vo mile ladka kaafi comfortable tha uski frend se baat karne mein czz uski frend thi hi itni sweet..phir unhone baate ki ladke ne angel ko thnx kaha choclate di aur vo dono apne apne ghar wapis agye..

Angel kaafi frendly thi aur ek hi mulaqat mein us ladke ki kaafi achi dost bhi ban gyi.vo angel ko us ladki ki baate batata angel bhi usse smjhya karti ki vo shayad hi kabhi ek ho payenge..per vo maanta nhi tha kehta ki ab use us ladki se aur bhi pyar ho gya hai czz use uski wajah se itni achi dost jo mil gyi hai..vo angel ko bhi smjhata ki vo us ladki se kuch nhi chahta..bus use khush dekhna chahta hai..phir bhi angel ne dost hone ka farz nibhaya aur uski dosti us ladki se karwa di...

Vo us din bahut khush tha use us ladki ne apne ghar bulaya tha czz uske parents kahiin gye the aur vo angel,us ladki ki chhoti sister aur vo ladki sab ghar pe masti karne wale the..vo jaise hi us ladki k ghar pahucha us ladki ki sister ne use kaha ki vo use ghuma k aye apni scooty pe..vo ladka us uski sister ko le gya ghumane uski sister bahut khush hui..phir vo bahar hi apni scooty pe baith gya aur us ladki ka wait karne laga..vo ander thi kuch kaam kar rhi thi aur angel bhi ane wali thi..vo uski behen se baat karta raha aur use apni scooty k baare mein batata raha..phir uski behen bhi chali gyi mkt aur vo akela baitha hi tha ki achanak vo ladki agyi..use dekh k vo bahut khush hua..vo ladki scooty k bilkul saamne rakhe bench pe baith gyi aur usne apne paau uski scooty pe rakh diye,ladka bola-PLZZ PAIR HATA LO AAJ HI SCOOTY SAAF KI HAI..
vo kehti-MUJHSE ZYADA SCOOTY IMPORTANT HAI TUMHARE LIYE??
vo bola-OK BABA RAKH LO..achanak ladke ki mom ka ph aaya aur usne ph se baat karke jaise hi ph ko pocket mein rakhne laga
vo ladki boli-EK MIN. APNA PH DIKHANA?..ladke ne use ph de diya..us ladki ne contact list mein jake dekha ki uska naam us ladke k ph mein PRINCESS k naam se save hai..vo kehti-PRINCESS..AUR PHIR MUSKURA DI..phir usne kuch karke us ladke ko ph wapis de diya..ladke ne jaise hi check kiya tou usne dekha ki us ladki ne apna contact uske mobile se delete kar siya..tou ladke ne kaha-NO. PH SE DELETE KIYA HAI..DIL SE KAISE KAROGI..vo kuch kehti achanak angel bhi agyi..tou vo ladki ander chali gyi aur pani ki bottle leke wapis bahar ayi..ladke ne angel se pucha-KYA PROG. HAI??
angel ne kaha-CHALO GOLGAPPE KHAKE AATE HAI..
phir vo teeno mkt chal diya aur golgappe ki shop pe gye..ladka kehta ki use golgappe pasand nhi.tou angel ne kaha uski frend ko bahut psnd hai,ladka bola-MAIN JANTA HU..MAINE AKSAR INHE KHATE DEKHA HAI..
phir us ladki ne golgappa offer kiya..tou ladke ne kha liya..aur use mrchi lagne lagi..ye dekh kar vo ladki bahut hasi..ladke ne golgappe wale se paapdi mangi tou vo ladki boli-TUM EKDUM CHHOTE BACHE HO...vo bus has diya angel ne ladke ka sath diya aur kaha tou kya hua hota hai...vo bus us pal ki har khushi ko apni ankho mein sametne ki koshish kar raha tha.us ladki ki har ada ko apni ruh mein basa raha tha aur dua kar raha tha ki ye pal kabhi na khtm ho...
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2010, 01:09:08 PM »
Yes dear maine padh liya hai thxxx batane ke liye...its  very sweet story
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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2010, 02:16:43 PM »
ur welcome n thnx..

Vo aksar ph pe baate karne laga,per romantic nhi bus yu hi vo ladki aksar us ladke se sawal karti aur vo jawab deta,vo khud bhi us ladki se kayi sawal karna chahta tha per usne kabhi mauka nhi diya,aur ladke ne kabhi use force nhi kiya czz uske liye sawalo k jawab se zyada us ladki se baat karna tha..vo ladka jo bhi baat us ladki se karta baad mein angel ko ph karke batata aur usse uski raaye mangta...angel use guide karti aur smjhati ki use khud ki khushiyo ki hifazat khud se hi karni chahiye..aksar hamari khud ki nazar hamari khushiyo ko lag jati hai aur hamein pata bhi nhi chalta aur hum zamane bhar ko blame karte hai..vo angel ki har baat ko smjhta aur apne khuda ko laakh laakh shukriya ada karta use vo haseen pal dene k liye...

Ek din subeh subeh barish ka suhana mausam tha,us ladke k paas do chhote chhote hearts shape k soft toys the,usne usme mein se ek heart liya us ladki k ghar k piche khidki pe baandh aaya..phir shaam hone ka intezaar karne laga..shaam ko bahut tez tufan aaya aur barish shuru ho gyi,usne jaldi se us ladki ko call kiya aur kaha ki-TUMHARE GHAR K PICHE WALI KHDKI PE JAKE DEKHO KUCH HAI..
ladki bol-TUM APNE GHAR PE HO TUMHE KAISE PATA KI WAHAN KUCH HAI YA NHI..
ladke ne kaha-JAKE DEKHO TOU SAHI..
ladki gyi-TOU USNE KAHA USE KUCH NHI DIKHA..
vo bola-THIK SE DEKHO..
ladki ko dil dikha aur usne use utar liya per utarte hue vo usse toot gya..
vo boli-ARRE YE TOOTA HUA HAI..
ladke ne mayusi se kaha-ARRE TUMNE MERRA DIL TOD DIYA..
ladki ne dil jod diya aur kaha-LO JUD GYA..WAISE BHI AB YE DIL KABHI NHI TUTEGA..
ladke ne pucha-SACH MEIN..
ladki boli-PAKKA..
phir usne pucha-KAHAN RAKHOGI ISE??
ladki kehti-APNE TAKIYE K NICHE..
ladke ne kaha-AGAR PHIR TOOT GYA TOU..
ladki boli-ISLIYE TOU APNE PAAS RAKHUNGI KI TOOTE NA..

ladke ne thnx kaha aur ph rakh diya..achanak ladki ki tabiyat kuch kharab ho gyi,usne us ladke se ek din baat ki use bataya phir uske baad baat nhi ki,bus ladka ph karta tou uski mummy use kahiin bahar gyi hai keh k ph rakh deti...

Ek raat vo udas baitha tha,uski us ladki se baat nhi ho paa rhi thi..achanak raat k 2 baje uske ph pe ek msg aaya usne umeed se ye soch k msg padha ki us ladki ka msg aaya hoga..tou vo kya dekhta hai ki vo msg usi ladki ki mom k ph se aaya tha aur usme likha tha..I THINK I LIKE U...vo ladka smjh nhi paa raha tha ki kya kare..usne jhath se call back kiya..tou pehle tou ph nhi uthaya us ladki ne...phir usne dobara ph kiya..tou usne ph uthaya aur ladke ne pucha-JO MSG MEIN LIKHA HAI KYA VO SACH HAi...ladki ne kuch kaha nhi aur ph kaat diya...ladke ko laga ki vo shayad isliye nhi boli ki usne galat waqt pe ph kiya aur vo bhi us ladki ki mom k ph pe..vo subeh ka intezaar karne laga...saari raat uski bechain kati..subeh hote hi usne ladki ko ph kiya tou us ladki ne ph uthaya nhi..use laga vo ladki bzz hogi tou vo uske ghar k saamne khada ho kar uska intezaar karne laga..kaafi der baad vo bahar aayi.usne ladke ko dekha aur bina kuch kahe chali gyi..ladka piche piche gaya aur usne use bulaya tou ladki rudely boli-KYA HAI KYUN PICHA KAR RAHE HO...
ladka ghabra usne kaha mujhe tumse kuch puchna hai..vo kehti-MUJHE TUMSE KOI BAAT NHI KARNI...ladka chup chap chala gya aur hamesha ki trh uska picha karne laga..mgr uska dil bechain tha tou usne us ladki ko call kiya..us ladki ne uthaya
ladke ne kaha-PLZZ PH MAT KATNA SIRRF EK BAAT BATA DO KI KAL RAAT MSG TUMNE KIYA THA...
ladki kehti-KAUN SA MSG??
ladke ne kaha-JO KAL RAAT TUMHARI MOM K PH SE AAYA THA??
ladki anjaan bani rahi..ladke ne kaha ho sakta hai tumhari behen ne msg kiya ho tou vo kehti-USKI BEHEN KO MSG KARNA NHI AATA...ladki ne phir ph kaat diya,ladke ne kayi baar koshish ki tou usne ph nhi uthaya ladka udas ho kar ghar agya...saara waqt sochta raha ki us ladki ko achanak kya hua??


So dosto ab aap bataiye apko merri ye sachi kahani kaisi lag rhi hai plzz waqt nikaliye aur ek bar dil se iss kahani ko padhiye...aur mujhe bataiya ki aap ko kaisa mehsus hua iss kahani ko padhkar...mujhe aap sab k comments ka besabri se intezaar rahega...

Uske baad hi main aage badhungi...

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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2010, 04:27:35 PM »
Dear muujhe ye kahani behad pasand aarahi hai aur jis tarah se tumne isko likha hai its just amezing keep it up... notworthy Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2010, 04:48:24 PM »
thnx alot pari ji..jald hi main aage bhi likhungi bus kuch waqt ka intezar kijiye...
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