Aa gaye hain sanam: dard key din gaye!

by abdbundeli on May 13, 2009, 12:38:00 PM
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Aa gaye hain sanam: dard key din gaye!
Ab na aayengey gam: dard key din gaye!!

Aaj bhi muskuraayen na gunchey, to kyaa?
Muskuraayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Baag sunsaan thaa, chahchahaahat na thee;
Chahchahaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Sur nadaarad they, rahtey they khaamosh lab!
Gungunaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!!

Log gaatey they: aansoo bahaataa tha dil!
Jhoom gaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!!

Woh na they: daaman-e-nam lahartaa na thaa:
Lahlahaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Un key khwaaboun sey, ashkoun sey, thee dostee!
Chashm kyoun hongey nam: dard key din gaye!

Jab jagaayengey: tab ham ko neend aayegee!
Ab sataayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Roz baatoun mein raateyn kateyngeen, ‘abd’,
Budbudaayengey kam: dard key din gaye!

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«Reply #1 on: May 13, 2009, 01:35:40 PM »
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Dono the gamzada, bat lete the dard

Ab hum ABD jaye kaha, jo kehte ho tum dard ke din gaye...

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«Reply #2 on: May 13, 2009, 01:46:34 PM »
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Aa gaye hain sanam: dard key din gaye!
Ab na aayengey gam: dard key din gaye!!

Aaj bhi muskuraayen na gunchey, to kyaa?
Muskuraayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Baag sunsaan thaa, chahchahaahat na thee;
Chahchahaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Sur nadaarad they, rahtey they khaamosh lab!
Gungunaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!!

Log gaatey they: aansoo bahaataa tha dil!
Jhoom gaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!!

Woh na they: daaman-e-nam lahartaa na thaa:
Lahlahaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Un key khwaaboun sey, ashkoun sey, thee dostee!
Chashm kyoun hongey nam: dard key din gaye!

Jab jagaayengey: tab ham ko neend aayegee!
Ab sataayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Roz baatoun mein raateyn kateyngeen, ‘abd’,
Budbudaayengey kam: dard key din gaye!

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Ek dam alag....dard se ubhar kar sochne waali ye peshkash...Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 13, 2009, 02:07:23 PM »
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Dono the gamzada, bat lete the dard

Ab hum ABD jaye kaha, jo kehte ho tum dard ke din gaye...

-SG-
Sajid ji!
Shaayad aapney, "Tum ney kyaa kar diyaa: dard kam ho gayaa!" waalee gazal naheen padhhee hai?

Aap aatey hain: chain aataa hai!
Aap jaatey hain: chain jaataa hai!
Ham bataayen kisey-kisey, ay dil,
Dil sey dil kaa ajeeb naataa hai!!

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«Reply #4 on: May 13, 2009, 02:12:36 PM »
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very nice and beautiful abd ji and sajid ji,
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«Reply #5 on: May 13, 2009, 02:17:00 PM »
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Sajid ji!
Shaayad aapney, "Tum ney kyaa kar diyaa: dard kam ho gayaa!" waalee gazal naheen padhhee hai?

Aap aatey hain: chain aataa hai!
Aap jaatey hain: chain jaataa hai!
Ham bataayen kisey-kisey, ay dil,
Dil sey dil kaa ajeeb naataa hai!!

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Aapka shikwa bilkul durust hain bhaiyya, maine aapke bohat se kalam miss kar diye hain. Asal me halaat aise ban gaye, jis khuloos aur mohabbat ke sath main aapki thread me likhta hu waisa mahaul nahi ban pa raha tha.

Par koshish karuga ke jitne kalam miss huye hain un sab ko dhoond dhoond kar nikalu aur unme apni hazri du.

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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2009, 02:20:52 PM »
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Ek dam alag....dard se ubhar kar sochne waali ye peshkash...Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
Yeh raah-e-zeest hai, Talat bitia!
Dard aataa bhi hai, jaataa bhi hai!
Woh jo aatey hain, khushee aatee hai!
Dour ulfat kaa, sataataa bhi hai!!

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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2009, 02:21:59 PM »
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very nice and beautiful abd ji and sajid ji,
Thanks madhuwesh!
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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2009, 02:24:47 PM »
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Aapka shikwa bilkul durust hain bhaiyya, maine aapke bohat se kalam miss kar diye hain. Asal me halaat aise ban gaye, jis khuloos aur mohabbat ke sath main aapki thread me likhta hu waisa mahaul nahi ban pa raha tha.

Par koshish karuga ke jitne kalam miss huye hain un sab ko dhoond dhoond kar nikalu aur unme apni hazri du.

And thank Madhu

You're most welcome! Khushaamdeed Sajid bhai!
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2009, 03:32:46 PM »
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Yeh raah-e-zeest hai, Talat bitia!
Dard aataa bhi hai, jaataa bhi hai!
Woh jo aatey hain, khushee aatee hai!
Dour ulfat kaa, sataataa bhi hai!!

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Sach kaha Babu Ji

Raah-e-Zeist Main Kabhi Koi Lamha Tadpata Hai,
Jab Wo Guzra Hua Haseen Daur Yaad Aata Hai,
Nayi Khushian Bhi Mili Isi Safar Main Hume,
Khushi Aur Gham Ka Sangam Hi Jeena Kehlata Hai !
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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2009, 04:29:47 PM »
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Aa gaye hain sanam: dard key din gaye!
Ab na aayengey gam: dard key din gaye!!

Aaj bhi muskuraayen na gunchey, to kyaa?
Muskuraayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Baag sunsaan thaa, chahchahaahat na thee;
Chahchahaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Sur nadaarad they, rahtey they khaamosh lab!
Gungunaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!!

Log gaatey they: aansoo bahaataa tha dil!
Jhoom gaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!!

Woh na they: daaman-e-nam lahartaa na thaa:
Lahlahaayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Un key khwaaboun sey, ashkoun sey, thee dostee!
Chashm kyoun hongey nam: dard key din gaye!

Jab jagaayengey: tab ham ko neend aayegee!
Ab sataayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

Roz baatoun mein raateyn kateyngeen, ‘abd’,
Budbudaayengey kam: dard key din gaye!

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bhut khoob abd sahab jawaab nhi hai.............dil se daad hazir hai
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2009, 04:38:41 PM »
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Sach kaha Babu Ji

Raah-e-Zeist Main Kabhi Koi Lamha Tadpata Hai,
Jab Wo Guzra Hua Haseen Daur Yaad Aata Hai,
Nayi Khushian Bhi Mili hain Isi Safar Main Hume,
Khushi Aur Gham Ka Sangam Hi Jeena Kehlata Hai !

Talat bitia!

Tasawwuraat key saayon mein roz jeetey hain!
Tamaam lamhey saath, yuun hi naheen beetey hain?
Aab-e-kousar ki jagah, zahr ataa hotaa hai:
Ham kabhi zeest mein aab-e-wafaat peetey hain!!

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bhut khoob abd sahab jawaab nhi hai.............dil se daad hazir hai
Nazar-e-inaayat hai janaab! Shukriyah!
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Bohat khoob Adb ji

Bohat khoob Sajid ji ,,Celmira sis..
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«Reply #14 on: May 13, 2009, 06:21:45 PM »
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Aa gaye hain sanam: dard key din gaye!
Ab na aayengey gam: dard key din gaye!!

Aaj bhi muskuraayen na gunchey, to kyaa?
Muskuraayengey ham: dard key din gaye!

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