A'adatan ham ney sanwaaraa hai unhain!

by abdbundeli on September 12, 2009, 02:46:24 AM
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Binaa tumhaarey, hamain chain naheen!
Binaa nihaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Ho bhi saktaa hai, na aawaaz aaye!
Binaa pukaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Un ko, logoun ney sunaa hai kahtey:
'Binaa hamaarey, unhain chain naheen!'

'Un ko aanaa ho, yahaan aa jaayen:
Binaa hamaarey, jinhain chain naheen!'
 
Ham to kahtey hain, aap bhi kahiye:
'Binaa tumhaarey, hamain chain naheen!'

A'adatan ham ney sanwaaraa hai unhain!
Binaa dulaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Unkee saansoun ko, jigar mein apney,
Binaa utaarey, hamain chain naheen!

Unkey pahloo mein, har lamhah apnaa
Binaa guzaarey, hamain chain naheen!

Bahar mein ham, 'abd', zameen par woh:
Binaa kinaarey, hamain chain naheen!

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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2009, 02:55:18 AM »
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Wah Wah Aur Wah Bahut hi KHoob Abd Ji...kya hi pyaari ghazal likhi hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo pass hai, wo door hai,
Unse baat kiye bina hame chain naheen!!

Chand nikle, ya timtimaye taare,
Raat sone se pehle nihare na use to chain naheen!!

U hi khoobsurat hai bahut lekin,
Jab talak laga na de gazra unhe chain naheen!!

Har subah sharmayi, Har raat surmaayi si,
Phir bhi dekhen na hassi uski to aankhon chain naheen!!

Shally.

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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2009, 03:47:32 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI......

TUM NAHIN HAM NAHIN,
BIN TUMHARE KUCH NAHIN.

HAR PAL HAR LAMHA MERA, TERE BINA NAHIN,
DEKHTA HAI CHEHRA TERA,AUR KUCH NAHIN.

TUM NA NIHAARE MUJHKO,AISA KOI DIN NAHIN,
HAM NA YAAD KAREN TUJHKO,AISA KABHI HUA HI NAHIN.

MERE KHWAABON MEIN TUM HI HO,KOI DOOSRA NAHIN,
TERE KHAYAALON MEIN HAM HI HAIN, AUR KOI NAHIN.

TERI SAANSEN MUJH  BIN CHALTI HI NAHIN,
MERI SAANSEN TUJH BIN PIGALTI HI NAHIN.

AADATAN HAMNE SANWAARAA HAI TUMHEN,
BINA SANWAAREN, TUMHEN CHAIN BHI TOH NAHIN.

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«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2009, 08:21:24 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Babu Ji, Shally and Cara Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2009, 09:57:11 AM »
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Wah Wah Aur Wah Bahut hi KHoob Abd Ji...kya hi pyaari ghazal likhi hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Wo pass hai, wo door hai,
Unse baat kiye bina hame chain naheen!!

Chand nikle, ya timtimaye taare,
Raat sone se pehle nihare na use to chain naheen!!

U hi khoobsurat hai bahut lekin,
Jab talak laga na de gazra unhe chain naheen!!

Har subah sharmayi, Har raat surmaayi si,
Phir bhi dekhen na hassi uski to aankhon chain naheen!!

Shally.


Shukriyah Shally ji!
Khaasaa achchhaa andaaz-e-tasawwur hai! Bahut khoob!
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2009, 10:10:06 AM »
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KYA BAAT HAI  ABD JI......

TUM NAHIN HAM NAHIN,
BIN TUMHARE KUCH NAHIN.

HAR PAL HAR LAMHA MERA, TERE BINA NAHIN,
DEKHTA HAI CHEHRA TERA,AUR KUCH NAHIN.

TUM NA NIHAARE MUJHKO,AISA KOI DIN NAHIN,
HAM NA YAAD KAREN TUJHKO,AISA KABHI HUA HI NAHIN.

MERE KHWAABON MEIN TUM HI HO,KOI DOOSRA NAHIN,
TERE KHAYAALON MEIN HAM HI HAIN, AUR KOI NAHIN.

TERI SAANSEN MUJH  BIN CHALTI HI NAHIN,
MERI SAANSEN TUJH BIN PIGALTI HI NAHIN.

AADATAN HAMNE SANWAARAA HAI TUMHEN,
BINA SANWAAREN, TUMHEN CHAIN BHI TOH NAHIN.



Thanks Cara ji!
Khoob likhtey hain! Clapping Smiley

Ham hon, wo hon, saath hon;
Hon qayaam ham-khwaab;
Koyee kuchh bhee kahey, kyaa?
Hai shabaab daryaab!

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«Reply #6 on: September 20, 2009, 10:12:14 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Babu Ji, Shally and Cara Applause Applause Applause
Thanks Celmira!
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2009, 01:07:51 PM »
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Binaa tumhaarey, hamain chain naheen!
Binaa nihaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Ho bhi saktaa hai, na aawaaz aaye!
Binaa pukaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Un ko, logoun ney sunaa hai kahtey:
'Binaa hamaarey, unhain chain naheen!'

'Un ko aanaa ho, yahaan aa jaayen:
Binaa hamaarey, jinhain chain naheen!'
 
Ham to kahtey hain, aap bhi kahiye:
'Binaa tumhaarey, hamain chain naheen!'

A'adatan ham ney sanwaaraa hai unhain!
Binaa dulaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Unkee saansoun ko, jigar mein apney,
Binaa utaarey, hamain chain naheen!

Unkey pahloo mein, har lamhah apnaa
Binaa guzaarey, hamain chain naheen!

Bahar mein ham, 'abd', zameen par woh:
Binaa kinaarey, hamain chain naheen!

                         - abd bundeli




Bohot Khoob Abd sahab
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2009, 01:59:36 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai Abd ji, Good work shally and cara ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2009, 07:47:11 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Babu Ji, Shally and Cara Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Celmira Dear,

Shally.
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«Reply #10 on: September 24, 2009, 03:48:04 PM »
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Binaa tumhaarey, hamain chain naheen!
Binaa nihaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Ho bhi saktaa hai, na aawaaz aaye!
Binaa pukaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Un ko, logoun ney sunaa hai kahtey:
'Binaa hamaarey, unhain chain naheen!'

'Un ko aanaa ho, yahaan aa jaayen:
Binaa hamaarey, jinhain chain naheen!'
 
Ham to kahtey hain, aap bhi kahiye:
'Binaa tumhaarey, hamain chain naheen!'

A'adatan ham ney sanwaaraa hai unhain!
Binaa dulaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Unkee saansoun ko, jigar mein apney,
Binaa utaarey, hamain chain naheen!

Unkey pahloo mein, har lamhah apnaa
Binaa guzaarey, hamain chain naheen!

Bahar mein ham, 'abd', zameen par woh:
Binaa kinaarey, hamain chain naheen!

                         - abd bundeli




bahut khub, thx 4 sharing
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«Reply #11 on: September 25, 2009, 02:31:30 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Abd sahab
wah kaya baat hai Abd ji, Good work shally and cara ji

bahut khub, thx 4 sharing

Aap ko shukriyah adaa kartaa huun! Mujhey khushee hai: aapko gazal pasand aayee!
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«Reply #12 on: September 25, 2009, 02:34:23 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Abd ji,Shally ji ,Cara ji,very touching n mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: September 26, 2009, 11:48:27 PM »
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bahut khoob Uncle ji, Shally dear, Caraji
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«Reply #14 on: September 26, 2009, 11:59:42 PM »
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Binaa tumhaarey, hamain chain naheen!
Binaa nihaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Ho bhi saktaa hai, na aawaaz aaye!
Binaa pukaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Un ko, logoun ney sunaa hai kahtey:
'Binaa hamaarey, unhain chain naheen!'

'Un ko aanaa ho, yahaan aa jaayen:
Binaa hamaarey, jinhain chain naheen!'
 
Ham to kahtey hain, aap bhi kahiye:
'Binaa tumhaarey, hamain chain naheen!'

A'adatan ham ney sanwaaraa hai unhain!
Binaa dulaarey, hamain chain naheen!!

Unkee saansoun ko, jigar mein apney,
Binaa utaarey, hamain chain naheen!

Unkey pahloo mein, har lamhah apnaa
Binaa guzaarey, hamain chain naheen!

Bahar mein ham, 'abd', zameen par woh:
Binaa kinaarey, hamain chain naheen!

                         - abd bundeli


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Raaj ki baatein kahu kisi aur se izazat nahi

Humne mana zindagi jaisi koyi nemat nahi
Maut behtar jab khila koyi gul-e-ishrat nahi

Yaar kah kar, yaar se karna daga, emaan nahi
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