Aaj wo paas sey guzarey hain, door jaatey huye!

by abdbundeli on February 17, 2010, 06:15:41 AM
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Aaj deykhaa hai, phir, khizaan ko lout jaatey huye!
Bahaar aa gayee hai, phir sey, muskuraatey huye!!

Unkee zulfoun mein khil rahaa hai phir gul-e-gulbun:
Shaad hain, baam pai matmah hain gungunaatey huye!

Ham ko maaluum hai, peetey nahin hain wo! Leykin,
Unkee aankhoun mein shafaq khil uthaa hai aatey huye!

Lag rahaa, unkey tasawwur mein farq aayaa hai:
Aaj wo paas sey guzarey hain, door jaatey huye!

Beech khaaroun key jag uthaa hai makhmalee sabzah!
Rawaan hain bulbulain phir mahfilain sajaatey huye!!

Kyaa patah baad-e-sabaa un sey kah gayee hai kyaa?
Hamney deykhaa hai unhain,'haan' mein sir hilaatey huye!

Koochah-e-yaar mein phir jaam-e-chashm hain mushtaaq!
Aaj, lagtaa hai, nazar aayengey pilaatey huye!!

Zeyhn mein unkey baj rahee hai kahin shahnaayee!
Lag rahaa, koyi numaayaan hai wahaan gaatey huye!!

Eik arsaa huaa hai, roo-b-roo aaye unko;
Shukra hai, hain nazar mein, par, nazar churaatey huye!

Kab parosogey, 'abd', may, haseen aankhoun sey;
Baadah-e-nosh mein itra-e-asal milaatey huye?

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«Reply #1 on: February 17, 2010, 11:05:53 AM »
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Bohot Khoobsurat Ghazal hai Babu Ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 17, 2010, 01:43:34 PM »
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Aaj deykhaa hai, phir, khizaan ko lout jaatey huye!
Bahaar aa gayee hai, phir sey, muskuraatey huye!!

Unkee zulfoun mein khil rahaa hai phir gul-e-gulbun:
Shaad hain, baam pai matmah hain gungunaatey huye!

Ham ko maaluum hai, peetey nahin hain wo! Leykin,
Unkee aankhoun mein shafaq khil uthaa hai aatey huye!

Lag rahaa, unkey tasawwur mein farq aayaa hai:
Aaj wo paas sey guzarey hain, door jaatey huye!

Beech khaaroun key jag uthaa hai makhmalee sabzah!
Rawaan hain bulbulain phir mahfilain sajaatey huye!!

Kyaa patah baad-e-sabaa un sey kah gayee hai kyaa?
Hamney deykhaa hai unhain,'haan' mein sir hilaatey huye!

Koochah-e-yaar mein phir jaam-e-chashm hain mushtaaq!
Aaj, lagtaa hai, nazar aayengey pilaatey huye!!

Zeyhn mein unkey baj rahee hai kahin shahnaayee!
Lag rahaa, koyi numaayaan hai wahaan gaatey huye!!

Eik arsaa huaa hai, roo-b-roo aaye unko;
Shukra hai, hain nazar mein, par, nazar churaatey huye!

Kab parosogey, 'abd', may, haseen aankhoun sey;
Baadah-e-nosh mein itra-e-asal milaatey huye?

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Bahot khoob abd bundeli ji, kya khubsurat andaz-e-baban hai...masa allah....

Unke nazar-e-berukhi ne fir bachali Abroo,
Verna abtak mayquade sab past ho jaatey yahan!


 
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«Reply #3 on: February 17, 2010, 03:47:13 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2010, 01:04:42 AM »
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Bohot Khoobsurat Ghazal hai Babu Ji

Thanks a lot, Celmira ji!

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Bahot khoob abd bundeli ji, kya khubsurat andaz-e-baban hai...masa allah....

Unke nazar-e-berukhi ne fir bachali Abroo,
Verna abtak mayquade sab past ho jaatey yahan!


Dhanyawaad Pt. drpandey !

Aapney jo yah sher prastut kiyaa hai, usney 'tabiyat' khush kar dee! Bahut achchhey!

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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2010, 01:17:48 AM »
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Thanks, .......... ji!

Kyaa 'pen-name / pseudo-name' rakhaa hai janab ney? Zaraa gour to farmaaiyegaa!

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