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Jab Kabhi Puraane Din Yaad Aate HaiN
AankhoN MeN Aansuu Jhilmeelaate HaiN ...
Apni GhalTiyoN Se GiR Bhi Jaaye Kabhi
ChoT Khaa-ma-Khaa Bahut Khaate HaiN ...
Unse Keh Do YuuN Naa Bulaayaa Kare
Dekhne Waale Ishaara Samajh Jaate HaiN ....
Unhe Kyaa Zaroorat Hai Mandir Jaane Ki
Jo Ghayal ParindoN Ki Jaan Bachaate HaiN ...
ReT Ke Ghar Banaane Se Kyaa Faayedaa
Ek Aandhi MeN Woh UjaDh Jaate HaiN ...
Muflisii Ko Abhishaap Naa Samjhnaa "Naresh"
Log KichaD MeN Kamal DuuNdh Laate HaiN ...
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«Reply #1 on: February 08, 2011, 07:11:50 PM » |
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Unhe Kyaa Zaroorat Hai Mandir Jaane Ki
Jo Ghayal ParindoN Ki Jaan Bachaate HaiN ...
waaaah naresh ji.........
sach kahu to no words for it........bas blank ho gaya hu padkar......its just outstanding ji......special 4th para is just mindblowing......maja aa gaya sahab.....ese hi hume aur poetry padate rahiye.......once again i want to say that it is mindblowing.....
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«Reply #2 on: February 08, 2011, 07:24:08 PM » |
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shandaar ghazal Naresh sir ji.
behad shandaar.
Matrix yaara ne jin lines ko indicate kiya wo mere bhi dil ko chu gai.
aaghaz se anzaam tak behtareen alfaaz.
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2011, 07:27:16 PM » |
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bahut khubsurat ghazal Naresh ji.......
khush rahe. likhte rahe......
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2011, 09:00:32 PM » |
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BAhut Khub Naresh JI
Bahut Hi Sunder Likha Hai
U Hi Likhte Rahna Aur Humehsa Khus Rhna
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2011, 10:53:56 PM » |
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bahoot khoobsurat ehsaason se labrez aapki rachna ko....dheron daad...naresh ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2011, 02:44:15 PM » |
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Jab Kabhi Puraane Din Yaad Aate HaiN
AankhoN MeN Aansuu Jhilmeelaate HaiN ...
Apni GhalTiyoN Se GiR Bhi Jaaye Kabhi
ChoT Khaa-ma-Khaa Bahut Khaate HaiN ...
Unse Keh Do YuuN Naa Bulaayaa Kare
Dekhne Waale Ishaara Samajh Jaate HaiN ....
Unhe Kyaa Zaroorat Hai Mandir Jaane Ki
Jo Ghayal ParindoN Ki Jaan Bachaate HaiN ...
ReT Ke Ghar Banaane Se Kyaa Faayedaa
Ek Aandhi MeN Woh UjaDh Jaate HaiN ...
Muflisii Ko Abhishaap Naa Samjhnaa "Naresh"
Log KichaD MeN Kamal DuuNdh Laate HaiN ...
Bauht hi umdaa ghazal kahi hai aapne ... Naresh Ji ! sabhi ashaar mujhe behad pasand aaye ... dil se daad ... ! |
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2011, 05:59:52 PM » |
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Jab Kabhi Puraane Din Yaad Aate HaiN
AankhoN MeN Aansuu Jhilmeelaate HaiN ...
Apni GhalTiyoN Se GiR Bhi Jaaye Kabhi
ChoT Khaa-ma-Khaa Bahut Khaate HaiN ...
Unse Keh Do YuuN Naa Bulaayaa Kare
Dekhne Waale Ishaara Samajh Jaate HaiN ....
Unhe Kyaa Zaroorat Hai Mandir Jaane Ki
Jo Ghayal ParindoN Ki Jaan Bachaate HaiN ...
ReT Ke Ghar Banaane Se Kyaa Faayedaa
Ek Aandhi MeN Woh UjaDh Jaate HaiN ...
Muflisii Ko Abhishaap Naa Samjhnaa "Naresh"
Log KichaD MeN Kamal DuuNdh Laate HaiN ...
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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2011, 07:30:07 PM » |
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Mazaa aa gayaa Nareshji mast gazal hai ye aapki.....   Ye kuchh chand line likhne ka mann ho aayaa.... Ras wahi hai..libaas alag...umeed hai pasand aayega Padh kar teri ye gazal aaj Naresh
Taazaa ho gayee wo puraani yaadein
Wo saagar k teer par banaaye mitti ke ghar
Mittaa Gayee wo sab naam ek alhadd c lehar
Shabd kab keh paate hain dard tere dil ka
Nayan he kehte hain nayano ko haal dil ka
Ho na udaass jo chhu na paya kabhi tare gagan ke
Chhu le dil ko bebason k bane phool wo chaman ke Jab Kabhi Puraane Din Yaad Aate HaiN
AankhoN MeN Aansuu Jhilmeelaate HaiN ...
Apni GhalTiyoN Se GiR Bhi Jaaye Kabhi
ChoT Khaa-ma-Khaa Bahut Khaate HaiN ...
Unse Keh Do YuuN Naa Bulaayaa Kare
Dekhne Waale Ishaara Samajh Jaate HaiN ....
Unhe Kyaa Zaroorat Hai Mandir Jaane Ki
Jo Ghayal ParindoN Ki Jaan Bachaate HaiN ...
ReT Ke Ghar Banaane Se Kyaa Faayedaa
Ek Aandhi MeN Woh UjaDh Jaate HaiN ...
Muflisii Ko Abhishaap Naa Samjhnaa "Naresh"
Log KichaD MeN Kamal DuuNdh Laate HaiN ...
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Unhe Kyaa Zaroorat Hai Mandir Jaane Ki
Jo Ghayal ParindoN Ki Jaan Bachaate HaiN ...
waaaah naresh ji.........
sach kahu to no words for it........bas blank ho gaya hu padkar......its just outstanding ji......special 4th para is just mindblowing......maja aa gaya sahab.....ese hi hume aur poetry padate rahiye.......once again i want to say that it is mindblowing.....
Aapki itnii ijazt afzaai aur hauslaa afzaai kaa bahut bahut shukriya ... janaab ! saath hi koshish ko itnaa pasand karne kaa bhi .. ! khush rahen apna theek se khayaal rakhen ... duaaon ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #12 on: February 10, 2011, 05:56:01 PM » |
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shandaar ghazal Naresh sir ji.
behad shandaar.
Matrix yaara ne jin lines ko indicate kiya wo mere bhi dil ko chu gai.
aaghaz se anzaam tak behtareen alfaaz.
superbbbbbbbbb
Shukriya ... Nirala Ji ! pasandegi aur hauslaa afzaai kaa ! khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ... |
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«Reply #13 on: February 11, 2011, 05:34:06 PM » |
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bahut khubsurat ghazal Naresh ji.......
khush rahe. likhte rahe......
Vipul Ji ... koshish ko pasand karne kaa bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ... ! aise hi aate rahen aage bhi ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... ! |
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