AANSOON KAAM AAYE....................................SAINI

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Mere     ashkoN   pe  aap    muskaaye.
Chaliye kuchh to ye aansooN kaam aaye.

Sabne     baadal   qareeb  se  dekhaa.
Tere   gesoo   hawaa   meN   lahraaye.

Pyaas  barsoN  kee  laut  jaatee  hai.
Teree  unglee  jo  lab  ko choo jaaye.

Vo  sukhanwar  falak  pe jaa pahunche.
Teree  mahfil   meN  jaake  jo  gaaye.

Hamne  dekhaa  hai  ye  siyaasat  meN.
Ek   din  kutte  kaa  bhee  aa  jaaye.

MaiN  bhee  hooN  aadmee  tere jaisaa.
KyooN  mujhe  dekh  kar too ghabraaye.

Teree  mahfil  se  jab se lautaa hai.
Phir  rahaa  ‘saini' tab  se itraaye.

Dr.Surendra Saini  


मेरे    अश्कों    पे आप मुस्काये ।
चलिए कुछ तो ये आँसूं काम आये ॥

सबने    बादल   क़रीब से देखा ।
तेरे     गेसू   हवा में लहराये  ॥

प्यास   बरसों  की लौट जाती है ।
तेरी ऊँगली जो लब को छू जाये  ॥

वो  सुखनवर फ़लक पे जा पहुंचे ।
तेरी महफ़िल  में जाके जो गाये ॥

हमने  देखा है ये  सियासत में ।
एक दिन कुत्ते का भी आ जाये  ॥

मैं    भी  हूँ आदमी तेरे जैसा ।
क्यूँ   मुझे देख कर तू घबराए ॥

तेरी महफ़िल से जब से लौटा है ।
फिर रहा 'सैनी' तब से इतराये ॥

 डाo सुरेन्द्र सैनी  
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2013, 01:21:41 PM »
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Bahut khoooooob
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2013, 01:52:51 PM »
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waah bahut khoob saini sir. badi achchi peshkash rahi aapki yeh. mujhe bahut bahut pasand aayi. khaas yeh do ashaar bahut pasand aaye

Mere     ashkoN   pe  aap    muskaaye.
Chaliye kuchh to ye aansooN kaam aaye.

Sabne     baadal   qareeb   se  dekhe.
Tere   gesoo   hawaa   meN   lahraaye.
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2013, 02:05:37 PM »
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Bohat Bohat Khub Saini Jee!!

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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2013, 02:37:17 PM »
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Sabne     baadal   qareeb   se  dekhe.
Tere   gesoo   hawaa   meN   lahraaye.
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«Reply #5 on: July 08, 2013, 02:55:18 PM »
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मैं    भी  हूँ आदमी तेरे जैसा ।
क्यूँ   मुझे देख कर तू घबराए ॥
Bahut Khoob Sir.
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«Reply #6 on: July 08, 2013, 03:01:55 PM »
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Mere     ashkoN   pe  aap    muskaaye.
Chaliye kuchh to ye aansooN kaam aaye.

Sabne     baadal   qareeb   se  dekhe.
Tere   gesoo   hawaa   meN   lahraaye.

Pyaas  barsoN  kee  laut  jaatee  hai.
Teree  unglee  jo  lab  ko choo jaaye.

Vo  sukhanwar  falak  pe jaa pahunche.
Teree  mahfil   meN  jaake  jo  gaaye.

Hamne  dekhaa  hai  ye  siyaasat  meN.
Ek   din  kutte  kaa  bhee  aa  jaaye.

MaiN  bhee  hooN  aadmee  tere jaisaa.
KyooN  mujhe  dekh  kar too ghabraaye.

Teree  mahfil  se  jab se lautaa hai.
Phir  rahaa  ‘saini' tab  se itraaye.

Dr.Surendra Saini 


मेरे    अश्कों    पे आप मुस्काये ।
चलिए कुछ तो ये आँसूं काम आये ॥

सबने    बादल   क़रीब से देखा ।
तेरे     गेसू   हवा में लहराये  ॥

प्यास   बरसों  की लौट जाती है ।
तेरी ऊँगली जो लब को छू जाये  ॥

वो  सुखनवर फ़लक पे जा पहुंचे ।
तेरी महफ़िल  में जाके जो गाये ॥

हमने  देखा है ये  सियासत में ।
एक दिन कुत्ते का भी आ जाये  ॥

मैं    भी  हूँ आदमी तेरे जैसा ।
क्यूँ   मुझे देख कर तू घबराए ॥

तेरी महफ़िल से जब से लौटा है ।
फिर रहा 'सैनी' तब से इतराये ॥

 डाo सुरेन्द्र सैनी 



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Bahut Bahut Khooooob Saheb......!!!!!!

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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2013, 04:14:25 PM »
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सबने    बादल   क़रीब से देखा ।
तेरे     गेसू   हवा में लहराये  ॥
प्यास   बरसों  की लौट जाती है ।
तेरी ऊँगली जो लब को छू जाये  ॥
Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Saini Sir,
Lazawaab ghazal kahi hai aapne.Meri shubhkaamnaayin kabool kijiye.
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2013, 04:50:32 PM »
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Saini Sahaab Aadaab...!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne bahut khoob... aapki kalaamoN meiN umdaa rawaani rahti hai... khud hi tarannum meiN aa jaati hai aapki kalaam...

Badi achchi gazal rahi jee... is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad o mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

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waah waah waah laajawaab saini jee..Bahut hi khoob kahi ye ghazal..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2013, 06:01:22 PM »
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Mere     ashkoN   pe  aap    muskaaye.
Chaliye kuchh to ye aansooN kaam aaye.

Sabne     baadal   qareeb  se  dekhaa.
Tere   gesoo   hawaa   meN   lahraaye.

Pyaas  barsoN  kee  laut  jaatee  hai.
Teree  unglee  jo  lab  ko choo jaaye.

waah waah Dr.sahab lajwaab likha hai

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waah waah waah Saini Sir, bahut hi khoob, khoobsoorat ghazal hai, 2nd aur 5th sher khususann bahut pasand aaye.
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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2013, 11:00:18 PM »
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Daad hee daad
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bht khoob . doosre sher par khusoosi daad.
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