Aastaan laakh: eik hi jabeen hai: kyaa keejey?

by abdbundeli on May 06, 2009, 03:00:09 PM
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Beywafaa lout, wafaayee ki qasam khaa jaaye!
Kaash, us kee yeh adaa bhi pasand aa jaaye!!

Un key zehn-o-uyoon kaa hi hai jalwah; warnah,
Mujh mein kyaa hai, bhalaa, aisaa, ki, unhain bhaa jaaye?

Mujh ko mousooqee-e-dil sey hai muhabbat un kee;
Ab to lagtaa hai, ki, bas, us ko hi sunaa jaaye!

Dagar hai eik, magar, ham mein bahut dooree hai!
Kaash, un tak, payaam ley, haseen hawaa jaaye!!

Hashra tak raah deykhney kaa waa’adah, kyaa thaa?
Had hai, gar, jaw; to kaho, hashra tak chalaa jaaye!  

Aastaan laakh: eik hi jabeen hai: kyaa keejey?
Yeh safar-e-wasl hai: un bin, na ab rahaa jaaye?

Koun jaaney, ki, kahaan dar hai us key ghar kaa? ‘Abd’,
Reyg hee reyg mukhaatib hai: kyaa kahaa jaaye?

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«Reply #1 on: May 06, 2009, 03:07:28 PM »
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Beywafaa lout, wafaayee ki qasam khaa jaaye!
Kaash, us kee yeh adaa bhi pasand aa jaaye!!

Un key zehn-o-uyoon kaa hi hai jalwah; warnah,
Mujh mein kyaa hai, bhalaa, aisaa, ki, unhain bhaa jaaye?

Mujh ko mousooqee-e-dil sey hai muhabbat un kee;
Ab to lagtaa hai, ki, bas, us ko hi sunaa jaaye!

Dagar hai eik, magar, ham mein bahut dooree hai!
Kaash, un tak, payaam ley, haseen hawaa jaaye!!

Hashra tak raah deykhney kaa waa’adah, kyaa thaa?
Had hai, gar, jaw; to kaho, hashra tak chalaa jaaye! 

Aastaan laakh: eik hi jabeen hai: kyaa keejey?
Yeh safar-e-wasl hai: un bin, na ab rahaa jaaye?

Koun jaaney, ki, kahaan dar hai us key ghar kaa? ‘Abd’,
Reyg hee reyg mukhaatib hai: kyaa kahaa jaaye?

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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji, Lajawaab Umda Kya kya likho taarif me alfaaz hi nahi mil rahe,, bahut pasandh aayi hame aapki ye rachna...God bless u.

Kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi ho,

Ye gamm, ye ruswayi,  ye tanhayi,
Kab tak inn sabko tere bina aur saha jaaye,

Kaash ki aaye ek din tufaan koi iss dil me,
Teri yaadoo.n ke saath saath mujhe bhi baha jaaye,

Hamne to unki jafao se bhi kar li dosti,
Kaash ki unhe hamari mohabbat raas aa jaaye...

Shally.

 
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«Reply #2 on: May 06, 2009, 03:11:03 PM »
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Wah wah Bhoot bahoot khoob ABD Ji

bhoot khoob Shally!
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«Reply #3 on: May 06, 2009, 03:28:56 PM »
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Beywafaa lout, wafaayee ki qasam khaa jaaye!
Kaash, us kee yeh adaa bhi pasand aa jaaye!!

Un key zehn-o-uyoon kaa hi hai jalwah; warnah,
Mujh mein kyaa hai, bhalaa, aisaa, ki, unhain bhaa jaaye?

Mujh ko mousooqee-e-dil sey hai muhabbat un kee;
Ab to lagtaa hai, ki, bas, us ko hi sunaa jaaye!

Dagar hai eik, magar, ham mein bahut dooree hai!
Kaash, un tak, payaam ley, haseen hawaa jaaye!!

Hashra tak raah deykhney kaa waa’adah, kyaa thaa?
Had hai, gar, jaw; to kaho, hashra tak chalaa jaaye! 

Aastaan laakh: eik hi jabeen hai: kyaa keejey?
Yeh safar-e-wasl hai: un bin, na ab rahaa jaaye?

Koun jaaney, ki, kahaan dar hai us key ghar kaa? ‘Abd’,
Reyg hee reyg mukhaatib hai: kyaa kahaa jaaye?

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bahut bahut khob Abd ji
kamaal likha hai aapne...
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aur Shaly dear aapne bhi khoob likha hai...
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«Reply #4 on: May 06, 2009, 03:39:04 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
N good response Shally Ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 06, 2009, 04:17:47 PM »
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Beywafaa lout, wafaayee ki qasam khaa jaaye!
Kaash, us kee yeh adaa bhi pasand aa jaaye!!

Un key zehn-o-uyoon kaa hi hai jalwah; warnah,
Mujh mein kyaa hai, bhalaa, aisaa, ki, unhain bhaa jaaye?

Mujh ko mousooqee-e-dil sey hai muhabbat un kee;
Ab to lagtaa hai, ki, bas, us ko hi sunaa jaaye!

Dagar hai eik, magar, ham mein bahut dooree hai!
Kaash, un tak, payaam ley, haseen hawaa jaaye!!

Hashra tak raah deykhney kaa waa’adah, kyaa thaa?
Had hai, gar, jaw; to kaho, hashra tak chalaa jaaye! 

Aastaan laakh: eik hi jabeen hai: kyaa keejey?
Yeh safar-e-wasl hai: un bin, na ab rahaa jaaye?

Koun jaaney, ki, kahaan dar hai us key ghar kaa? ‘Abd’,
Reyg hee reyg mukhaatib hai: kyaa kahaa jaaye?

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Waah Bohot Hi Khoob Babu Ji...aur iss ghazal main to mera naam bhi aaya hai Usual Smile

Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal hai !!
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«Reply #6 on: May 06, 2009, 04:34:10 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji, Lajawaab Umda Kya kya likho taarif me alfaaz hi nahi mil rahe,, bahut pasandh aayi hame aapki ye rachna...God bless u.
Kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi ho,

Ye gamm, ye ruswayi,  ye tanhayi,
Kab tak inn sabko tere bina aur saha jaaye,

Kaash ki aaye ek din tufaan koi iss dil me,
Teri yaadoo.n ke saath saath mujhe bhi baha jaaye,

Hamne to unki jafao se bhi kar li dosti,
Kaash ki unhe hamari mohabbat raas aa jaaye...

Shally.

 

Woh to, woh hain! Kyaa kahoon?
Un ki, wahee pasand!
Jo dil ko tarjeeh deyn;
Hotey hain woh chand!

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Wah wah Bhoot bahoot khoob ABD Ji
bhoot khoob Shally!

Thanks a lot, Sophi!
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2009, 04:41:33 PM »
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bahut bahut khob Abd ji
kamaal likha hai aapne...
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aur Shaly dear aapne bhi khoob likha hai...
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diya786 ji! Thanks a lot!
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Bahut Khoob Abd Ji
N good response Shally Ji

Thanks a lot, Rajesh Harish ji!
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Waah Bohot Hi Khoob Babu Ji...aur iss ghazal main to mera naam bhi aaya hai Usual Smile

Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal hai !!

Celmira! The mothers are omnipresent!! Thanks a lot!
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Khoob bahut khoob Bundeli Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
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bahoot khoob Abd ji!!!
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Khoob bahut khoob Bundeli Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI
bahoot khoob Abd ji!!!

Thanks a lot, SARVESH RASTOGI ji!/Pooja ji
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