Ab bhi baaqee hai wasl-e-khaas kee umeed, 'abd',

by abdbundeli on August 16, 2009, 08:09:02 AM
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Dosto!
Pahley do asha'ar, shaayad bahut pahiley, post kiye gaye they; wahee ab (Matley key sheir mein thorhey badlaaw key saath.) gazal bankar peish hain! Mulaahazah farmaayen!


Aab aankhoun kaa, unhain bhi to pilaatee hogee!
Yaad meyree bhi unhain baarhaa aatee hogee!!

Jab kabhee khwaab-e-wasl, ro key jagaataa hogaa;
Neend ki rooh-e-paak aa key manaatee hogee!!

Baad-e-shab, baad-e-shafaq ban key, nigaahoun sey guzar;
Jaagtey khwaab bharey din ko sulaatee hogee!

Mein idhar jaagtaa rahaa hun karwateyn leytaa;
Hijra kee hook unhain bhi to jagaatee hogee!

Subah sey raat, raat sey subah hotee hogee;
Barq-e-tanhaayee unhain bhi to sataatee hogee!

Sadaa-e-dil yahaan sey jaa, waheen rahtee hogee;
Baarahaa, dil kaa shor aur barhhaatee hogee!

Jigar mein kuchh, yahaan aaney ko machaltaa hoga;
Muraad har lamhey, rah-rah key uthaatee hogee!

Ham, agar hotey beywafaa, to, mar gaye hotey!
Aatish-e-jarh hai, jo unko jalaatee hogee!!

Ab bhi baaqee hai wasl-e-khaas kee umeed, 'abd',
Khizr kee rooh unhain raah dikhaatee hogee!


                                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2009, 08:32:29 AM »
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bahut achche sir ji
ek aur khoobsurat ghazal aapki rachnao main izaaafa karti huyi
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2009, 10:23:50 AM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 16, 2009, 08:32:29 AM
bahut achche sir ji
ek aur khoobsurat ghazal aapki rachnao main izaaafa karti huyi
Thanks a lot, Saahil!
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2009, 11:06:13 AM »
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WAH WAH BUNDELI JI... WAH WAH


JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2009, 12:33:35 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 16, 2009, 11:06:13 AM
WAH WAH BUNDELI JI... WAH WAH

JASBIR SINGH
Thanks JASBIR SINGH ji!
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 12:40:25 PM »
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kya likhtein hain abd sahab
Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 12:58:39 PM »
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Quote from: thegrimreaper on August 16, 2009, 12:40:25 PM
kya likhtein hain abd sahab
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Thanks thegrimreaper ji!
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2009, 04:54:21 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 16, 2009, 08:09:02 AM
Dosto!
Pahley do asha'ar, shaayad bahut pahiley, post kiye gaye they; wahee ab (Matley key sheir mein thorhey badlaaw key saath.) gazal bankar peish hain! Mulaahazah farmaayen!


Aab aankhoun kaa, unhain bhi to pilaatee hogee!
Yaad meyree bhi unhain baarhaa aatee hogee!!

Jab kabhee khwaab-e-wasl, ro key jagaataa hogaa;
Neend ki rooh-e-paak aa key manaatee hogee!!

Baad-e-shab, baad-e-shafaq ban key, nigaahoun sey guzar;
Jaagtey khwaab bharey din ko sulaatee hogee!

Mein idhar jaagtaa rahaa hun karwateyn leytaa;
Hijra kee hook unhain bhi to jagaatee hogee!

Subah sey raat, raat sey subah hotee hogee;
Barq-e-tanhaayee unhain bhi to sataatee hogee!

Sadaa-e-dil yahaan sey jaa, waheen rahtee hogee;
Baarahaa, dil kaa shor aur barhhaatee hogee!

Jigar mein kuchh, yahaan aaney ko machaltaa hoga;
Muraad har lamhey, rah-rah key uthaatee hogee!

Ham, agar hotey beywafaa, to, mar gaye hotey!
Aatish-e-jarh hai, jo unko jalaatee hogee!!

Ab bhi baaqee hai wasl-e-khaas kee umeed, 'abd',
Khizr kee rooh unhain raah dikhaatee hogee!


                                 - abd bundeli


Bahut umda peshkash uncle ji  Thumbs UP

Bahut dhur aa gayi hu tere ghar se
Tera didar ko her nazar tarse

Vo shola ru guzar aaye jidhar se
Dhuwan se ute her chukat se

Hua hai aakash bhi aaj apna dushman
Sulagti aag si ber se a-ber se

Mukhi(Niwasi)us basti ke hai sab baraber
Sada khamosh ute her kaber se

Karam kare agar khud aa bhi jaye
Na mangenge kabhi kuch sitamgar se

Shareek-e-bazam jo hote they her shab
Chura kar aankh nikle hai "Roja" se.


(Shareek-e-bazam = Sabha mein sammalit hona)
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2009, 04:59:53 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 16, 2009, 08:09:02 AM
Dosto!
Pahley do asha'ar, shaayad bahut pahiley, post kiye gaye they; wahee ab (Matley key sheir mein thorhey badlaaw key saath.) gazal bankar peish hain! Mulaahazah farmaayen!


Aab aankhoun kaa, unhain bhi to pilaatee hogee!
Yaad meyree bhi unhain baarhaa aatee hogee!!

Jab kabhee khwaab-e-wasl, ro key jagaataa hogaa;
Neend ki rooh-e-paak aa key manaatee hogee!!

Baad-e-shab, baad-e-shafaq ban key, nigaahoun sey guzar;
Jaagtey khwaab bharey din ko sulaatee hogee!

Mein idhar jaagtaa rahaa hun karwateyn leytaa;
Hijra kee hook unhain bhi to jagaatee hogee!

Subah sey raat, raat sey subah hotee hogee;
Barq-e-tanhaayee unhain bhi to sataatee hogee!

Sadaa-e-dil yahaan sey jaa, waheen rahtee hogee;
Baarahaa, dil kaa shor aur barhhaatee hogee!

Jigar mein kuchh, yahaan aaney ko machaltaa hoga;
Muraad har lamhey, rah-rah key uthaatee hogee!

Ham, agar hotey beywafaa, to, mar gaye hotey!
Aatish-e-jarh hai, jo unko jalaatee hogee!!

Ab bhi baaqee hai wasl-e-khaas kee umeed, 'abd',
Khizr kee rooh unhain raah dikhaatee hogee!


                                 - abd bundeli


Bahut khoobsurat Ghazal hai, ABD JI! Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2009, 05:01:52 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 16, 2009, 04:54:21 PM
Bahut umda peshkash uncle ji  Thumbs UP

Bahut dhur aa gayi hu tere ghar se
Tera didar ko her nazar tarse

Vo shola ru guzar aaye jidhar se
Dhuwan se ute her chukat se

Hua hai aakash bhi aaj apna dushman
Sulagti aag si ber se a-ber se

Mukhi(Niwasi)us basti ke hai sab baraber
Sada khamosh ute her kaber se

Karam kare agar khud aa bhi jaye
Na mangenge kabhi kuch sitamgar se

Shareek-e-bazam jo hote they her shab
Chura kar aankh nikle hai "Roja" se.


(Shareek-e-bazam = Sabha mein sammalit hona)



Bahut khoob, Roja Ji! Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2009, 05:06:01 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on August 16, 2009, 05:01:52 PM
Bahut khoob, Roja Ji! Applause Applause
Thank you very much dear Deepati
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2009, 05:15:48 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 16, 2009, 04:54:21 PM
Bahut umda peshkash uncle ji  Thumbs UP

Bahut dhur aa gayi hu tere ghar se
Tera didar ko her nazar tarse

Vo shola ru guzar aaye jidhar se
Dhuwan se ute her chukat se

Hua hai aakash bhi aaj apna dushman
Sulagti aag si ber se a-ber se

Mukhi(Niwasi)us basti ke hai sab baraber
Sada khamosh ute her kaber se

Karam kare agar khud aa bhi jaye
Na mangenge kabhi kuch sitamgar se

Shareek-e-bazam jo hote they her shab
Chura kar aankh nikle hai "Roja" se.


(Shareek-e-bazam = Sabha mein sammalit hona)



Thanks a lot, Roja!

Un bin jeewan wyarth hai,
Kuchh bhee karo upaaya!
Raat na aaye; bhaley hee,
Din aaye; din jaaya!

Baadal barsey; darash ko
Tarsey, barsey nain!
Andhiyaaraa chaayaa ghanaa:
Divas huye hain rain!!

              - 'Ramwatiya'/abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2009, 05:21:24 AM »
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Quote from: Deepati on August 16, 2009, 04:59:53 PM
Bahut khoobsurat Ghazal hai, ABD JI! Applause Applause
Thanks Deepati!
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«Reply #13 on: August 17, 2009, 03:18:05 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 17, 2009, 05:15:48 AM
Thanks a lot, Roja!

Un bin jeewan wyarth hai,
Kuchh bhee karo upaaya!
Raat na aaye; bhaley hee,
Din aaye; din jaaya!

Baadal barsey; darash ko
Tarsey, barsey nain!
Andhiyaaraa chaayaa ghanaa:
Divas huye hain rain!!

              - 'Ramwatiya'/abd bundeli

Gam ka aalam hai shab-e-tanhayi hai
Dard bankar yaad unki aayi hai

Ramwatiya, aao kahe 'Khushamudeed'
Apne ghar mein gam ki baraat aayi hai

"Roja" ke ghar mein khushi ka kaam kya?
Gam se uski gaadi chalti aayi hai..
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«Reply #14 on: August 17, 2009, 04:23:45 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 17, 2009, 03:18:05 PM

Gam ka aalam hai shab-e-tanhayi hai
Dard bankar yaad unki aayi hai

Ramwatiya, aao kahe 'Khushamudeed'
Apne ghar mein gam ki baraat aayi hai

"Roja" ke ghar mein khushi ka kaam kya?
Gam se uski gaadi chalti aayi hai..

Thanks Roja! I'll be always there; if not physically, then through my poems, most of which are addressed to my beloved.

Woh aaye yadi dwaar par,
Deynaa usey na rok!
Swaagat ho aisaa, ki, fir
Ho har wipal ashok!

          - abd bundeli
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