ABHI CHIRAGH GUL NA KAR ..........................HASAN

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Abhi   Chiragh   gul  na  kar , abhi   sahar   naheeN   hui ,
AndheroN  par   abhi   ujaalon    ki   mehar   naheeN   hui

NazakatoN   ke   sath   jeena   thha   kathin   mere   liye ,
GuloN   ke   sath   isi   liye   kabhi   guzar  naheeN   hui

Jo poochha 'Kaisi aap hain' , to chal deeN  kah ke 'theek hooN'
Kisi   se    baat   meri   itni    mukhtasar    naheeN    hui
  
Irada - o - amal   hoN   nek   to   mileiN   haiN   ManzileiN ,
Kabhi  bhi  shaakh    koshishoN   ki   be - samar   nahi  hui

NaheeN   maiN  Khoobroo , buri   par  itni   shakl  bhi  naheeN ,
Meri   taraf   magar    kabhi   teri    nazar    naheeN   hui

Bus   eik  Dil   mera   na   jaane   kaise   chori  ho   gaya ,
NaheeN   to  ,  aur   koi   cheez  idhar  udhar   naheeN   hui

Koi   bata   de  unko    saansein   gin   raha   hai  abb ' Hasan ' ,
Naheen  to  yeh   kaheiN   ge   woh   hamein   khabar  naheen  hui






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sahar = subah ; Mukhtasar = short ;
samar = fruits ; khoobru = handsome
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2012, 05:56:04 AM »
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waah waah bhaijaan badee khoobsoorat ghazal se nawaazaa hai mahfil ko aap ko dheron daad aur mubaarak baad ramzaan ke is muqaddas maheene men isee tarah se khush rahiye aur hame bhee apne kalaaam se rakhiye darasl ek saheb ne mujhe kahaa thaa ki vo ramjaan men yo yndia ko login naheen karte maine aapke baare men bhee ye soch liyaa haalaaki main ye bhee sochtaaa tahaa ki aap esee daiyaanoosee soch ke naheen hain khair aap ke n hone se jo logon me maayoosee thee vo to kam se kam door hui.
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2012, 06:25:06 AM »
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Vaah vaah vaah
Bahut khoob..hamesha ki tarah
Shaandaar ghajal. 2nd sher aur maqte ka javaab nahee..
Dil DAAD haajir hai aapke liye.
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2012, 06:43:40 AM »
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Abhi   Chiragh   gul  na  kar , abhi   sahar   naheeN   hui ,
AndheroN  par   abhi   ujaalon    ki   mehar   naheeN   hui

NazakatoN   ke   sath   jeena   thha   kathin   mere   liye ,
GuloN   ke   sath   isi   liye   kabhi   guzar  naheeN   hui

Jo poochha 'Kaisi aap hain' , to chal deeN  kah ke 'theek hooN'
Kisi   se    baat   meri   itni    mukhtasar    naheeN    hui
   
Irada - o - amal   hoN   nek   to   mileiN   haiN   ManzileiN ,
Kabhi  bhi  shaakh    koshishoN   ki   be - samar   nahi  hui

NaheeN   maiN  Khoobroo , buri   par  itni   shakl  bhi  naheeN ,
Meri   taraf   magar    kabhi   teri    nazar    naheeN   hui

Bus   eik  Dil   mera   na   jaane   kaise   chori  ho   gaya ,
NaheeN   to  ,  aur   koi   cheez  idhar  udhar   naheeN   hui

Koi   bata   de  unko    saansein   gin   raha   hai  abb ' Hasan ' ,
Naheen  to  yeh   kaheiN   ge   woh   hamein   khabar  naheen  hui






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sahar = subah ; Mukhtasar = short ;
samar = fruits ; khoobru = handsome

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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2012, 07:25:48 AM »
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Abhi   Chiragh   gul  na  kar , abhi   sahar   naheeN   hui ,
AndheroN  par   abhi   ujaalon    ki   mehar   naheeN   hui

NazakatoN   ke   sath   jeena   thha   kathin   mere   liye ,
GuloN   ke   sath   isi   liye   kabhi   guzar  naheeN   hui

Jo poochha 'Kaisi aap hain' , to chal deeN  kah ke 'theek hooN'
Kisi   se    baat   meri   itni    mukhtasar    naheeN    hui
   
Irada - o - amal   hoN   nek   to   mileiN   haiN   ManzileiN ,
Kabhi  bhi  shaakh    koshishoN   ki   be - samar   nahi  hui

NaheeN   maiN  Khoobroo , buri   par  itni   shakl  bhi  naheeN ,
Meri   taraf   magar    kabhi   teri    nazar    naheeN   hui

Bus   eik  Dil   mera   na   jaane   kaise   chori  ho   gaya ,
NaheeN   to  ,  aur   koi   cheez  idhar  udhar   naheeN   hui

Koi   bata   de  unko    saansein   gin   raha   hai  abb ' Hasan ' ,
Naheen  to  yeh   kaheiN   ge   woh   hamein   khabar  naheen  hui






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sahar = subah ; Mukhtasar = short ;
samar = fruits ; khoobru = handsome


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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2012, 07:44:30 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2012, 07:47:59 AM »
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bahut khub hasan sahab
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2012, 08:10:44 AM »
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bahut khoob Hasan Ji, makta bahut khoobsurat likha hai, dheron daad
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«Reply #9 on: July 24, 2012, 11:39:00 AM »
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bahut khoob sir
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«Reply #10 on: July 24, 2012, 12:24:24 PM »
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har tarf se khusi mehsus hui aapki wapsi aur aapka behad umda qalam........... thank u so much hasan ji.............

aur qalaam ke liye to yahi kahenge ki lajawab bemisal har bar ki tarah
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«Reply #11 on: July 24, 2012, 12:28:56 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hasan saheb, mubarakbad.
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2012, 01:16:13 PM »
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Saini ji, bahut bahut shukriya .
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«Reply #13 on: July 24, 2012, 10:03:25 PM »
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Sir, bohut hi lajwab ghazl kahi hai, sir dil ko behad musarrat hui aapki ghazal padhkar. aur bohut sukoon mila aapke wapis aane se . dheroon daad qubool kijiye, aur ramadan mubarak ho aapko...
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«Reply #14 on: July 25, 2012, 04:55:00 AM »
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Vaah vaah vaah
Bahut khoob..hamesha ki tarah
Shaandaar ghajal. 2nd sher aur maqte ka javaab nahee..
Dil DAAD haajir hai aapke liye.
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Hausla  afzai  ke liye bahut bahut shukriya aur duaaein.Hasan
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