Abra pur-aab ghane, chaandnee pai hain bhaaree!

by abdbundeli on August 18, 2014, 11:11:25 PM
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Shab guzaaree hai, binaa yaar ke pahloo mein rahe!
Beqaraaree hai, binaa pyaar ke pahloo mein rahe!!

Abra pur-aab ghane, chaandnee pai hain bhaaree;
Zeest haaree hai, binaa yaar ke pahloo mein rahe!

Ab kahaan raah-e-talab mein saraa-e-shab1 khojen;
Reig taaree2 hai, binaa gaar3 ke pahloo mein rahe?

Raahrou4 past, daaman-e-madad ko hai majboor;
Ashk-zaaree hai, binaa jaar5 ke pahloo mein rahe!

Jaw talak roshanee hai, par, 'abd' ko taareekee;
Iztiraaree6 hai, binaa daar7 ke pahloo mein rahe!

1-   Inn for (staying through) night;
2-   Overcast & lingering around;
3-   One, who could do some thing (to avert the unwanted);
4-   One, who is on a journey ( say, a tourist);
5-   A neighbour (or some one who may provide a shelter);
6-   Restlessness (due to profound longing for some one);
7-   House (place for a shelter).

          - abd bundeli

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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2014, 12:50:01 AM »
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waaaaaaaah bahut khoob, dheron daad.
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2014, 06:04:32 AM »
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 Applause Applause bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: August 19, 2014, 10:14:34 AM »
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वाह....वाह....

बहुत ही उम्दा....
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waaaaaaaah bahut khoob, dheron daad.
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Surindarn ji!
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«Reply #5 on: August 19, 2014, 11:35:56 AM »
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Applause Applause bahut khoob
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Saini ji!
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2014, 11:36:30 AM »
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वाह....वाह....

बहुत ही उम्दा....
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Amit ji!
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2014, 02:18:52 PM »
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wah wah
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«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2014, 02:29:59 PM »
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Abd Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoobsurat aur dilfareb kalaam kahi hai jee...
Bade hi khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafzoN meiN baNdha hai aapne...

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #9 on: August 19, 2014, 02:47:30 PM »
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Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
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«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2014, 02:48:46 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause...

bahut khub abdji
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«Reply #11 on: August 19, 2014, 06:46:17 PM »
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wah wah

Shukriyah, Nandbahu ji!
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Abd Jee Aadaab...!

Bahut khoobsurat aur dilfareb kalaam kahi hai jee...
Bade hi khoob khayaaloN ko umdaa lafzoN meiN baNdha hai aapne...

Bahut khoob janab bahut khoob... Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

Bahut-bahut shukriyah,  ParwaaZ ji! Namaskaar!
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«Reply #13 on: August 19, 2014, 06:48:05 PM »
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Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Thanks!
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«Reply #14 on: August 19, 2014, 06:48:57 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause...

bahut khub abdji

Shukriyah, Mann ji!
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