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aditya04

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अँधेरे का दामन छोड़ , बड़ी दूर से आती है
दरवाज़े पर आकर , हलके से खटखटाती है

सूरज का संदेशा , मेरी खिड़की तक पहुंचाती है
फिर थप-थपा के प्यार से मुझे नींद से उठाती है

मीठी मीठी तपिश तन मन में भर जाती है
उजली-सुनहरी धुप जब आँगन में मेरे आती है

बाँहों में भर कर खुशियाँ वो संग लाती है
युहीं परदे की ओट से झांकती वो मुस्कुराती है अक्सर।


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khamosh_aawaaz

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Re: Akksar

«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2015, 01:43:19 PM »

Quote from: aditya04 on July 10, 2015, 01:27:13 PM

gud


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Ram Krishan Rastogi

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Re: Akksar

«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2015, 02:28:25 PM »

बहुत ही सुंदर रचना ढेरो दाद स्वीकार करे -क्या आप जानते वो कौन है -वह है सूरज की किरण .


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Re: Akksar

«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2015, 03:40:19 PM »

Waah keep it up


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Re: Akksar

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Re: Akksar

«Reply #5 on: July 10, 2015, 08:15:07 PM »

waah very nice, welome.
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Re: Akksar

«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2015, 12:57:48 AM »

waah waah bahut khoob


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amit_prakash_meet

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Re: Akksar

«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2015, 04:02:22 AM »

बहुत खूब.....


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my rule no type no life and ,i m happy single

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Re: Akksar

«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2015, 10:12:26 AM »

bohat khubbbbbbb wellcome to u Yoindia Shayariadab family


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kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

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