Apne Honton Se Gungunale Mujhe...!!

by Talat on May 12, 2010, 06:50:55 AM
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2010, 06:59:32 AM »
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Waah Talat ji Waah...!!! Aapke ghazal me ek alag sa hi jaadu rehta hai. Ek baar padh ke mann nahi bharta, baar baar padhne ka mann karta hai. Ab bhi is ghazal ko maine 5 baar padha tab jaake comment likh raha hoon. Ab fir se padhne ka mann ho raha hai. Bahut khoobsurat likhti hain aap. Bahut hi pyaara. Mujhe hamesha se aapke poems ka intzaar rehta hai. Yunhi likhte rahiye jisse humein bhi kuch sikhne ko mil sake. bahut bahut shukriya itna khoobsurat ghazal likhne ke liye aur yahaan share karne k liye....!!!

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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2010, 08:05:49 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai      Celmira ji......

Mere sapno main aane wale
Raaton ki neend udane wale
Mere dil ko jeet ne wale
mujhko geet samajh ne wale
Apne baahon main sula le mujhe
Apne Honton Se Gungunale Mujhe....

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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2010, 08:15:32 AM »
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waah bhayi waah bahut hi khumar mein dubi ghazal pesh ki hai apne celmira ji...bahut hi umda peshaksh hai...
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2010, 08:26:19 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob!!!!!

Talat Dost, bahut Hi khoobsurat Aur Maasumiyat Se Bhare Ehsaaso Ko Lafzon Mein Baandha Hai Aapne...

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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2010, 08:35:19 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2010, 09:21:53 AM »
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DOATI RAAT SE HUI AISI.......BEHTREEN DR SAHIBAA Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: May 12, 2010, 10:30:28 AM »
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miiiiiiiind bloooooowing...........

bahut khub talat ji..... icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2010, 12:40:46 PM »
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kya kaha jaaye aapki is ghazal ke baare mai, sar se pa tak ek ajeeb khumaar se labraiz ghazal, bala ki saadgi hai aapke andaaz mai mushkil se mushkil baat badi asaani se keh daiti hain, kuch ashaar zehen mai aapki ye tehreer pad kar aaye magr isliyn nhi likh rha hun ki makhmal par taat ka paiwand wala hisaab ho jaayega, bhut khoob aur bhut hi khoob, aapki tehreero.N ka intezaar rehta hai, daad hazir hai qubool keejiye



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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2010, 02:58:34 AM »
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Wow Talat ji,hamesha ke tarah bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.kahena toh bahut kuch chahti hoon aapke tareef mein,par ye khambaqt zuban saath nahi deti,
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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2010, 05:49:48 AM »
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Bohat Khoobsurat Ghazal Nazar Ki Hai Aapne Celmira Ji
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«Reply #11 on: May 13, 2010, 10:39:46 AM »
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Talat di.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Dil ko Chhoo jane wale alfaaz Likhe hain aapne.. Bhaut Hi Pyaari aur Lajawab peshkash hai... Daad Kubool karen.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2010, 08:51:21 AM »
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Wah bahot khoob ghazal likhi hai Talat ji. Ghazal goi ka hunar parwaan chadh raha hai, ye is ghazal se zahir hota hai. Ab to badhta hi jaayega zor-e-qalam aur zyada. Marhaba.
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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2010, 04:48:23 PM »
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Cara ji aap ne bhi kamaal ke likha.great lines icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 28, 2010, 02:51:04 PM »
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Hi Talat,
Bohot hi khubsurat peshkash hai !!!

It is really a very beautiful ghazal.

Again, the last sher is awesome.
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