ASAR.....A.B

by adil bechain on November 24, 2009, 12:55:45 PM
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                   NIGAAH MERI AAJ USNEY BEZUBAA KAR DIAA,
                  BHARI MEHFIL MAIN MUJHEY TANHAA KAR DIAA,
                  
                  KHO JAATEY HAIN RISHTEY SAAREY AAKAR YAHAAN,
                  QABR KO SABNEY MERI  SUNAA KAR DIAA,

                  THAA EHSAAS ZINDAGI KEY 'PALON' KAA KABHI,
                  JAZBAAT MEREY AAJ USNEY FANAA KAR DIAA,
            
                  KUCH ISS TARAH SEY DAGAA KIYA HAI MUJSEY,
                  BHATKEY HUEY KO MERAA RAHNUMAA KAR DIAA,

                  NAHIN TOOT TEY TAAREY FALAK KEY AAJ BECHAIN,
                  RAAT KEY ANDHEREY KO USNEY BADNUMAA KAR DIAA...!!! sad7
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«Reply #1 on: November 24, 2009, 02:48:07 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2009, 12:07:36 AM »
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Wah very touching and beautiful gazal AB ji,lovely creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2009, 03:31:22 AM »
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Just wonderful AB Ji
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2009, 06:38:01 AM »
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thank u rishi ji
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Wah very touching and beautiful gazal AB ji,lovely creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank u madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2009, 06:39:01 AM »
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Just wonderful AB Ji

thank u harish ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 09, 2010, 08:19:39 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: January 15, 2010, 06:23:59 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

THANX
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«Reply #9 on: February 02, 2010, 09:05:18 AM »
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behad achi ghazal likhi hai aapne Adil dear last two shers are very good
bahut khoob

thank u kaash sahab
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«Reply #10 on: February 02, 2010, 10:23:13 AM »
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                  NIGAAH USNEY MERI AAJ BEZUBAN KAR DIAA,
                  BHARI MEHFIL MAIN MUJHEY TANHAA KAR DIAA,
                   
                  MIT JAATEY HAIN RISHTEY SAREY YAHAN PER,
                  MUJHI KO USNEY MUJH SEY JUDAA KAR DIAA,

                  EK EHSAAS THAA ZINDAGI KEY 'PALON' KAA,
                  MEREY JAZBAAT USNEY AAJ FANAA KAR DIAA,
             
                  KUCH ISS TARAH SEY DAGAA KIYA HAI USNEY,
                  BHATKEY HUEY KO MERAA RAHNUMAA KAR DIAA,

                  TOOT TEY NAHIN TAAREY FALAK KEY AAJ BECHAIN,
                  RAAT KEY ANDHEREY KO USNEY BADNUMAA KAR DIAA...!!!

Bahut achchhy Bechain ji

Bewafai ki usne to had kar diya,
Sukriya bewafa! Sukriya! Sukriya!

Keep on Very Nice creation....
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«Reply #11 on: February 02, 2010, 06:35:23 PM »
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Bahut achchhy Bechain ji

Bewafai ki usne to had kar diya,
Sukriya bewafa! Sukriya! Sukriya!

Keep on Very Nice creation....

THANK U PANDEY JI
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«Reply #12 on: March 11, 2010, 06:23:43 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: March 12, 2010, 06:27:37 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx
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«Reply #14 on: March 12, 2010, 06:43:02 PM »
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Wah wah Adil sahab bahut purkashish aur khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai aapne. Tasuvvaraat ki unchi parwaaz qabile tareef hai. Agar aap ye ghazal behr mein likhte to chaar chaand lag jate.
                  NIGAAH USNEY MERI AAJ BEZUBAA KAR DIAA,
                  BHARI MEHFIL MAIN MUJHEY TANHAA KAR DIAA,
                   
                  MIT JAATEY HAIN RISHTEY SAREY YAHAN PER,
                  MUJHI KO USNEY MUJH SEY JUDAA KAR DIAA,

                  EK EHSAAS THAA ZINDAGI KEY 'PALON' KAA,
                  MEREY JAZBAAT USNEY AAJ FANAA KAR DIAA,
             
                  KUCH ISS TARAH SEY DAGAA KIYA HAI USNEY,
                  BHATKEY HUEY KO MERAA RAHNUMAA KAR DIAA,

                  TOOT TEY NAHIN TAAREY FALAK KEY AAJ BECHAIN,
                  RAAT KEY ANDHEREY KO USNEY BADNUMAA KAR DIAA...!!! sad7
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