Ashkon se likhun ghazal..."sahal".

by sahal on July 28, 2013, 05:59:25 PM
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              Ashkon se likhun ghazal..."sahal".

Ashkon se likhun ghazal jo haal-e-dil se mile,
Lafz kuch asaani se ,to kuch mushkil se mile.

Ye raat ki taariki mere dil ki tanhai jaisi hai,
Dhadknon ki khamoshi bilkul saahil se mile.

shouk kahan Bazm mein kisi aur se milne ka,
Unse milne ki khatir hum ahle-mehfil se mile.

Tamanna jagi thi marne ki apne dil  mein to,
Beparwah hoker hum jake apne qaatil se mile.

Raahon ki uljhan,rehnumaon ki fiker liye jab,
“Sahal”tere dar pe pahunche to apni manzil se mile,
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2013, 06:20:32 PM »
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waah waah waah bohut khub janab bohut umda peshkash
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2013, 06:26:48 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on July 28, 2013, 06:20:32 PM
waah waah waah bohut khub janab bohut umda peshkash
Thankyou ! saahil.
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2013, 06:32:31 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on July 28, 2013, 05:59:25 PM

              Ashkon se likhun ghazal..."sahal".

Ashkon se likhun ghazal jo haal-e-dil se mile,
Lafz kuch asaani se ,to kuch mushkil se mile.

Ye raat ki taariki mere dil ki tanhai jaisi hai,
Dhadknon ki khamoshi bilkul saahil se mile.

shouk kahan Bazm mein kisi aur se milne ka,
Unse milne ki khatir hum ahle-mehfil se mile.

Tamanna jagi thi marne ki apne dil  mein to,
Beparwah hoker hum jake apne qaatil se mile.

Raahon ki uljhan,rehnumaon ki fiker liye jab,
“Sahal”tere dar pe pahunche to apni manzil se mile,


with rau nice,sir
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2013, 06:41:13 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on July 28, 2013, 05:59:25 PM

              Ashkon se likhun ghazal..."sahal".

Ashkon se likhun ghazal jo haal-e-dil se mile,
Lafz kuch asaani se ,to kuch mushkil se mile.

waah waah bahut bahut khoob

Ye raat ki taariki mere dil ki tanhai jaisi hai,
Dhadknon ki khamoshi bilkul saahil se mile.

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

shouk kahan Bazm mein kisi aur se milne ka,
Unse milne ki khatir hum ahle-mehfil se mile.

Yeh kiske liye hai sahal  Winking Winking Winking

Tamanna jagi thi marne ki apne dil  mein to,
Beparwah hoker hum jake apne qaatil se mile.

kya baat hai

Raahon ki uljhan,rehnumaon ki fiker liye jab,
“Sahal”tere dar pe pahunche to apni manzil se mile,

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Waaaaaaaaah sahal bahut bahut khoob. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad. ek rau ke saath.
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wow nice
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2013, 06:54:28 PM »
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with rau nice,sir
Thankyou ! marhoom sahab,,means alot.,

Rau ke liye alag se shukriya.
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Quote from: aqsh on July 28, 2013, 06:41:13 PM
Waaaaaaaaah sahal bahut bahut khoob. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad. ek rau ke saath.
Thankyou ! Aqsh ji ,,,bohut bohut shukriya ,,waqt dene ke liye ,
aur apki daad aur Rau bhi qubool kiya ,,shukriya ke saath.
jazakallah
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wow nice
Thankyou ! jyuthika ,,
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2013, 07:16:00 PM »
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MashaAllah bahot khooooooob bhai, ye to ghazab hai,,,
Shouk kahan Bazm mein kisi aur se milne ka,
Unse milne ki khatir hum ahle-mehfil se mile.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 28, 2013, 07:30:17 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
lovely
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«Reply #11 on: July 28, 2013, 07:32:05 PM »
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soooo good.....lovely creation
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«Reply #12 on: July 28, 2013, 11:29:07 PM »
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Matla bahut khoobsurat hai.
umda peshkash Applause
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«Reply #13 on: July 29, 2013, 03:39:53 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on July 28, 2013, 05:59:25 PM

              Ashkon se likhun ghazal..."sahal".

Ashkon se likhun ghazal jo haal-e-dil se mile,
Lafz kuch asaani se ,to kuch mushkil se mile.
mere paas lafzo.n kikami nahin hai 24 ghante itna bolti hoon main ki kya khoon lafz bhi thhak jaate hain . mujh se le liya karo . ashq se likhne ki zaroorat nahin hai sahal Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Ye raat ki taariki mere dil ki tanhai jaisi hai,
Dhadknon ki khamoshi bilkul saahil se mile.
lekin meri harkat to samamder ki maujo.n si hai to khamoshi kahaan rati hai icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
shouk kahan Bazm mein kisi aur se milne ka,
Unse milne ki khatir hum ahle-mehfil se mile.
main chhup ke baithi hui thi per tum mujhe khoj hi nahin paaye tumhaari badkismati icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Tamanna jagi thi marne ki apne dil  mein to,
Beparwah hoker hum jake apne qaatil se mile.
main ne koshish ki per maar na saki tumhaari miskin si soorat dekh ke Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Raahon ki uljhan,rehnumaon ki fiker liye jab,
“Sahal”tere dar pe pahunche to apni manzil se mile,

mere dar ko kitnon ne apni manzil banaai hui hai. first come first surve Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


bahut khoob......!
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«Reply #14 on: July 29, 2013, 04:42:14 AM »
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Waah Waah Kya Baat Hai.
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