aur kya karta ~~ saahil

by salil2002 on August 04, 2009, 10:56:00 AM
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nishaan mita daale maine mohabbat k apni
dard dil main rakh k aur kya karta

khaton main likhi thi dastaan-e-tulaanii* apni
main oos ko padta , toh pad k kya karta

hansi na lautegi yeh keh gaye yaar mere
main hansta , bhi toh hans k kya karta

mehfil ka mahol tha bada giraft main
na sajata teri mehfil toh aur kya karta


shaam gujar jaati hai  mujhse teri baat chhed kar
shab bhi kehti rahi jaane ko, main ruk k aur kya karta

qatil ka kehnahi sahi hai,kii woh khatawaar nahi
khatm tha SAAHIL kab se, woh QATL na karta toh aur kya karta



tulaani - long
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2009, 11:04:01 AM »
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Wah Saahil ji bahut khoob,touching,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2009, 11:51:54 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Salil
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2010, 01:59:29 PM »
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thnks alot celmira di and laila dear
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2010, 03:55:30 PM »
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main os ko padhta....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2010, 10:59:41 PM »
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bhut achay Saahil.................


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bahut hi khoob... aapki ye kavita hamare nazron se chhupi reh gayi thi.... bahut hi khoobsurti se aapne apne dard ko pesh kiya hai.... bahut khoob... maan gaye ji Neel ji aapko... jawaab nahi aapka bhi...!!!

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Tum ek sham ka vada kaar ke gaye the
Hum aaj bi ussi Intzaar main bethe hai
Na muqdaar ko manzoor tha shyed hamra milna
Hum aaj bi haath utha fariyaad Liye bethe hai
Kabhi to hoga uska Rehem-o-KAram hum paar
Hum aaj bi tumare raste main apna DIL bechae bethe hai
Aonge tum kabhi to bhool se is aur kabhi
Ajj bi issi yakin pe hum yeh Duniya bhulai bethe hai
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2010, 12:18:59 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Saahil ji...!!!

Quote from: -Saahil- on August 04, 2009, 10:56:00 AM
nishaan mita daale maine mohabbat k apni
dard dil main rakh k aur kya karta

khaton main likhi thi dastaan-e-tulaanii* apni
main oos ko padta , toh pad k kya karta

hansi na lautegi yeh keh gaye yaar mere
main hansta , bhi toh hans k kya karta

mehfil ka mahol tha bada giraft main
na sajata teri mehfil toh aur kya karta


shaam gujar jaati hai  mujhse teri baat chhed kar
shab bhi kehti rahi jaane ko, main ruk k aur kya karta

qatil ka kehnahi sahi hai,kii woh khatawaar nahi
khatm tha SAAHIL kab se, woh QATL na karta toh aur kya karta



tulaani - long
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2010, 12:34:08 AM »
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Thnx ..... yeh i lyk it too .....


Really thnx .........Kapil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote from: klaskar on April 28, 2010, 12:18:08 AM
bahut hi khoob... aapki ye kavita hamare nazron se chhupi reh gayi thi.... bahut hi khoobsurti se aapne apne dard ko pesh kiya hai.... bahut khoob... maan gaye ji Neel ji aapko... jawaab nahi aapka bhi...!!!

KAMAAL
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