BAGH MEIN TITLIYAN NAHEEN AAYEEN ........................ HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 30, 2013, 03:05:30 PM
Pages: 1 [2] 3 4 5
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 2947 times)
Shireen Hakani
Guest
«Reply #15 on: April 30, 2013, 07:22:15 PM »
Reply with quote
Very Nice Sir!!!


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
Bishwajeet Anand Bsu
Guest
«Reply #16 on: April 30, 2013, 07:45:55 PM »
Reply with quote
waah waah waah sir behad umda ghazal kahi hai aapne...dheron daad..har ahsaar gazab dha rahe hai ...behtareen...lajwaab.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
asif faiz
Guest
«Reply #17 on: April 30, 2013, 10:44:14 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
aqsh
Guest
«Reply #18 on: May 01, 2013, 12:53:12 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Waaaaaaaaaaah. kya khoob likha hai aapne hasanji. sabhi ashaar ek se badhkar ek hai. mujhe bahut bahut pasand aayi. meri dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare.
Logged
Iftakhar Ahmad
Guest
«Reply #19 on: May 01, 2013, 03:04:27 AM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Waah Hasan Saheb waah, laajawaab ghazal, ek se badh kar ek she'r, maza aa gaya padh kar. DheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se.
Logged
mkv
Guest
«Reply #20 on: May 01, 2013, 01:42:21 PM »
Reply with quote
Vaise to har shar..nihayat umda..
par ye ashaar..khoob bhaye mujhe.

Mamta   ki    deviyaaN   naheeN  aayeeN  ,
Kab  se  ghar  BetiyaaN  naheeN  aayeeN


Shor   barpa   hai   aaj   BhounroN   ka  ,
Bagh   meiN   TitliyaaN   naheeN  aayeeN


Uss  ne   mujh  ko   bhula  diya  shaayed  ,
Arse   se    Hichkiyaan   naheeN   aayeeN


Pahlu - e - Yaar   meiN   guzarti   theeN  ,
Waisi   phir   sardiyaaN   naheeN   aayeeN

Ek baar phir se..matle ki taareef karni hogi..
isme chupe ehsaas ka kya kahna..
aur aapke khoobsurat adaaygee ne isme chaar chaand laga diye.

Kal maine jo socha tha..subah -2..vo aaj poora hota dikh raha hai Sir
dil se khush huN aaj.
bahut bahut mubarakbaad.


Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #21 on: May 02, 2013, 12:41:20 PM »
Reply with quote

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowerone rau boss!!!!!!!!!!
SHUKRIYA  AUR  BAHUT  AADAAB  , QALB  SAHEB.
Logged
ahujagd
Maqbool Shayar
****

Rau: 4
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
6 days, 1 hours and 34 minutes.
Posts: 842
Member Since: May 2005


View Profile
«Reply #22 on: May 02, 2013, 01:04:03 PM »
Reply with quote
Hasan ji,
ab tareef mein kya kahoon, sabhi logon ne mere dil ki baat already kah dee hai, yeh gazal padne mein bahut hi aanand aaya ismein chhupe bhavon ka kya kahna, sochne ko majboor kar deti hai yeh gazal aur sikhlaati hai ki gazal kaisee honi chahiye.aapko dili mubaraqbaad pesh karta hoon.shubh kaamnaon ke saath aapka
Ghanshamdas ahuja
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #23 on: May 02, 2013, 10:29:48 PM »
Reply with quote
waah waah hasan bhaaijaan bahut beshqeemtee kalaam mubarak ho
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #24 on: May 03, 2013, 04:50:57 PM »
Reply with quote
Poonamji,bahut shukruzar hoon. Duaaein.
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #25 on: May 04, 2013, 02:04:43 PM »
Reply with quote
Siddiqui ji Bahut Dil Ko Chhoo Lene wali Rachna Likhi Hai Aapne. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
bahut bahut shukriya,saxenaji.khush rahye.
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #26 on: May 04, 2013, 03:16:22 PM »
Reply with quote
Wah,Wah,Wah Hasan sahab,
Bahut lazawab ghazal kahi hai aapne,Such me dil ko chhoo lene wali. Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
sudhir ji , bahut shukrguzaar hoon ki aapne ghazal pasand ki aur hausla badhaya. bahut duaaein. HASAN
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #27 on: May 04, 2013, 06:43:07 PM »
Reply with quote
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
varuun girdhar Jim.Arab air hausla afzai me iye bahut shukfiya.
Logged
Tuhina
Guest
«Reply #28 on: May 05, 2013, 02:04:59 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut  bahut  khoob  hasan  sahab ,  kamaal  ki  ghazal  hai .....
Logged
suman59
Guest
«Reply #29 on: May 05, 2013, 03:56:16 PM »
Reply with quote

Mamta ki    deviyaaN   naheeN  aayeeN  ,

Kab  se  ghar  BetiyaaN  naheeN  aayeeN


Shor   barpa   hai   aaj   BhounroN   ka  ,
Bagh   meiN   TitliyaaN   naheeN  aayeeN


Uss  ne   mujh  ko   bhula  diya  shaayed  ,
Arse   se    Hichkiyaan   naheeN   aayeeN


Pahlu - e - Yaar   meiN   guzarti   theeN  ,
Waisi   phir   sardiyaaN   naheeN   aayeeN


Qadr - e - Azaadi   jaaneiN  kya  , jinke ,
PairoN   meiN   BediyaaaN  naheeN   aayeeN


Chup   hui   phadphada   ke   phir   Bulbul  ,
Chonch   meiN   teeliyaaN   naheeN   aayeeN


MotiyoN    ko    taras    gayeeN    BoondeiN  ,
Daam    meiN    seepiyaaN    naheeN    aayeeN


Hanste  -  Hanste    badal    gaye    Raste  ,
RishtoN   meiN   talkhiyaaN   naheeN   aayeeN


Waqt    ne    toda    to    ghuroor   ,  magar
Lahje    meiN    narmiyaaN    naheeN    aayeeN


Aashiqui   kee  ,  magar   samajh   meiN  'Hasan'  ,
Iss    ki     baareekiyaaN     naheeN    aayeeN


..................
Daam = jaal / trap ; talkhi = kadwahat

bahut umda Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
Pages: 1 [2] 3 4 5
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
May 19, 2024, 07:32:35 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[May 18, 2024, 12:47:34 PM]

[April 23, 2024, 09:54:09 AM]

by ASIF
[April 22, 2024, 01:50:33 PM]

[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]

[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]

by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]

[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.139 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8499 Real Poets and poetry admirer