BAGH MEIN TITLIYAN NAHEEN AAYEEN ........................ HASAN

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«Reply #45 on: May 12, 2013, 12:37:33 AM »
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Vaise to har shar..nihayat umda..
par ye ashaar..khoob bhaye mujhe.

Mamta   ki    deviyaaN   naheeN  aayeeN  ,
Kab  se  ghar  BetiyaaN  naheeN  aayeeN


Shor   barpa   hai   aaj   BhounroN   ka  ,
Bagh   meiN   TitliyaaN   naheeN  aayeeN


Uss  ne   mujh  ko   bhula  diya  shaayed  ,
Arse   se    Hichkiyaan   naheeN   aayeeN


Pahlu - e - Yaar   meiN   guzarti   theeN  ,
Waisi   phir   sardiyaaN   naheeN   aayeeN

Ek baar phir se..matle ki taareef karni hogi..
isme chupe ehsaas ka kya kahna..
aur aapke khoobsurat adaaygee ne isme chaar chaand laga diye.

Kal maine jo socha tha..subah -2..vo aaj poora hota dikh raha hai Sir
dil se khush huN aaj.
bahut bahut mubarakbaad.



Mukesh ji , adaab . bahut shukrguzar hoon ki aap ne ghazal bahut pyar se parhi aur hausla afzai ki.Aapke tabsiron se hamesha bahut khushi ka ehsaas hota hai. Khuda aap ko khush rakhhe.
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«Reply #46 on: May 12, 2013, 06:04:12 PM »
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Hasan ji,
ab tareef mein kya kahoon, sabhi logon ne mere dil ki baat already kah dee hai, yeh gazal padne mein bahut hi aanand aaya ismein chhupe bhavon ka kya kahna, sochne ko majboor kar deti hai yeh gazal aur sikhlaati hai ki gazal kaisee honi chahiye.aapko dili mubaraqbaad pesh karta hoon.shubh kaamnaon ke saath aapka
Ghanshamdas ahuja

Ahuja ji , adaab . aapki pur khuloos hausla afzai
ke  liye shukriya ada karne ko  alfaaz nahin hain.
aapki  mohabbat  milti rahe  yahi  dua  karta hoon .
Bahut bahut duaaon ke sath . khair andesh , Hasan
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«Reply #47 on: May 12, 2013, 10:15:42 PM »
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waah waah hasan bhaaijaan bahut beshqeemtee kalaam mubarak ho
Saini sahib , Tah e dil se ahukriya aur adaab arz hai .
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«Reply #48 on: May 13, 2013, 01:58:12 AM »
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bahut  bahut  khoob  hasan  sahab ,  kamaal  ki  ghazal  hai .....
THANKS , TUHINA JI . BE HAPPY .
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«Reply #49 on: May 13, 2013, 10:07:31 AM »
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Suman ji , Shukriya .
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«Reply #50 on: May 13, 2013, 10:16:18 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause
Thankyou !
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«Reply #51 on: May 14, 2013, 09:49:01 AM »
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Hanste  -  Hanste    badal    gaye    Raste  ,
 RishtoN   meiN   talkhiyaaN   naheeN   aayeeN

kya kahne hasan sahab ..........
bahut khoobsurat .........

kash aisa hi ho....

daad kabool kareN
Janumanu sahib , hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #52 on: May 14, 2013, 02:37:05 PM »
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bohat hi bharpoor khyalat se saji ghazal aapki hasan ji ,...
master piece of urs poetry ,matle se le kar maqte tak har sher ghazab dhaa rahaa ,........bohat bohat c daad rau ke sath aapkee
iss shahkaar ghazal ki nazar ,.............
Zarranawazi ke liye Bahut bahut shukrguzaar
 hoon , laaiba saheba .Khush rahye .Hasan
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«Reply #53 on: May 29, 2013, 06:32:48 PM »
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«Reply #54 on: May 30, 2013, 07:24:59 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahib, khair tu he na?

aap ke is sher ne tu Alaska ki sardiyan yaad karwa dee'n!

Pahlu - e - Yaar   meiN   guzarti   theeN  ,
Waisi   phir   sardiyaaN   naheeN   aayeeN
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«Reply #55 on: May 30, 2013, 03:02:48 PM »
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  Applause Wah , Wah Janab !  Applause
       
        Kya jamke likhi Janab ne  Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #56 on: August 10, 2013, 11:53:49 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khub Hasan Sahab Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye...

Shihab...
shuhab ji bahut shukriya , duaaein
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«Reply #57 on: August 10, 2013, 11:57:22 PM »
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bahut shukrguzar hoon admin ji ki aap ne meri haqeer si koshish ko islaiq samjha
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«Reply #58 on: August 11, 2013, 05:10:40 PM »
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yeh ghazal, bahut hi jyada visual tha, aapki gehree samajh appke shabdo se saaf jhalakti hai, waqai padkar bahut acchaa lagaa, bahut khoobsurat, kaabile taarif, bhai waah
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«Reply #59 on: August 13, 2013, 11:14:27 AM »
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thanks admin ji. Sorry for my late acknowledgment .
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