Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi "Khwaish"

by khwaish on August 13, 2009, 04:13:55 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 18, 2009, 05:11:40 PM »
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Tu Saath Ho To Kya Khoob Yeh Zindagi Hogi
Bin Tere, Maut Se Bhi Berukhi Hogi...

Aaena Bhi Dekh Tujhe Daave Karta Hoga!!
iss Chehre Se Bhi Haseen Kahan Koi Tasveer Hogi...

Tu Paas Se Guzre To Mehak Uth Thi Hai Kaliyan!!
Phoolon Mein Bhi Khilti Taazgi Hogi....

Naam Mera, Tere Labon par Waqt-Bewaqt Aata To Hoga!!
Mere Khayalo Ke Tasavuur Se Nazrein Teri Bhi Jhuki Hogi...

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....

Sach Hi kehte Hai Log,Ke Mohabbat Kabhi lafzo Se Bayaan Nahi Hoti!!!
Iski Pehchaan Sirf Itni Hai Ke Judai Ke pal Mein Dono ki Aankhein Shabnami Hogi..

"Khwaish" Nahi Jaanta Ke uski Manzil Aakhir Kis Raah Par Hai!!!
Par Agar Tu Saath Ho to yeh Yakeen hai mujhe!!!
Ke Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi.....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~



Khwaish ji kai dino se apki kuch kavitao ka jawab dene ki koshish kar rahi thi... kabhi dil ne sath nahi diya aor kabhi kalam ne, jab dono maane to shabd jaise rooth gaye ho... Ajj teeno ne sath diya to kuch likhne ja rahi hu... (Apke sath likhne ke liye such main dil, kalam, shabad aor Pooja ka ek hona jaroori hota hai)

Tum sath ho to kaya khoob yah zindagi hogi
Tum bin, zindagi ki her baat adhoori hogi

Such ka aaina hai yah teri-meri zindagi
Hum se bad kar kaha koi aor tasveer hogi
Tum sath ho to……

Tere khayal mehka detein hai, khushio ke phool
Is mehak se bad kar, kaya mehak, is jahan main hogi
Tum Sath ho to…..

Naam mera tere lubo per, kar deta hai saar iska poora
Pooja ki is se bad kar bhi, kisi dil main kaha Pooja hogi
Tum sath ho to…

Mehsoos hota hai is kadar yah rishta tera mera
Shabdo main bhi kaha is kahne ki koi gazal hogi
Tum sath ho to….

Lad jaate ho, jo main kar lu kisi se bhi thori si baat
Dil mai sochu,
is gusse main tere, kaha tak mere liye, tere pyar ki had hogi……
Tum sath ho to….

Pooja nahi janati, Rub ne kaya manjil uski banaai hai
Lash nikalegi jaha se Pooja ki, wo tere he ghar ki chat hogi….
Tum Sath ho to…..
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«Reply #16 on: August 18, 2009, 05:30:59 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #17 on: August 18, 2009, 05:46:42 PM »
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bahut pyaara jwaab diya aapne Pooja ji...har alfaaz dil ko chune waala likha hai aapne.......har lafj dil mein utar rha hai.....aankhiri do lines mein bahut khuch likh diya aapne..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: August 18, 2009, 08:27:32 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Pooja  Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Celmira!!
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«Reply #19 on: August 18, 2009, 08:28:21 PM »
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bahut pyaara jwaab diya aapne Pooja ji...har alfaaz dil ko chune waala likha hai aapne.......har lafj dil mein utar rha hai.....aankhiri do lines mein bahut khuch likh diya aapne..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Khwaish ji likhte he itne dil se hai apni her ek kavita ki unke sath likhne wali kavita apne app achi ban jaati hai!!!
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«Reply #20 on: August 25, 2009, 03:40:52 PM »
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Wow Khwaish ji.really nice and mindblowing creation.bahut hi pyari gazal hai.
wonderful. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause excellent

Thankyou Sooooooo Much Madhuwesh.. icon_flower
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«Reply #21 on: August 25, 2009, 03:44:32 PM »
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Khwahish ji bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne Applause

marvellous ending

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Reaperji..
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«Reply #22 on: August 30, 2009, 03:16:14 PM »
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KYA BAAT HAI KHWAISH JI........

TU SAATH HO TOH KYA KHOOB YEH  ZINDAGI HOGI,
TUJHE KYA MALAAUM,KITNI HASEEN MERI ZINDAGI HOGI.

AAENA BHI DEKH KAR TUJHE DAAVA KARTA HOGA,
PURI DUNIYA  MEIN,TERE JAISI NAHIN KOYI HOGI.

TU PAAS SEY GUJRE TOH MAHEK UTH THI HAI KALIYAN,
BHAARON SEY BAR JAATI HAI,TERE AANEY SEY YEH GALIYAN.

NAAM MERA,TERE LABON PAR WAQAT-BE-WAQAT AATA TOH HOGA,
TERE DIL MEIN BHI, MERE LIYE THODI JAGHAA TOH HOGI,

MEHSOOS KAR SAKTA HOON,MAIN TUJHSEY DO PAL KE LIYE BHI BHICHADNE KA DARD,
KI BIN TERE YEH ZINDAGI IK PAL BHI JEENA MERA MUSHKIL HOGI.

SACH KAHETE HAI LOG KI MOHABBAT KABHI LAFZO SE BAYAAN NAHIN HOTI,
YEH DIL-O-JIGAR KI BATEY HAIN,YEH DIL-O- JIGAR HI SAMAJHTI.

"KHWAISH" NAHIN JAANTA HAI, KI USKI MANZIL AAKHIR KIS RAAH PAR HAI,
AGAR BANKAR HAMKADAM,TUM SAATH AATI HO SANAM,
TOH YAKEEN HAI,IS ZINDAGI MAIN KISI CHEEZ KI KAMI NAHIN HOGI.
......BAHUT HI KHOOBSURAT YEH MERI ZINDAGI HOGI......
 






Bahut bahut Shukriya Caraji..Aur Aapne Bhi Bahut Achi Koshish Ki hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #23 on: December 31, 2009, 06:08:01 AM »
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bahot hi khoobsurat....... aur behtreen...........  Applause
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«Reply #24 on: January 03, 2010, 06:43:41 AM »
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Tu Saath Ho To Kya Khoob Yeh Zindagi Hogi
Bin Tere, Maut Se Bhi Berukhi Hogi...

Aaena Bhi Dekh Tujhe Daave Karta Hoga!!
iss Chehre Se Bhi Haseen Kahan Koi Tasveer Hogi...

Tu Paas Se Guzre To Mehak Uth Thi Hai Kaliyan!!
Phoolon Mein Bhi Khilti Taazgi Hogi....

Naam Mera, Tere Labon par Waqt-Bewaqt Aata To Hoga!!
Mere Khayalo Ke Tasavuur Se Nazrein Teri Bhi Jhuki Hogi...

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....

Sach Hi kehte Hai Log,Ke Mohabbat Kabhi lafzo Se Bayaan Nahi Hoti!!!
Iski Pehchaan Sirf Itni Hai Ke Judai Ke pal Mein Dono ki Aankhein Shabnami Hogi..

"Khwaish" Nahi Jaanta Ke uski Manzil Aakhir Kis Raah Par Hai!!!
Par Agar Tu Saath Ho to yeh Yakeen hai mujhe!!!
Ke Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi.....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Good one Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #25 on: January 05, 2010, 05:32:20 AM »
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bahot hi khoobsurat....... aur behtreen...........  Applause
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«Reply #26 on: March 23, 2010, 11:47:09 PM »
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Bahut achcha likha hai aapne Khwaish ji...!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #27 on: May 22, 2010, 12:04:43 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hia khwaish ji. aur jiske liye likha hia wo to ye padhke ekdam khush hogayi hogi...  happy3 happy3 happy3

Some lines from me...



Teri hi panahon mein jhilmilate meri zindagi ke moti,
tujhse roshan meri andheri raaton ki teergi hoti,

sambhalega kaun tere siwa meri saanson ki raftaar ko,
tujhbin dhadkanein bhi meri awara si, be-ummeed hoti,

mere har sawal ka jawab tu, mera aagaz aur anjaam tu,
tu nahi hota to meri tadap tere tadapne ke liye tadapti hoti...



Thankyou Soooooooooooooo Much Dear!!!

Aur bahut Bahut Khoob Likha Aapne Huzena..

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I Really Miss You In Yoindia And I Wish You Will really Come Back!!
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«Reply #28 on: May 22, 2010, 12:52:47 PM »
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Tu Saath Ho To Kya Khoob Yeh Zindagi Hogi
Bin Tere, Maut Se Bhi Berukhi Hogi...

Aaena Bhi Dekh Tujhe Daave Karta Hoga!!
iss Chehre Se Bhi Haseen Kahan Koi Tasveer Hogi...

Tu Paas Se Guzre To Mehak Uth Thi Hai Kaliyan!!
Phoolon Mein Bhi Khilti Taazgi Hogi....

Naam Mera, Tere Labon par Waqt-Bewaqt Aata To Hoga!!
Mere Khayalo Ke Tasavuur Se Nazrein Teri Bhi Jhuki Hogi...

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....

Sach Hi kehte Hai Log,Ke Mohabbat Kabhi lafzo Se Bayaan Nahi Hoti!!!
Iski Pehchaan Sirf Itni Hai Ke Judai Ke pal Mein Dono ki Aankhein Shabnami Hogi..

"Khwaish" Nahi Jaanta Ke uski Manzil Aakhir Kis Raah Par Hai!!!
Par Agar Tu Saath Ho to yeh Yakeen hai mujhe!!!
Ke Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi.....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahut khoob likha hai apne khwaish ji..maine bhi aaj kisi ko khud se door jate dekha hai aur yakeen maniye is ghazal ka har alfaz main use kehna chahti thi per keh nhi payi..shukriya apke itne khubsurat alfazo k liye...
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«Reply #29 on: December 30, 2012, 03:16:56 AM »
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Tu Saath Ho To Kya Khoob Yeh Zindagi Hogi
Bin Tere, Maut Se Bhi Berukhi Hogi...

Aaena Bhi Dekh Tujhe Daave Karta Hoga!!
iss Chehre Se Bhi Haseen Kahan Koi Tasveer Hogi...

Tu Paas Se Guzre To Mehak Uth Thi Hai Kaliyan!!
Phoolon Mein Bhi Khilti Taazgi Hogi....

Naam Mera, Tere Labon par Waqt-Bewaqt Aata To Hoga!!
Mere Khayalo Ke Tasavuur Se Nazrein Teri Bhi Jhuki Hogi...

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....

Sach Hi kehte Hai Log,Ke Mohabbat Kabhi lafzo Se Bayaan Nahi Hoti!!!
Iski Pehchaan Sirf Itni Hai Ke Judai Ke pal Mein Dono ki Aankhein Shabnami Hogi..

"Khwaish" Nahi Jaanta Ke uski Manzil Aakhir Kis Raah Par Hai!!!
Par Agar Tu Saath Ho to yeh Yakeen hai mujhe!!!
Ke Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi.....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


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