Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi "Khwaish"

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Tu Saath Ho To Kya Khoob Yeh Zindagi Hogi
Bin Tere, Maut Se Bhi Berukhi Hogi...

Aaena Bhi Dekh Tujhe Daave Karta Hoga!!
iss Chehre Se Bhi Haseen Kahan Koi Tasveer Hogi...

Tu Paas Se Guzre To Mehak Uth Thi Hai Kaliyan!!
Phoolon Mein Bhi Khilti Taazgi Hogi....

Naam Mera, Tere Labon par Waqt-Bewaqt Aata To Hoga!!
Mere Khayalo Ke Tasavuur Se Nazrein Teri Bhi Jhuki Hogi...

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....

Sach Hi kehte Hai Log,Ke Mohabbat Kabhi lafzo Se Bayaan Nahi Hoti!!!
Iski Pehchaan Sirf Itni Hai Ke Judai Ke pal Mein Dono ki Aankhein Shabnami Hogi..

"Khwaish" Nahi Jaanta Ke uski Manzil Aakhir Kis Raah Par Hai!!!
Par Agar Tu Saath Ho to yeh Yakeen hai mujhe!!!
Ke Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi.....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2009, 09:53:35 PM »
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bahut hi khubsurati k saath likha hai aapne khwaish ji....yakeenan wo bahut khushnaseeb hai jinke liye aapne itne pyaare alfaaz likhe hai....
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2009, 09:55:43 PM »
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Awwww thats so sweet and beautifully expressed Khwaish ji.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2009, 10:01:38 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai khwaish ji hamesha ki tarah bahoot dil se likhi hai apne apni kavita...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good work

her ek line kamaal ki hai magar yah do line.. bahoot achi lagi..

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2009, 10:05:15 PM »
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bahut hi khubsurati k saath likha hai aapne khwaish ji....yakeenan wo bahut khushnaseeb hai jinke liye aapne itne pyaare alfaaz likhe hai....
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thankyou Soooooooo Much Dear!!

Thankyou So Much Pooja for the Sweet Words  icon_flower..
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2009, 10:06:30 PM »
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Awwww thats so sweet and beautifully expressed Khwaish ji.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks A Lottttt Dear...

Thanks For Always Appreciating My work.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2009, 10:07:52 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai khwaish ji hamesha ki tarah bahoot dil se likhi hai apne apni kavita...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Good work

her ek line kamaal ki hai magar yah do line.. bahoot achi lagi..

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....


Bahut Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..

Aapko Yahan Dekh kar Bahutttt Khushi Hui..Thankyou Dear icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: August 14, 2009, 12:59:43 AM »
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Tu Saath Ho To Kya Khoob Yeh Zindagi Hogi
Bin Tere, Maut Se Bhi Berukhi Hogi...

Aaena Bhi Dekh Tujhe Daave Karta Hoga!!
iss Chehre Se Bhi Haseen Kahan Koi Tasveer Hogi...

Tu Paas Se Guzre To Mehak Uth Thi Hai Kaliyan!!
Phoolon Mein Bhi Khilti Taazgi Hogi....

Naam Mera, Tere Labon par Waqt-Bewaqt Aata To Hoga!!
Mere Khayalo Ke Tasavuur Se Nazrein Teri Bhi Jhuki Hogi...

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....

Sach Hi kehte Hai Log,Ke Mohabbat Kabhi lafzo Se Bayaan Nahi Hoti!!!
Iski Pehchaan Sirf Itni Hai Ke Judai Ke pal Mein Dono ki Aankhein Shabnami Hogi..

"Khwaish" Nahi Jaanta Ke uski Manzil Aakhir Kis Raah Par Hai!!!
Par Agar Tu Saath Ho to yeh Yakeen hai mujhe!!!
Ke Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi.....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost....Bohot achcha likha hai aapne.....Mohabbat se bhara kalaam hai.....Bohot Khoob

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«Reply #8 on: August 14, 2009, 02:58:59 AM »
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Wow Khwaish ji.really nice and mindblowing creation.bahut hi pyari gazal hai.
wonderful. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent
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«Reply #9 on: August 14, 2009, 03:54:31 AM »
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Khwahish ji bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne Applause

marvellous ending
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«Reply #10 on: August 14, 2009, 11:10:29 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost....Bohot achcha likha hai aapne.....Mohabbat se bhara kalaam hai.....Bohot Khoob

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thakyou Soooooooo Much My dearest Friend!!

Aapko Yeh kalaam pasand Aayi,Teh dil Se Shukriya Dost.. icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: August 14, 2009, 11:57:56 AM »
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Tu Saath Ho To Kya Khoob Yeh Zindagi Hogi
Bin Tere, Maut Se Bhi Berukhi Hogi...

Aaena Bhi Dekh Tujhe Daave Karta Hoga!!
iss Chehre Se Bhi Haseen Kahan Koi Tasveer Hogi...

Tu Paas Se Guzre To Mehak Uth Thi Hai Kaliyan!!
Phoolon Mein Bhi Khilti Taazgi Hogi....

Naam Mera, Tere Labon par Waqt-Bewaqt Aata To Hoga!!
Mere Khayalo Ke Tasavuur Se Nazrein Teri Bhi Jhuki Hogi...

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....

Sach Hi kehte Hai Log,Ke Mohabbat Kabhi lafzo Se Bayaan Nahi Hoti!!!
Iski Pehchaan Sirf Itni Hai Ke Judai Ke pal Mein Dono ki Aankhein Shabnami Hogi..

"Khwaish" Nahi Jaanta Ke uski Manzil Aakhir Kis Raah Par Hai!!!
Par Agar Tu Saath Ho to yeh Yakeen hai mujhe!!!
Ke Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi.....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

KYA BAAT HAI KHWAISH JI........

TU SAATH HO TOH KYA KHOOB YEH  ZINDAGI HOGI,
TUJHE KYA MALAAUM,KITNI HASEEN MERI ZINDAGI HOGI.

AAENA BHI DEKH KAR TUJHE DAAVA KARTA HOGA,
PURI DUNIYA  MEIN,TERE JAISI NAHIN KOYI HOGI.

TU PAAS SEY GUJRE TOH MAHEK UTH THI HAI KALIYAN,
BHAARON SEY BAR JAATI HAI,TERE AANEY SEY YEH GALIYAN.

NAAM MERA,TERE LABON PAR WAQAT-BE-WAQAT AATA TOH HOGA,
TERE DIL MEIN BHI, MERE LIYE THODI JAGHAA TOH HOGI,

MEHSOOS KAR SAKTA HOON,MAIN TUJHSEY DO PAL KE LIYE BHI BHICHADNE KA DARD,
KI BIN TERE YEH ZINDAGI IK PAL BHI JEENA MERA MUSHKIL HOGI.

SACH KAHETE HAI LOG KI MOHABBAT KABHI LAFZO SE BAYAAN NAHIN HOTI,
YEH DIL-O-JIGAR KI BATEY HAIN,YEH DIL-O- JIGAR HI SAMAJHTI.

"KHWAISH" NAHIN JAANTA HAI, KI USKI MANZIL AAKHIR KIS RAAH PAR HAI,
AGAR BANKAR HAMKADAM,TUM SAATH AATI HO SANAM,
TOH YAKEEN HAI,IS ZINDAGI MAIN KISI CHEEZ KI KAMI NAHIN HOGI.
......BAHUT HI KHOOBSURAT YEH MERI ZINDAGI HOGI......
 




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«Reply #12 on: August 14, 2009, 12:31:01 PM »
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Wow Khwaish ji.really nice and mindblowing creation.bahut hi pyari gazal hai.
wonderful. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:excellent

Thankyou Soooooooooooo Much Madhu..

Thanks For Always Appreciating Dear icon_flower
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«Reply #13 on: August 14, 2009, 08:20:37 PM »
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Tu Saath Ho To Kya Khoob Yeh Zindagi Hogi
Bin Tere, Maut Se Bhi Berukhi Hogi...

Aaena Bhi Dekh Tujhe Daave Karta Hoga!!
iss Chehre Se Bhi Haseen Kahan Koi Tasveer Hogi...

Tu Paas Se Guzre To Mehak Uth Thi Hai Kaliyan!!
Phoolon Mein Bhi Khilti Taazgi Hogi....

Naam Mera, Tere Labon par Waqt-Bewaqt Aata To Hoga!!
Mere Khayalo Ke Tasavuur Se Nazrein Teri Bhi Jhuki Hogi...

Mehsoos Kar Sakta Hoon Main Tujhse Do pal Ke liye Bhi Bichadne Ka Dard!!
Saansein Abhi Seene Mein Kuch Thami Si Hogi....

Sach Hi kehte Hai Log,Ke Mohabbat Kabhi lafzo Se Bayaan Nahi Hoti!!!
Iski Pehchaan Sirf Itni Hai Ke Judai Ke pal Mein Dono ki Aankhein Shabnami Hogi..

"Khwaish" Nahi Jaanta Ke uski Manzil Aakhir Kis Raah Par Hai!!!
Par Agar Tu Saath Ho to yeh Yakeen hai mujhe!!!
Ke Bahut Khoobsurat Yeh Meri Zindagi Hogi.....

                  ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


Bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hia khwaish ji. aur jiske liye likha hia wo to ye padhke ekdam khush hogayi hogi...  happy3 happy3 happy3

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Teri hi panahon mein jhilmilate meri zindagi ke moti,
tujhse roshan meri andheri raaton ki teergi hoti,

sambhalega kaun tere siwa meri saanson ki raftaar ko,
tujhbin dhadkanein bhi meri awara si, be-ummeed hoti,

mere har sawal ka jawab tu, mera aagaz aur anjaam tu,
tu nahi hota to meri tadap tere tadapne ke liye tadapti hoti...

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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2009, 10:01:35 PM »
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good work cara and Angel!!
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