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by suman59 on October 04, 2012, 09:53:20 PM
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Barson se hum rahe hai ek-doosre se bachkar
Tere haat mein bhi patthar, mere haath mein bhi patthar

Khud gir gaya vo apne saye se khake tokkar
Parchayi se jab apni, lagne laga usse darr

Dushman se bach to aaye, inse bachoge kaise,
Muskan hai labon per aur aasti mein khanjar

Ulfath hai apni-apni, fithrat hai apni-apni
Kisee haath mein guletar, kisi haath mein hai patthar

Dekhu mai aasuwon mein din raat uska chehra
Behti nadi mein jisne bana liya ghar



बरसों से हम रहे है एक-दूसरे से बचकर
तेरे हात में भी पत्थर, मेरे हात में भी पत्थर  !

खुद  गिर  गया  वो  अपने  साये  से  खाके  ठोकर
परछाई  से  जब  अपनी, लगने  लगा  उसे डर

दुश्मन  से  बच  तो  आये, इनसे  बचोगे  कैसे,
मुस्कान  है  लबों  पर  और  आस्ती  में  खंजर

उल्फत  है  अपनी -अपनी, फितरत  है  अपनी-अपनी
किसी  हाथ  में  गुलेतर, किसी  हाथ  में  है  पत्थर

देखू  मै  आसुओ  में  दिन  रात  उसका  चेहरा
बहती  नदी में  जिसने  बना  लिया  घर
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«Reply #1 on: October 04, 2012, 10:04:36 PM »
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nice.....
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2012, 10:24:35 PM »
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good one...
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«Reply #3 on: October 04, 2012, 10:41:45 PM »
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Bahut bahut umda ghazal Applause
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«Reply #4 on: October 04, 2012, 10:44:13 PM »
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wah wah suman ji kya baat hai, very very nice....Usual Smile
mere dil ko hila gayi aap ki ye shayari...meri taraf se aap ko badhai ek rau...kuch na kuch milta julta sa hai meri kahani se aap ki shayari mein, maloom nahi kya...lekin lajawab.....
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«Reply #5 on: October 04, 2012, 11:02:54 PM »
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Barson se hum rahe hai ek-doosre se bachkar
Tere haat mein bhi patthar, mere haath mein bhi patthar

Khud gir gaya vo apne saye se khake tokkar
Parchayi se jab apni, lagne laga usse darr

Dushman se bach to aaye, inse bachoge kaise,
Muskan hai labon per aur aasti mein khanjar

Ulfath hai apni-apni, fithrat hai apni-apni
Kisee haath mein guletar, kisi haath mein hai patthar

Dekhu mai aasuwon mein din raat uska chehra
Behti nadi mein jisne bana liya ghar



बरसों से हम रहे है एक-दूसरे से बचकर
तेरे हात में भी पत्थर, मेरे हात में भी पत्थर  !

खुद  गिर  गया  वो  अपने  साये  से  खाके  ठोकर
परछाई  से  जब  अपनी, लगने  लगा  उसे डर

दुश्मन  से  बच  तो  आये, इनसे  बचोगे  कैसे,
मुस्कान  है  लबों  पर  और  आस्ती  में  खंजर

उल्फत  है  अपनी -अपनी, फितरत  है  अपनी-अपनी
किसी  हाथ  में  गुलेतर, किसी  हाथ  में  है  पत्थर

देखू  मै  आसुओ  में  दिन  रात  उसका  चेहरा
बहती  नदी में  जिसने  बना  लिया  घर

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Yaad aata hai aksar manoj hame aaj bhi wo hi manjer
jeena sikhane wala hame dhudta hai haath mei liye khanjer
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«Reply #6 on: October 04, 2012, 11:56:39 PM »
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Barson se hum rahe hai ek-doosre se bachkar
Tere haat mein bhi patthar, mere haath mein bhi patthar

Khud gir gaya vo apne saye se khake tokkar
Parchayi se jab apni, lagne laga usse darr

Dushman se bach to aaye, inse bachoge kaise,
Muskan hai labon per aur aasti mein khanjar

Ulfath hai apni-apni, fithrat hai apni-apni
Kisee haath mein guletar, kisi haath mein hai patthar

Dekhu mai aasuwon mein din raat uska chehra
Behti nadi mein jisne bana liya ghar



बरसों से हम रहे है एक-दूसरे से बचकर
तेरे हात में भी पत्थर, मेरे हात में भी पत्थर  !

खुद  गिर  गया  वो  अपने  साये  से  खाके  ठोकर
परछाई  से  जब  अपनी, लगने  लगा  उसे डर

दुश्मन  से  बच  तो  आये, इनसे  बचोगे  कैसे,
मुस्कान  है  लबों  पर  और  आस्ती  में  खंजर

उल्फत  है  अपनी -अपनी, फितरत  है  अपनी-अपनी
किसी  हाथ  में  गुलेतर, किसी  हाथ  में  है  पत्थर

देखू  मै  आसुओ  में  दिन  रात  उसका  चेहरा
बहती  नदी में  जिसने  बना  लिया  घर



waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 05, 2012, 06:13:04 AM »
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waah waah kyaa dhaansu peshkash sab chhaa gayee daad
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«Reply #8 on: October 05, 2012, 06:20:57 AM »
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umda rachna hai.
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«Reply #9 on: October 05, 2012, 08:14:53 AM »
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wah wah suman ji bahut khub
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2012, 08:40:32 AM »
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waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh suman ji bohut khub
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«Reply #11 on: October 05, 2012, 05:17:33 PM »
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Khud gir gaya vo apne saye se khake tokkar
Parchayi se jab apni, lagne laga usse darr

खुद  गिर  गया  वो  अपने  साये  से  खाके  ठोकर
परछाई  से  जब  अपनी, लगने  लगा  उसे डर
Waah Bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2012, 11:16:23 AM »
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waah kya kehne sumanji
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«Reply #13 on: October 07, 2012, 08:44:45 AM »
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nice.....

thank lyou gaytri jee
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«Reply #14 on: October 07, 2012, 08:45:19 AM »
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good one...
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