Bewafai ka dard.....premdeep

by premdeep on August 06, 2013, 11:51:48 AM
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Ab na koi shikwe hain na koi wade hain
Na tum hamare ho na hum tumhare hain

chuti jo kashti hai bahta hi jata hun
lakhon samundar hain doobe kinare hain

Ye chahat ki dunya ab nakli si lagti hai
Ankhon me aanshu hain dil mein darare hain

jhooti mohobbat hai jhoote tarane hain
Bikte bazaaron mein sapno ke mare hain

Meri takat thi wo meri kamzori bhi
Gairon se jeete to apno se hare hain

jisne bhi chaha mein uska sahara tha
jiske sahare hum wo kab hamare hain


Aj tum ho darmiyan kal koi aur hoga
Na wo hamare the na wo tumhare hain
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2013, 11:53:53 AM »
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khubsurat umda aur dard se bhara hua qalaam premdeep ..aap shabdon ko bade khubsurat tarike se pirote hain... dheron daad o mubarakbaad is umda qallaam par... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2013, 12:05:31 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2013, 01:10:40 PM »
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बहुत खूब...प्रेमदीप जी,  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2013, 01:17:12 PM »
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Ab na koi shikwe hain na koi wade hain
Na tum hamare ho na hum tumhare hain

chuti jo kashti hai bahta hi jata hun
lakhon samundar hain doobe kinare hain

Ye chahat ki dunya ab nakli si lagti hai
Ankhon me aanshu hain dil mein darare hain

jhooti mohobbat hai jhoote tarane hain
Bikte bazaaron mein sapno ke mare hain

Meri takat thi wo meri kamzori bhi
Gairon se jeete to apno se hare hain

jisne bhi chaha mein uska sahara tha
jiske sahare hum wo kab hamare hain


Aj tum ho darmiyan kal koi aur hoga
Na wo hamare the na wo tumhare hain
bohat bohat khoob,.............bohat c daad,................
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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2013, 01:32:03 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2013, 02:37:30 PM »
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bahot hi khoooob waaaaah waaah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2013, 02:39:50 PM »
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bahut khoob paramdeep ji.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2013, 03:13:55 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: August 06, 2013, 03:16:11 PM »
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bhtttttttttttttt hi sunder peshkash premdeep ji.
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«Reply #11 on: August 06, 2013, 07:19:39 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2013, 11:03:39 AM »
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Ab na  shikwe hain na    wade hain
if you will write koi then it will be hai-so i remove koi then it will be hain
Na tum hamare ho na hum tumhare hain

chhuti jo kashti hai bahta hi jata hun
lakhon samundar hain doobe kinare hain

Ye chahat ki dunya ab nakli si lagti hai
Ankhon me aanshu hain dil mein darare hain

jhooti mohobbat hai jhoote tarane hain
Bikte bazaaron mein sapno ke mare hain

Meri takat thi wo meri kamzori bhi
Gairon se jeete to apno se hare hain

jisne bhi chaha mein uska sahara tha
jiske sahare hum wo kab hamare hain


Aaj tum ho darmiyan kal koi aur hoga
Na wo hamare the na wo tumhare hain



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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2013, 11:34:58 AM »
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hmmmmmmmmmmm dhamakedaar peshkash premdeep ji. bahut hi achcha likhe ho. hazaron dili daad qubool karo is khoob kalaam par..
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2013, 02:47:50 PM »
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thanks to all for appreciation
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