Bhagwaan kaha hai......( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on June 17, 2011, 12:27:42 PM
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Shayer si meri pehchaan kaha hai
Kiraye ka mera makaan kaha hai

Jaan de de yaha kisi ke liye
Ab itni kisi me jaan kaha hai

Dil se beghar huye lapata bhi huye
Kaun jaane mere armaan kaha hai

Sirf sunte rahe jo begum ki hum
Aaj dhoondha kiye khaandan kaha hai

Poojari ne Thane likhayee rapat
Mandir ka mere bhagwaan kaha hai

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: June 17, 2011, 02:54:34 PM »
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ghayal sir ji…
kya lajawaab haqikat kahi aapne…
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«Reply #2 on: June 17, 2011, 09:13:51 PM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on June 17, 2011, 12:27:42 PM

 Dil se beghar huye lapata bhi huye

Kaun jaane mere armaan kaha hai


Sirf sunte rahe jo begum ki hum

Aaj dhoondha kiye khaandan kaha
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Sajid Ghayel

ye lines bahut achhe lage. bahut hi umda peshkash
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«Reply #3 on: June 18, 2011, 04:02:53 PM »
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Waah..waah..Ghayel Sahab..bahut khoob..
Daad qubool karen.

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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2011, 09:58:48 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on June 17, 2011, 12:27:42 PM
Shayer si meri pehchaan kaha hai
Kiraye ka mera makaan kaha hai

Jaan de de yaha kisi ke liye
Ab itni kisi me jaan kaha hai

Dil se beghar huye lapata bhi huye
Kaun jaane mere armaan kaha hai

Sirf sunte rahe jo begum ki hum
Aaj dhoondha kiye khaandan kaha hai

Poojari ne Thane likhayee rapat
Mandir ka mere bhagwaan kaha hai

Sajid Ghayel




AAKHRI SHER BAHUT DAMDAAR RAHA SAJID SAHAB


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«Reply #5 on: June 21, 2011, 07:29:24 AM »
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Quote from: nirala on June 17, 2011, 02:54:34 PM
ghayal sir ji…
kya lajawaab haqikat kahi aapne…


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«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2011, 07:36:43 AM »
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wah sajid bhaii...

bahut khoob...maza aa gaya ...

1,3,4 lajawaab hai...or behad khubsurat laga ye ki....sirf sunte rahe jo begum ki...aaj dhooonda kye khandan kaha hai..

badi gehri baat kahin aapne..
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«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2011, 03:47:49 PM »
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"Jaan de de yahan kisi Ke Liye
Ab Itni kisi mein jaan Kaha Hai

Sirf Sunte Rahe Jo Begum Ki hum
Aaj Dhoondha Kiye Khandaan Kaha Hai"

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bahut bahut Khoob Sajid Bhai
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2011, 07:15:03 AM »
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Last2nd and last line baut khoob.  Applause Applause
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