Bijli Chamki Baadal Barse, Saari Raat..........

by vipul kumar on February 24, 2011, 06:56:30 AM
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Bijli chamki, baadal barse saari Raat, Saari Raat.....
Ham tere milne ko tarse, Saari Raat, Saari Raat.....

Jaane kya jalta tha andar, hamne ye mahsuus kiya,
Dhua.n utha dil ke andar se, Saari Raat, Saari Raat....

Tum na aaye niind na aayi, aaye bas kuchh aab-e-giraa.n,
Teri aas me naina barse, Saari Raat, Saari Raat....
[aab-e-giraa.n-Precious drops{tears}]


Taajmahal ki sair ko nikle, subah ye maaluum hua,
Fodaa waha.n sir har patthar se, Saari Raat, Saari Raat....

Guunj rahi thi diiware.n, sannate rote phirte the,
Aayi sadaa sunsaan shahar se, Saari Raat, Saari Raat....

Jaane kya sochaa logo ne, jaane kya be-kaifi thi,
Suune ghar par patthar barse, Saari Raat, Saari Raat....
[be-kaifi-Unpleasant]

Kal shab YaaRa Dil jalta tha Jaan sulagti jaati thi,
Fodaa sir diwaar-o-dar se, Saari Raat, Saari Raat....!!




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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2011, 07:39:32 AM »
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wah wah kamaal ki peshkash Sirji.
parhte waqt aisa feel hua jese parh nahi rha Sunn raha hun music CD me.
kamaal hai--just superb --kaise likhte hain aap--
aapka autograph lena hi lena hai mujhe--
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2011, 07:51:57 AM »
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Bahut Khub Vipul JI
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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2011, 08:04:16 AM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Rishi ji....

Aur Nirala ji, Aapko to shukriya kahne ki jarurat nahi hai.
Aaap to ek SHUKRIYA advance book rakha kijiye.Jaise mujhe pata hota hai ki pahla comment aapka aane hi wala hai...
I ll remember you always.......shayad.

Aap, rishi ji, Bekarar ji, sahil ji jaise kuchh dosto ki wajah se likhne ka junun bana rahta hai..
Thanks.
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«Reply #4 on: February 24, 2011, 08:05:27 AM »
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bahot khub vipul ji........

bahot hi umda shayari he apki.....

daad kabul kare
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2011, 08:08:28 AM »
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Thanks Matrix Guy ji.....
Aapki presence bhi kaafi dekhne ko mil jati hai mere kalaam me...
Iske liye bahut bahut shukriya...............
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2011, 08:11:01 AM »
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aree mere hujur thx kis baat ka......

asal me hum lalchi insaan he......aachi poetry ko miss nahi karna chahtey........

aur rahi presence ki baat to mere malik

jaha gud hoga waha hum jesi makhiiya to bhinbhinayegi hi.....
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2011, 08:26:42 AM »
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Vipul sirji--
mujhe sukriya begera ki koi jarurat nahi he--
aapki ghazlon ka mai bas deewaana sa hun--
yahan mai kuch shayrs ko Sir kahta hun aur unki peshkash kabhi miss nhi krta coz they r real shayrs.
aap unme se ek ho--
aur sach poocho to aapko parhna bahut bahut achha lagta hai Usual Smile
aapka sukriya ki aap YO pr aate ho --bas aise hi aate rahiye warna mai aapke ghar aa jaunga laughing4Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2011, 12:07:37 PM »
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hahahaaaa. Chalo kabhi aapko ghar bhi bula lenge..

actually, Ham to bas likhte hai... Unke maayne to padhne wale ke dil me hote hai......
Warna kisi ke liye yahi ghazale.n aur nazme.n Faqat ek kaaghaz se jyada nahi hogi....
Main shukriya isliye kahta hu ki aap sab un maayno ko apne jazbaat dekar Zinda karte hai aur Har ek Harf me ek Kahaani dhundte hai...
Shukriya.....
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