~*~ Bouray hum hein dosto ~*~:Ghazals

ajnabii

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tum bhi khafa ho loog bhi burhum hein dosto
ab ho chala yaqin keh bouray hum hein dosto

kis ko hamare hal se nisbut hai kya karein
aankhein to dushmanooN ki bhi purnum hein dosto

apne siwa humaray na hoonay ka ghum kise
apni talaash mein to humein hum hein dosto

kuch aaj shaam hi se hai dil bhi bujha bujha
kuch shahr ke chiragh bhi mudhum hein dosto

iss shahr-e aarjo se bhi baahar nikal chalo
ab dil ki raunaqein bhi koi dum hein dosto

sub kuch sahi Faraz per itna zaroor hai
dunya mein aise loog bauhut kum hein dosto


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Shikha12

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Re: ~*~ Aik Asi Ghazal jo har larki kay dil ki awaz hogi ~*~

«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2007, 08:30:42 AM »

Quote from: "ajnabii"

Chhalke hai aankhein, Tarse hai mann yeh,
Ruki hui hai dhadkan, Ruki Ruki saansein…
Dagmagaa rahii hoon main phir chalte chalte,
Mujhe thaamaa tha mere bachpan mey jaisey,
Gudiaa ko apni apna haath phir thamaa dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Woh aangan ka jhoola kya ab bhi pada hai,
Woh Tulsii ka paudha kya ab bhi khada hai…
Woh satrangii chhatrii, woh baarish ka mausam,
Kaagaz ki kashtii phir mere liye ek bana dey…
Ek baar mujhko phir sey woh bachpan lauta dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Woh gudiya ki kangghee, woh khel khiloney,
Woh mera takiyaa aur woh mere bichhoney…
Meri kuch kitaabein thii, kuch adhoore sapne,
Sapne woh mujhko ek baar phir sey lauta dey…
Yaa saamaan mera Ganga mey bahaa dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Kaise jigar ke tukde ko kar diya tuney paraaya,
Doli ke waqt tuney jab kalejey se lagayaa,
Maine sunaa thaa baabul tera dil ro raha tha,
Kaise rotey dil ko tuney phir thaa manaayaa…
Baabul waise he dil ko ek baar phir tu mana ley…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Lagi thhartharaane jab lau zindagi ki,
Maine lakh tujhko diye thhe ishaare,
Maa ko bheji thi khat mey ek kali murjhaayi,
Bheji naa raakhi, chodh di bhai ki sooni kalaai…
Magar betii tumhari ho chuki thii parayii,
Shayad naseeb apna samjhaa naa paayii,
Aakhiri baar meri aaj tum phir kar do vidaaii…
Lekin vidaaii se pehle apni nazar mey basaa ley…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley…

Mujhey khaakh kar ney ko chala thaa jab zamaana…
Kyon roye thhe tum bhi, mujhey yeh bataana,
Aankhon mey ab naa aansoo phir sey laanaa…
Bhatakti hai ruuh meri, tere pyaar ko phir sey…
Maathhey pey haat rakh kar meri ruh ko sulaa dey…
Baabul mujhey phir sey tu apne paas bula ley

Please tell me App Ko Yeah Ghazal kasi Lagi

Very Nice.... :evil:

This has been written by me only.... sad5

See this link... http://www.yoindia.com/forums/baabul-a-last-lost-dream-of-a-girl-vt21425.html

and also http://shikha12.wordpress.com/

Now... this is the Limit of Copying other's Stuff and Posting without mentioning the Original Writer Name... sad5

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Shikha12

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Re: ~*~ Bouray hum hein dosto ~*~

«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2007, 10:24:24 AM »

Quote from: "ajnabii"

tum bhi khafa ho loog bhi burhum hein dosto
ab ho chala yaqin keh bouray hum hein dosto

kis ko hamare hal se nisbut hai kya karein
aankhein to dushmanooN ki bhi purnum hein dosto

apne siwa humaray na hoonay ka ghum kise
apni talaash mein to humein hum hein dosto

kuch aaj shaam hi se hai dil bhi bujha bujha
kuch shahr ke chiragh bhi mudhum hein dosto

iss shahr-e aarjo se bhi baahar nikal chalo
ab dil ki raunaqein bhi koi dum hein dosto

sub kuch sahi "Faraz" per itna zaroor hai
dunya mein aise loog bauhut kum hein dosto

Very Smart... =D>
Now this is gazal by Ahmed Faraz ... even the last sher of this shayari denotes name of Original Poet i.e. "Faraz"

You are Again Copying someone's Poem and writing here... without even mentioning the original writer name...

Please Try to Be Original.... Or if you can't write original poetry.....
Atleast try to be True to Yourself by giving proper credit to the Original Writer....


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~*~ Bouray hum hein dosto ~*~

«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2007, 03:05:40 PM »

Mr. anjabii,
Welcome to Yoindia..

Few words I would like to share with you..

If you like some poetry which is not written by you but still you feel that its good to share then please do share, only small request is that you mention name of the original author and if you donno the name then simply use "NM" somewhere with the poem.

This way we just to give full respect to the original author for his / her valued work. I hope you too will encourage the passion of a poet.


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~*~ Bouray hum hein dosto ~*~

«Reply #4 on: June 21, 2007, 11:01:25 AM »

Bahoot Acchi Gazal Hai Ajnabi Ji,.


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