CHAAND GHATAAON MEIN KAHEEN ................... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: February 15, 2014, 02:12:18 PM »
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NazroN   se   jo   bachta    mera   Mahboob  gaya  hai
Chhup   kar   kahin  padhne   mere  Maktoob  gaya  hai


ZulfoN  meiN  chhupaaye  hue  haiN  woh  Rukh - e - Zeba
Ya   Chaand   ghataoN   meiN  kahiN   doob   gaya   hai


Pur-khaar  hai  ,  phir  bhi  mujhe  Gulzaar  lage  hai
Is   Raah    se   shaayad    mera   Mahboob   gaya  hai


Rota , kabhi  hansta  , kabhi   rukta ,  kabhi   chalta
Naam   aap   ka   leta    koi    Majzoob    gaya   hai


Targheeb  jo   deti   haiN   'Hasan'   bay - amali  kee
Abb   aisi   Rawayaat   se   jee    oob    gaya    hai



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* meri eik purani ghazal ( 1993 )
Maktoob = letter ;  Rukhe zeba = khubsurat chehra ;Rawayat=tradition/saying
purkhar = kanton bhari ; gulzar = phoolon bhari;Targheeb = Encourage ;
majzoob = absorbed in divine thoughts ; be-amali=inaction
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नज़रों से  जो  बचता  मेरा  महबूब  गया है
छुप  क र कहीं  पढ़ने  मेरे  मक्तूब गया है

ज़ुल्फ़ों  में  छुपाये  हुए  हैं  वह  रूखे ज़ेबा
या  चाँद  घटाओं  में  कहीं   डूब  गया है

पुरख़ार  है  फिर भी  मुझे  गुलज़ार लगे है
इस राह  से  शायद  मेरा  महबूब  गया है

रोता,कभी हँसता ,कभी रुकता ,कभी चलता
नाम  आप का  लेता कोई  मजज़ूब गया है  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

तरग़ीब जो  देती हैं  'हसन'  बे-अमली की
अब ऐसी  रवायात  से  जी  ऊब  गया है



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«Reply #16 on: February 15, 2014, 02:29:57 PM »
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NazroN   se   jo   bachta    mera   Mahboob  gaya  hai
Chhup   kar   kahin  padhne   mere  Maktoob  gaya  hai


ZulfoN  meiN  chhupaaye  hue  haiN  woh  Rukh - e - Zeba
Ya   Chaand   ghataoN   meiN  kahiN   doob   gaya   hai


Pur-khaar  hai  ,  phir  bhi  mujhe  Gulzaar  lage  hai
Is   Raah    se   shaayad    mera   Mahboob   gaya  hai


Rota , kabhi  hansta  , kabhi   rukta ,  kabhi   chalta
Naam   aap   ka   leta    koi    Majzoob    gaya   hai


Targheeb  jo   deti   haiN   'Hasan'   bay - amali  kee
Abb   aisi   Rawayaat   se   jee    oob    gaya    hai


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«Reply #17 on: February 15, 2014, 04:52:53 PM »
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waaaaaah kya baat hai Hasan sahab... kamaal ki ghazal... Usual Smile

bahut bahut khooooooooooob.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #18 on: February 15, 2014, 09:59:50 PM »
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«Reply #19 on: February 16, 2014, 02:02:09 PM »
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Very Beautiful!!!

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«Reply #20 on: February 16, 2014, 05:09:37 PM »
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MUKESH JI , SHUIKRIYA , DUAAEIN.
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«Reply #21 on: February 16, 2014, 07:47:35 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही उम्दा पेशकश.....दिली दाद कुबुल करें.....

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thanks amit ji . God bless you .
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«Reply #22 on: February 17, 2014, 01:14:36 AM »
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As Always Saheb..Its Just beautiful

Bahut Bahut Khooooob...!!!!!!


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shukriya Khwahish ji . Duaaein .
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«Reply #23 on: February 17, 2014, 03:33:45 PM »
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thanks Saman Firdous. Duaaein.
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«Reply #24 on: February 17, 2014, 04:30:37 PM »
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superb, dhero daad
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«Reply #25 on: February 17, 2014, 05:16:51 PM »
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पुरख़ार  है  फिर भी  मुझे  गुलज़ार लगे है
इस राह  से  शायद  मेरा  महबूब  गया है

रोता,कभी हँसता ,कभी रुकता ,कभी चलता
नाम  आप का  लेता कोई  मजज़ूब गया है

तरग़ीब जो  देती हैं  'हसन'  बे-अमली की
अब ऐसी  रवायात  से  जी  ऊब  गया है

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Aapkee 21 saal puraani ghazal dil ko chho gayee.Aik RAU ke saath Bahut-bahut mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
Bahut mamnoon hoon Sudhir ji.
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«Reply #26 on: February 18, 2014, 12:59:08 PM »
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RAJAN KONDAL JI , SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #27 on: February 19, 2014, 02:34:40 PM »
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shukriya akash Basudev jii . Khush rahye.
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«Reply #28 on: February 21, 2014, 12:53:40 PM »
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Rajan Kondal ji , Thanks a lot .
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«Reply #29 on: February 21, 2014, 09:52:52 PM »
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Thanks Akash Basuev ji.
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