FALAK SE CHAAND - Eik tarahi ghazal .............HASAN

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''Falak se cha and ko laane mein der lagti hai''®
K zulmaton ko mitaane mein der lagti hai

Abhi to  aaye ho , kuchh der baith  kar  jaana
K haal  dil ka sunaane mein der lagti hai

Hudood saari mohabbat ki tod dein woh , magar
Simat ke baanhon mein same mein der lagti hai

Khade hain baam pe saj dhaj ke, jaan lein yeh , magar
K jaadu hum pe chalaane mein der lagti hai

Rida-e-asmat-e-niswaaN bhi kitni   nazuk  hai
Lag a Jo daagh , mitaane mein der lagti hai

Mahal na pyaar ke dhaa dena badgumani mein
Imaratein yeh banaane mein der lagti hai

Kisi bhi taur , 'Has an' , naaz Dilbaron ke  uthha
Jo rooth jaayein , manaane mein der lagti hai

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® Is tarahi ghazal ka misra-e-tarah
Zulmat - andhera , rida e asmat e niswaan -
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2014, 01:34:29 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob bhaisaheb dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2014, 02:11:26 PM »
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''Falak se cha and ko laane mein der lagti hai''®
K zulmaton ko mitaane mein der lagti hai

Abhi to  aaye ho , kuchh der baith  kar  jaana
K haal  dil ka sunaane mein der lagti hai

Hudood saari mohabbat ki tod dein woh , magar
Simat ke baanhon mein same mein der lagti hai

Khade hain baam pe saj dhaj ke, jaan lein yeh , magar
K jaadu hum pe chalaane mein der lagti hai

Rida-e-asmat-e-niswaaN bhi kitni   nazuk  hai
Lag a Jo daagh , mitaane mein der lagti hai

Mahal na pyaar ke dhaa dena badgumani mein
Imaratein yeh banaane mein der lagti hai

Kisi bhi taur , 'Has an' , naaz Dilbaron ke  uthha
Jo rooth jaayein , manaane mein der lagti hai

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® Is tarahi ghazal ka misra-e-tarah
Zulmat - andhera , rida e asmat e niswaan -
Aurat ki pavitrta ki chadar



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«Reply #3 on: January 03, 2014, 02:34:04 PM »
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Mahal na pyaar ke dhaa dena badgumani mein
Imaratein yeh banaane mein der lagti hai

wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,Bahut khoob ghazal kahi hai aapne.Really ye sher bahut umdaa laga.Aik RAU ke saath dili daad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #4 on: January 03, 2014, 02:55:00 PM »
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waah waah waah Sir Lajawaab, bahut hi khoobsurat....
Dheron daad quoool karein...
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«Reply #5 on: January 03, 2014, 03:09:17 PM »
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waaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan sahab.. Usual Smile

kamaal ka likha hai aapne.. bahut bahut khoooooooooooob.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #6 on: January 03, 2014, 03:11:12 PM »
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wah wah wah wah umda kafi umda
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«Reply #7 on: January 03, 2014, 03:25:30 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बेहतरीन पेशकश......ढेरों दाद और दिली मुबारकबाद.......

Hudood saari mohabbat ki tod dein woh , magar
Simat ke baanhon mein same mein der lagti hai

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«Reply #8 on: January 03, 2014, 06:24:28 PM »
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''Falak se cha and ko laane mein der lagti hai''®
K zulmaton ko mitaane mein der lagti hai

Abhi to  aaye ho , kuchh der baith  kar  jaana
K haal  dil ka sunaane mein der lagti hai

Hudood saari mohabbat ki tod dein woh , magar
Simat ke baanhon mein samaane mein der lagti hai

Khade hain baam pe saj dhaj ke, jaan lein yeh , magar
K jaadu hum pe chalaane mein der lagti hai

Rida-e-asmat-e-niswaaN bhi kitni   nazuk  hai
Lag a Jo daagh , mitaane mein der lagti hai

Mahal na pyaar ke dhaa dena badgumani mein
Imaratein yeh banaane mein der lagti hai

Kisi bhi taur , 'Has an' , naaz Dilbaron ke  uthha
Jo rooth jaayein , manaane mein der lagti hai

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® Is tarahi ghazal ka misra-e-tarah
Zulmat - andhera , rida e asmat e niswaan -
Aurat ki pavitrta ki chadar





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«Reply #9 on: January 03, 2014, 06:48:54 PM »
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Aadaab Sir
Hamesha ki tarah..behatreen

Khade hain baam pe saj dhaj ke, jaan lein yeh , magar
K jaadu hum pe chalaane mein der lagti hai

Rida-e-asmat-e-niswaaN bhi kitni   nazuk  hai
Lag a Jo daagh , mitaane mein der lagti hai

kya kahne in ashaaron ke
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah hasan ji... bahut hi umda bahut hi behtareeeeeeeeeen peshkash rahi... kai baar padhliya par dil nahi bhara... hazaron hazaron daad qubool kare...
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«Reply #11 on: January 03, 2014, 08:31:05 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: January 03, 2014, 09:43:12 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan sir, beautiful ghazal, mazaa aa gaya padh kar, dheroN daad aur ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se.
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«Reply #13 on: January 03, 2014, 10:01:02 PM »
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Khade hain baam pe saj dhaj ke, jaan lein yeh , magar
K jaadu hum pe chalaane mein der lagti hai

Mahal na pyaar ke dhaa dena badgumani mein
Imaratein yeh banaane meinder lagti hai

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«Reply #14 on: January 03, 2014, 11:02:21 PM »
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Corrigendum  - 3rd sher mein lafz 'same' ghalti se type ho gaya hai. Sahi lafz  ' aane ' hai. Sorry for the  mistake.
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