' PYAASE KO DARYA PE JAANA PADTA HAI ' ( eik tarahi ghazal ).... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: November 09, 2013, 01:02:38 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir, ayk khoobsoorat ghazal, sabhi ash'aar ayk se badhkar ayk.
Housla afzai k liye shukriya Iftakhar saheb
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«Reply #16 on: November 09, 2013, 02:39:44 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab...!

WaaaH waaH waaH janab waaH behad khoobsurat aur laajawaab gazal kahi hai aapne...
Bade hi umdaa aur khoob sher huye haiN sabhi... is khoob aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...
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«Reply #17 on: November 09, 2013, 06:12:48 AM »
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nice,sir
shukriya MB saheb .
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«Reply #18 on: November 09, 2013, 09:45:22 PM »
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waah waah ... bahaut khoob Hasan sahib ... ek mukhtasar ghazal mein bhi bahaut saaraa lutf bhar diya aapne .... dheron daad aap ko !!!
bahut shukrguzarho on zarra saheb
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«Reply #19 on: November 10, 2013, 03:08:23 AM »
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kyaaa baat haiiiiiiiiiiiiiii waaah waah sir ji!!!!!!!!!
thanks pawanji .God bless you .
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«Reply #20 on: November 10, 2013, 07:13:45 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

waah hasan jee..behad umda..

sabhi aashar ek se badh kar ek..

Dhero dhero daad..happy9

thanks nashwani ji .
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«Reply #21 on: November 10, 2013, 08:49:37 AM »
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"Pyaase   ko   Darya   pe    jaana    padta   hai"*
Apni  pyaas  ko   khud  hi  bujhana  padta   hai


Saaghar  bhar  de  , Saaqi  ka  kaam  hai    lekin
Jaam - e - Maye  to  khud  hi  uthhana  padta  hai


Lagte  haiN  bahakne   Zaahid   ke   Qadam  aksar
Masjid    jaate   jab    Maikhaana    padta   hai


Hum  rootheiN  to  roothha  kareiN , unki  bala  se
Woh  rootheiN  to  Hum  ko   manaana   padta   hai


Husn  ka  jaadu  sar  chadh  kar  bole  hai  'Hasan'
Har  taur  se   Dil   ko   samjhaana   padta   hai


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*MHN Group ke tarahi Mushaire , Sep.7 , 2013 ka
Misra e tarah jismein yeh ghazal pesh ki gai
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" प्यासे  को  दरया  पे जाना  पड़ता है " *
अपनी  प्यास को खुद ही बुझाना पड़ता है


साग़र भर दे  साक़ी का  काम  है लेकिन
जाम-ए -मय  तो खुद ही उठाना पड़ता है


लगते हैं बहकने  ज़ाहिद के  क़दम अक्सर
मस्जिद  जाते  जब  मैख़ाना   पड़ता  है


हम रूठें तो  रूठा  करें , उनकी बला  से
वह  रूठें तो  हम  को  मनाना  पड़ता है
 

हुस्न का जादू सर चढ़ कर बोले है 'हसन'
हर  तौर से  दिल को  समझाना पड़ता है



Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Saheb....


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«Reply #22 on: November 10, 2013, 09:39:16 AM »
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"Pyaase   ko   Darya   pe    jaana    padta   hai"*
Apni  pyaas  ko   khud  hi  bujhana  padta   hai
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Saaghar  bhar  de  , Saaqi  ka  kaam  hai    lekin
Jaam - e - Maye  to  khud  hi  uthhana  padta  hai
duniya dar-al -asbaab hai. per jannat mein aisa nahin hoga icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Lagte  haiN  bahakne   Zaahid   ke   Qadam  aksar
Masjid    jaate   jab    Maikhaana    padta   hai
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smileyzaahid ke qadam mustahkam hote hain hum jaise logon ke bhatak sakte hain allah muaaf kare aur saabit qadam rakhe amin

Hum  rootheiN  to  roothha  kareiN , unki  bala  se
Woh  rootheiN  to  Hum  ko   manaana   padta   hai
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))bahut puraani chalan hai iske bina tumharaa guzaraa nahin hai ji

Husn  ka  jaadu  sar  chadh  kar  bole  hai  'Hasan'
Har  taur  se   Dil   ko   samjhaana   padta   hai

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hardper dil to bachcha hai ji
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*MHN Group ke tarahi Mushaire , Sep.7 , 2013 ka
Misra e tarah jismein yeh ghazal pesh ki gai
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" प्यासे  को  दरया  पे जाना  पड़ता है " *
अपनी  प्यास को खुद ही बुझाना पड़ता है


साग़र भर दे  साक़ी का  काम  है लेकिन
जाम-ए -मय  तो खुद ही उठाना पड़ता है


लगते हैं बहकने  ज़ाहिद के  क़दम अक्सर
मस्जिद  जाते  जब  मैख़ाना   पड़ता  है


हम रूठें तो  रूठा  करें , उनकी बला  से
वह  रूठें तो  हम  को  मनाना  पड़ता है
 

हुस्न का जादू सर चढ़ कर बोले है 'हसन'
हर  तौर से  दिल को  समझाना पड़ता है



fazal sahab khusboodaar ghazal icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #23 on: November 10, 2013, 05:40:45 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
bahut baht shukriya suman ji . duaaein .
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«Reply #24 on: November 10, 2013, 10:02:34 PM »
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bahot khooob, hamesha ki tarha lajawaaaab...
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«Reply #25 on: November 10, 2013, 10:05:22 PM »
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just beautiful thoughts hasan ji ,...........lajawab ghazal ke liye bohat c daad,......
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«Reply #26 on: November 11, 2013, 04:44:51 AM »
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Aadaab Sir
bahut pyari ghazal hai.
kaafi dino ke baad aapka jaadu sar chadkar bola.
maza aa gay padhkar. dil khush kar dene vaali peshkash

mukesh ji , bahut shukriya ,
zarrra anawazi aapki .
bahut duaaein .
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«Reply #27 on: November 11, 2013, 08:10:01 AM »
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wahh wahh wahh... kya baat hai...
Thanks Saman . God bless you .
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«Reply #28 on: November 11, 2013, 07:19:20 PM »
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" प्यासे  को  दरया  पे जाना  पड़ता है " *
अपनी  प्यास को खुद ही बुझाना पड़ता है


साग़र भर दे  साक़ी का  काम  है लेकिन
जाम-ए -मय  तो खुद ही उठाना पड़ता है
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
shukriya , badi nawazish Sudhir ji . duaaein.
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«Reply #29 on: November 11, 2013, 11:58:44 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Waaaaaaaaaah Hasan ji... behtareen ashaar sab ek se badhkar ek... bahut umda ghazal...aapko bahut bahut bahut mubarak ho...
Aqsh saheba , bahut shukrguzaar hoon . aapke tabsiron se bahut housla milta hai . shukriya.
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