Chiragon Ko Benoor Mat Karna

by Rayees Figar on October 03, 2010, 10:53:29 AM
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              GHAZAL

Naya tum ishq mein paida koi dastoor mat karna.
jubaN se naam lekar tum mujhe mash-hoor mat karna.
Ana wo tod de apni sharafat chhor de apni.
kisi muflis ko itna bhee kabhi majboor mat karna.
Bisaat inkee nahi beshak shab-e-daijoor ke aage.
Magar nanhe chiragoN ko kabhee benoor mat karna.
ye dunya haq pasandoN ko kabhee jeene nahi degi.
Yahan paida koee Sukrat ya Mansoor mat karna.
Bina soche utha to aaina tumne liya lekin.
Agar sach aaina bole to chaknachoor mat karna.


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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2010, 11:33:36 AM »
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Kya baat hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Umda Rayees ji..

aap tho aate hi cha gaye... Bahoot khoob!!

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«Reply #2 on: October 03, 2010, 12:02:03 PM »
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wahhhhhhh Rayees ji kya khubb gazal kahi hai aapne...bht achchi shuruat ji.....
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2010, 12:07:23 PM »
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Janab Rayees Figar Saheb,

Aapka yoindia par hum tahedil se isteqbaal karte haiN. Bahut nafees aur balandpaya ghazal aap ne yahan post ki hai. Ghazal ke sabhi ashaar baRe hi maanakhez hain. Aap ke naam se Dilawar Figar yaad aa gaye jo k aik bahut baRe tanzomizaah shaayir the. Kaafi sadhi hui murassa ghazal hai ye aapki. Aisi khoobsurat ghazal k liye aap mubarakbaad k mustahaq hain aur hazaaron daad k bhi, so ise qubul kijiye aur apni aamad se hameiN bahrawar farmaate rahiye.

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             GHAZAL

Naya tum ishq mein paida koi dastoor mat karna.
jubaN se naam lekar tum mujhe mash-hoor mat karna.
Ana wo tod de apni sharafat chhor de apni.
kisi muflis ko itna bhee kabhi majboor mat karna.
Bisaat inkee nahi beshak shab-e-daijoor ke aage.
Magar nanhe chiragoN ko kabhee benoor mat karna.
ye dunya haq pasandoN ko kabhee jeene nahi degi.
Yahan paida koee Sukrat ya Mansoor mat karna.
Bina soche utha to aaina tumne liya lekin.
Agar sach aaina bole to chaknachoor mat karna.


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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2010, 12:09:09 PM »
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              GHAZAL

Naya tum ishq mein paida koi dastoor mat karna.
jubaN se naam lekar tum mujhe mash-hoor mat karna.
Ana wo tod de apni sharafat chhor de apni.
kisi muflis ko itna bhee kabhi majboor mat karna.
Bisaat inkee nahi beshak shab-e-daijoor ke aage.
Magar nanhe chiragoN ko kabhee benoor mat karna.
ye dunya haq pasandoN ko kabhee jeene nahi degi.
Yahan paida koee Sukrat ya Mansoor mat karna.
Bina soche utha to aaina tumne liya lekin.
Agar sach aaina bole to chaknachoor mat karna.


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Bahut bahut Khoob Rayees Figar Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2010, 03:26:16 PM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Rayees jee..bahaut ache..
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2010, 04:26:00 PM »
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Rayees Sahab Aadaab O tasleem !

Aapka Yo India ke mehfil meiN isteqbal hai....... Usual Smile
Yeh Shayad aapki paheli kalaam hai yahaaN Kafi umdaa
Ahsaas o khalaayoN se saji is kalaam per dil se daad
Hazir hai .,...... Daad kabool kijiye...... Usual Smile

 




              GHAZAL

Naya tum ishq mein paida koi dastoor mat karna.
jubaN se naam lekar tum mujhe mash-hoor mat karna.

Kia baat hai janab waah bahut khoob daad...
 



Ana wo tod de apni sharafat chhor de apni.
kisi muflis ko itna bhee kabhi majboor mat karna.

Waah waah kia baat hai bahut umdaa janab daad ..
Aik baat kaheNge gar aap pahele misre meiN pahele apni ke jagaaH Khudki kaheN to sher aur bhi achcha lageNga aik misre meiN do baar aik word aana gair munaseeb sa lagta hai hume.... Usual Smile   




Bisaat inkee nahi beshak shab-e-daijoor ke aage.
Magar nanhe chiragoN ko kabhee benoor mat karna.

Waah Waah waah kia baat hai bahut umdaa janab bahut khoob dil se daad kabool kijiye Usual Smile   



ye dunya haq pasandoN ko kabhee jeene nahi degi.
Yahan paida koee Sukrat ya Mansoor mat karna.

Oye hoye waah janab waah ...... Dil se daad janab is sher per aapke is sher se aisa yakeen ho gaya hai hume ke aap kafi umdaa fankaar hai ...... Aapka is bazm meiN fir se isteqbal karte hai..... Usual Smile 



Bina soche utha to aaina tumne liya lekin.
Agar sach aaina bole to chaknachoor mat karna.

Waah waah waah janab kia kaheN bus waah bahut umdaa bahut khoob dil ki gehraai se daad ...... Usual Smile

         





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Janab Rayees Sahab aapki yeH umdaa pesh kash dil ke behad kareeb rahi.... Dil ki gehrai se daad kabool kijiye...

Aate rahiye......
Likhate rahiye......
Khush o aabaad rahiye......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile

         

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«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2010, 12:22:38 PM »
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Janab Rayees Figaar Sahab aapka Yoindia family mein swaagat hai. Aapne apne first attempt mein hi kamaal ki ghazal pesh ki jo aapki aala sukhanwari aur ilm-e-shayari ka pataa deti hai . Waise to tamaam ashaar  behtreen hain lekin meri nazar mein 2nd sher hasil-e-ghazal hai.

Is behad khoobsurat, murassa, munfarid, taghazzul se bharpoor, nafees, purasar peshkash ke liye aap dad-o-tehseen ke haqdaar hain. Guzarish hai ke aate rahiye aur apni takhliqaat se hamein mehzooz karte rahiye.

(Riyaz Ashna)
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«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2010, 06:54:53 PM »
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 Ishq me koi aisa dastoor nahi hota,
 Ishq ke karan koi aashiq mash-hoor nahi hota.
 Ishq me bhi sharafat chhodi nahi jaati,
 Aashiq ke raste me koi rukavat nahi aati.
 Ishq se to pyar ke chirag jalte hain,
 Andhere zindgi se humari door hote hain.
 Ishq per daale agar koi manhoos buri nazar,
 To wallah aaine bhi ro kar chaknachoor hote hain.
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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2010, 03:53:44 AM »
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              GHAZAL

Naya tum ishq mein paida koi dastoor mat karna.
jubaN se naam lekar tum mujhe mash-hoor mat karna.
Ana wo tod de apni sharafat chhor de apni.
kisi muflis ko itna bhee kabhi majboor mat karna.
Bisaat inkee nahi beshak shab-e-daijoor ke aage.
Magar nanhe chiragoN ko kabhee benoor mat karna.
ye dunya haq pasandoN ko kabhee jeene nahi degi.
Yahan paida koee Sukrat ya Mansoor mat karna.
Bina soche utha to aaina tumne liya lekin.
Agar sach aaina bole to chaknachoor mat karna.


Rayees Figar

[shab-e-daijoor = andheri raat]

Janab Rayees Figar Saheb,

Aapka yoindia par hum tahedil se isteqbaal karte haiN. Bahut nafees aur balandpaya ghazal aap ne yahan post ki hai. Ghazal ke sabhi ashaar baRe hi maanakhez hain. Aap ke naam se Dilawar Figar yaad aa gaye jo k aik bahut baRe tanzomizaah shaayir the. Kaafi sadhi hui murassa ghazal hai ye aapki. Aisi khoobsurat ghazal k liye aap mubarakbaad k mustahaq hain aur hazaaron daad k bhi, so ise qubul kijiye aur apni aamad se hameiN bahrawar farmaate rahiye.

(Waquif Ansari)

Janab Waquif Ansari sb.assalamo-alaikum Apne meri ghazal parhi saraha aur meri hosla afzaee ki behad mamnoon hoon.main abhi naya hoon aapka kalam bhi parhoonga insha allah.
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2010, 04:49:15 AM »
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GHAZAL

Aks mera na too dikha mujhko
Meri nazron mein mat gira mujhko
Mujhko rahne de mera jaisa hi
Apne jaisa na too bana mujhko
Ek sookha hua shajar hoon main
Itna zyada bhi mat jhuka mujhko
Bhool jaaun na main udaan apni
Chor kuchh der tak khula mujhko
Main hoon khusbu mujhe bikharna hai
Ae hawa door tak udaa mujhko
Ek paisa faqeer ne lekar
Bakhsh dee dher si duaa mujhko
Hindu muslim to phir banaana tu
Pahle insaan to banaa mujhko

Rayees 'Figaar'
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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2010, 04:50:36 AM »
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Ghazal
Unke chehre pe barhami dekhi.
Zindgi ik jagha thami dekhi.
Dharkane dil ki ruk gayin shayad.
Dard me aaj kuch kami dekhi.
Chand qatre gire thai aankho se.
Khusk dharti me bhi nami dekhi.
Rat bhar aasma bhi roya hai
Ghass aangan ki shabnami dekhi.
Bhar gaya lo "figaar" zakhme dil.
Barf sehraon me jami dekhi.
       Rayees "figaar"
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«Reply #12 on: October 06, 2010, 07:06:54 AM »
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Waqai Mein Kabeel e Tareef Hai Aapki Peshkash
Par Janaab Aapki Ek Baat Dil Ko Badi Hi Khatiki
Yun Kisi Ke Comment Ko An Dekha Karna Achhi Baat Nahi
Chahe Kam Lafzon Mein Hi Kyun Na Ho Likha Par Kisi Ne
Aapko Dilse Comment Diya Hoga...Aur Mera Maan Na Hai
Dil Se Wah Bhi Nikle Woh Bhi Bohat Hota Hai Khair.
Soch Apni Apni...

Shad o Aabad Rahen.

Yaash.
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«Reply #13 on: October 06, 2010, 07:16:05 AM »
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aji rayees sahab bas wah wah bolne ko jee karta he 2nd or 4th sher gajab dha gaya...

behetreen peshkash~
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«Reply #14 on: October 07, 2010, 06:18:39 PM »
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bahot khub..........
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