Dafn karke jo lauta maa apni.....( Ghayel )

by Sajid_Ghayel on June 24, 2011, 12:45:15 AM
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Zehno dil ki yeh ek ladaiee hai
Jo bhi achcha lage buraiee hai

Kabhi faka kabhi numaish hai
Meri ghazlo ki yeh kamaiee hai

Dafn karke jo lauta Maa apni
Usse samjho kya yeh judaiee hai

Ujdi basti azza.N yeh deti hai
Mere maula kaha khudaiee hai

Jo tu samjhe ghazal kahe Ghayel
Warna pani ki yeh likhayee hai

Sajid Ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2011, 12:58:22 AM »
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NICE
Zehno dil ki yeh ek ladaiee hai
Jo bhi achcha lage buraiee hai

Kabhi faka kabhi numaish hai
Meri ghazlo ki yeh kamaiee hai

Dafn karke jo lauta Maa apni
Usse samjho kya yeh judaiee hai

Ujdi basti azza.N yeh deti hai
Mere maula kaha khudaiee hai

Jo tu samjhe ghazal kahe Ghayel
Warna pani ki yeh likhayee hai

Sajid Ghayel

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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2011, 06:46:35 AM »
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Janab Sajid Ghayel Saheb! Adab!

Aapki saari mehnat raaigaaN si maaloom hone lagti hai jab maiN ye dekhta hooN k ghazal k kuchh micre bahr se khaarij haiN. Zara si ehtiyaat se kaam ban sakta hai. Main kuchh aur na kah kar bus yahi kahooNga:

Bahr meiN kab kahoge tum GHAYEL
Bahr se kya tiri laRaaii hai

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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2011, 04:20:25 PM »
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wah ghayal sir ji…
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