Daleelon se kahi baat bhi radd hoti hai........................Aqsh...

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Ishq ne jab bhi, kiya majboor hai
Husn par chaya, phir naya guroor hai

Iski topi uske sir, aur uski topi iske sir
Arre mere bhai ,yehi toh ab dastoor hai

BarsoN mannatoN ke baad, paaya tha jise
Usi aulaad se hui, aankh maa ki ranjoor hai

Haqq auroN ka maarkar, kama liya daulat
Tabhi ayyaash beta aaj, nashe meiN choor hai

HasrathoN se nikla hai, rozgaar doondhne
Dafna de khwaabon ko, abhi dilli door hai

Jisko jaisa dekha, waise hi phir paana chaha
Nakal karta hua, aadmi hai ya langoor hai

DaleeloN se kahi baat bhi, radd hoti hai “Aqsh”
Aaj ke daur ka insaan hua, bada magroor hai

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«Reply #1 on: December 09, 2013, 06:34:53 PM »
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Haqq auroN ka maarkar, kama liya daulat
Tabhi ayyaash beta aaj, nashe meiN choor hai

HasrathoN se nikla hai, rozgaar doondhne
Dafna de khwaabon ko, abhi dilli door hai

waaah waaah Aqsh ji aaj kuch nasihat wala kalaam pesh kiya hai,
boht bohut achha likha hai ,lajawaab
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«Reply #2 on: December 09, 2013, 06:56:23 PM »
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Bahutkhoob .Bahut achhe baa-maani , sanjeeda ashaar hain is ghazal men . Har sher qabil e tawajjo. Bahut bahut daad aur iRau.
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«Reply #3 on: December 09, 2013, 07:07:00 PM »
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 Applause chuteele aur maanikhez ashaaron ne ghazab ka kamaal kar dikhaya hai Aqsh ji...dheron daad-o-mubaarak apko !
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«Reply #4 on: December 09, 2013, 07:59:44 PM »
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laajawaab par rau shaam ko
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«Reply #5 on: December 09, 2013, 08:27:44 PM »
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Haqq auroN ka maarkar, kama liya daulat
Tabhi ayyaash beta aaj, nashe meiN choor hai

HasrathoN se nikla hai, rozgaar doondhne
Dafna de khwaabon ko, abhi dilli door hai

waaah waaah Aqsh ji aaj kuch nasihat wala kalaam pesh kiya hai,
boht bohut achha likha hai ,lajawaab
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttttt sahal....
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«Reply #6 on: December 09, 2013, 08:28:22 PM »
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Bahutkhoob .Bahut achhe baa-maani , sanjeeda ashaar hain is ghazal men . Har sher qabil e tawajjo. Bahut bahut daad aur iRau.
thank you sooooooooooooooo much hasan ji aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaa...
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«Reply #7 on: December 09, 2013, 08:29:02 PM »
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Applause chuteele aur maanikhez ashaaron ne ghazab ka kamaal kar dikhaya hai Aqsh ji...dheron daad-o-mubaarak apko !
thank you soooooooooo much shara ji...
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«Reply #8 on: December 09, 2013, 08:29:44 PM »
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laajawaab par rau shaam ko
thank you sooooooooooo much sir ji... aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #9 on: December 09, 2013, 08:41:24 PM »
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Bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut Khoob. Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. Dhero daad.
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«Reply #10 on: December 09, 2013, 09:40:27 PM »
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वाह.....बहुत खूब कहा अक्श जी....

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«Reply #11 on: December 09, 2013, 10:14:06 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: December 09, 2013, 10:15:28 PM »
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Ishq ne jab bhi, kiya majboor hai
Husn par chaya, phir naya guroor hai

Iski topi uske sir, aur uski topi iske sir
Arre mere bhai ,yehi toh ab dastoor hai

BarsoN mannatoN ke baad, paaya tha jise
Usi aulaad se hui, maa ki aankh ranjoor hai

Haqq auroN ka maarkar, kama liya daulat
Tabhi ayyaash beta aaj, nashe meiN choor hai

HasrathoN se nikla hai, rozgaar doondhne
Dafna de khwaabon ko, abhi dilli door hai

Jisko jaisa dekha, waise hi phir paana chaha
Nakal karta hua, aadmi hai ya langoor hai

DaleeloN se kahi baat bhi, radd hoti hai “Aqsh”
Aaj ke daur ka insaan hua, bada magroor hai




Bahut Bahut Khoooob Aqsh Jee..Khaas Taur Par yeh 2 ashaar zindagi ki Talq Haqeeqat Bayaan Karti Hui...

BarsoN mannatoN ke baad, paaya tha jise
Usi aulaad se hui, maa ki aankh ranjoor hai

DaleeloN se kahi baat bhi, radd hoti hai “Aqsh”
Aaj ke daur ka insaan hua, bada magroor hai


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«Reply #13 on: December 09, 2013, 10:27:46 PM »
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Ishq ne jab bhi, kiya majboor hai
Husn par chaya, phir naya guroor hai

Iski topi uske sir, aur uski topi iske sir
Arre mere bhai ,yehi toh ab dastoor hai

BarsoN mannatoN ke baad, paaya tha jise
Usi aulaad se hui, maa ki aankh ranjoor hai

Haqq auroN ka maarkar, kama liya daulat
Tabhi ayyaash beta aaj, nashe meiN choor hai

HasrathoN se nikla hai, rozgaar doondhne
Dafna de khwaabon ko, abhi dilli door hai

Jisko jaisa dekha, waise hi phir paana chaha
Nakal karta hua, aadmi hai ya langoor hai

DaleeloN se kahi baat bhi, radd hoti hai “Aqsh”
Aaj ke daur ka insaan hua, bada magroor hai

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqsh ji,Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal se nawaza hai aapne bazm ko.Bahut khoobsurat khayaalaat hain.Meri badhai qabool kijiye
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«Reply #14 on: December 09, 2013, 10:31:05 PM »
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Ishq ne jab bhi, kiya majboor hai
Husn par chaya, phir naya guroor hai

Iski topi uske sir, aur uski topi iske sir
Arre mere bhai ,yehi toh ab dastoor hai

BarsoN mannatoN ke baad, paaya tha jise
Usi aulaad se hui, maa ki aankh ranjoor hai

Haqq auroN ka maarkar, kama liya daulat
Tabhi ayyaash beta aaj, nashe meiN choor hai

HasrathoN se nikla hai, rozgaar doondhne
Dafna de khwaabon ko, abhi dilli door hai

Jisko jaisa dekha, waise hi phir paana chaha
Nakal karta hua, aadmi hai ya langoor hai

DaleeloN se kahi baat bhi, radd hoti hai “Aqsh”
Aaj ke daur ka insaan hua, bada magroor hai




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