Dhaaltey hain sharaab khaak key paikar mein ham!

by abdbundeli on July 01, 2009, 09:25:37 PM
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Meyrey uyoon-o-jigar mein kaheen paltaa hai woh!
Meyrey dil-o-dimaag mein kaheen chaltaa hai woh!!

Roo-b-roo ho to, haqeeqat hai, khushee hai; warnah,
Dil mein shama'a-key kisee noor-saa jaltaa hai woh!

Baad-e-garmaa sey pighaltee hai barf: sarmaa mein,
Meyrey seeney mein shab-o-roz pighaltaa hai woh!

Koun hai? Kis jagah kaa hai? Woh, magar, hai meyraa!
Mein hun hairaan: kis najeeb ko khaltaa hai woh?

Aadmee, aadmee naheen, to, phir woh kyaa hogaa?
Deykhtaa hoon, ki, sirf haath hi maltaa hai woh!

Apney dil mein hai kahaan kyaa? Na bataayen, to kyaa?
Waheen qayaam hai us kaa! Kahaan taltaa hai woh?

Khoob bahteen hain, go, aab-e-uyoon kee dhaareyn:
Aaj jaanaa hai, nihaan ho, waheen galtaa hai woh!

Dhaaltey hain sharaab khaak key paikar mein ham!
Sach to yeh hai, har eik jaam mein dhaltaa hai woh!!

Saath saaye-saa baraabar hai, 'abd', muttahidah!
Ham samajhtey hain, har maqaam pai, chhaltaa hai woh!!

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«Reply #1 on: July 01, 2009, 09:45:30 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob ABD Ji.. Bahoot hi umda .
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2009, 12:39:15 AM »
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Bahut khoob, Abd Ji! Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2009, 12:41:37 AM »
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Bundeli Ji,

Bohot umdah ghazal.
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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2009, 11:29:18 AM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob ABD Ji.. Bahoot hi umda .
Thanks Sophi ji!
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«Reply #5 on: July 02, 2009, 11:33:24 AM »
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Bahut khoob, Abd Ji! Applause

Thanks Deepati ji!
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«Reply #6 on: July 02, 2009, 11:36:17 AM »
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Bundeli Ji,

Bohot umdah ghazal.


Thanks Shayara ji!
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«Reply #7 on: July 02, 2009, 01:20:43 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,vry nice and beautiful creation,bahut acha likha aapne. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: July 02, 2009, 03:26:00 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 02, 2009, 07:23:27 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji,vry nice and beautiful creation,bahut acha likha aapne. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot Madhu!
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«Reply #10 on: July 02, 2009, 07:26:03 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
Thanks bitia Celmira!
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«Reply #11 on: July 02, 2009, 07:27:56 PM »
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Bahot khoob likha hai aapne Abd ji,very nice
Thanks @kaash ji!
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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2009, 11:15:45 AM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji,,,
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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2009, 12:01:10 PM »
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bahoot khoob Abd ji,,,
Thanks Pooja ji!
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