dhundli yaad.sheba

by Sheba on September 04, 2010, 05:34:00 AM
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                    shama mohabbat ki dil ne jalaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin.,
                    dekh tujhe chehra kabhi sharmaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin.,

                        hain zakam dil mein kai lagaaun kis kis ko marham ,
                       dard-e-judai ne tadpaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin,

                       gire the ashq phool pe kisi, tere ghamm mein kabhi ,
                        khabar ye shabnum ne sunaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin ,

                       toofan to nahin tha per bahaar bhi na bann saka tu,
                       gulshan kabhi mera khilaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin,


                       tasweer ab tak teri tassawer mein basi hai sheba...!
                       kis rang se use sajaaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin..!
                            
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2010, 02:16:27 PM »
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achi takhleeq hai aapki ye...................daad qubool keejiye, likhti rahiye



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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2010, 02:34:06 PM »
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bht khubb sheba ji...dard ka ehsaas shabdon me utra hai...bht khub ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2010, 07:29:39 PM »
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Shiba Jee aadaab!

behad achchi tehreer kahi hai aapne Sabhi ashaar achche rahe daad......

likhati rahiye.....
Khush rahiye......
         

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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 11:50:46 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2010, 03:09:45 AM »
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bahut khoob Sheba ji...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 13, 2010, 03:12:22 PM »
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                    shama mohabbat ki dil ne jalaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin.,
                    tujhe dekh kabhi chehra sharmaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin.,

                       zakam kai hain dil mein kis kis ko marham lagaaun,
                       dard-e-judai ne tadpaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin,

                       gire the ashq kisi phool pe tere ghamm mein kabhi ,
                       shabnum ne ye khabar sunaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin ,

                       toofan to nahin tha per bahaar bhi na bann saka tu,
                       gulshan mera kabhi khilaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin,

                       tasweer ab tak teri khyalon mein basi hai sheba...!
                       kis rang se use sajaaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin..!!
                           

class act...sirji
very nice word play.....
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2010, 06:14:28 AM »
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Achchha diction hai aur achchhi tehreer hai magar ye sab tehrereN agar bahr mein hon to phir kya kahne.

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                    shama mohabbat ki dil ne jalaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin.,
                    tujhe dekh kabhi chehra sharmaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin.,

                       zakam kai hain dil mein kis kis ko marham lagaaun,
                       dard-e-judai ne tadpaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin,

                       gire the ashq kisi phool pe tere ghamm mein kabhi ,
                       shabnum ne ye khabar sunaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin ,

                       toofan to nahin tha per bahaar bhi na bann saka tu,
                       gulshan mera kabhi khilaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin,

                       tasweer ab tak teri khyalon mein basi hai sheba...!
                       kis rang se use sajaaya tha ab mujhe yaad nahin..!!
                           
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«Reply #8 on: September 14, 2010, 06:25:08 AM »
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Wah wah Sheba ji bahot khoobsurat aur dard bhari takhleeq hai aapki. Daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #9 on: September 14, 2010, 07:17:24 AM »
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or kya kahun chaliye kuchh apne andaz me keheta hun~

ek tere sath mai bhool jata tha har gam apna
tujhe mujhse door huye kai saal beete

tum sochte hoge tumhare bin marne ka har wada jhuta tha mera
or log kehete he mujhe murda huye kai saal beete

tumne meri gazal ko parayi mohabbat ki nayi rawaanni samjha
log kehete he mujhe dil ki likhe kai saal beete

tumne bewafa kehkar mujhe sar-e-aam ruswa kiya "Abhi"
hame to dard se sagaai kiye kai saal beete~

 
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«Reply #10 on: September 14, 2010, 07:33:34 AM »
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or kya kahun chaliye kuchh apne andaz me keheta hun~

ek tere sath mai bhool jata tha har gam apna
tujhe mujhse door huye kai saal beete

tum sochte hoge tumhare bin marne ka har wada jhuta tha mera
or log kehete he mujhe murda huye kai saal beete

tumne meri gazal ko parayi mohabbat ki nayi rawaanni samjha
log kehete he mujhe dil ki likhe kai saal beete

tumne bewafa kehkar mujhe sar-e-aam ruswa kiya "Abhi"
hame to dard se sagaai kiye kai saal beete~

 

mastam mast abhi ji......too gooddd....

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«Reply #11 on: September 14, 2010, 07:42:20 AM »
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shukriya ji~
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«Reply #12 on: September 17, 2010, 04:59:43 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: September 18, 2010, 05:41:49 AM »
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achi takhleeq hai aapki ye...................daad qubool keejiye, likhti rahiye



aslam


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«Reply #14 on: September 18, 2010, 05:42:20 AM »
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bht khubb sheba ji...dard ka ehsaas shabdon me utra hai...bht khub ji


THANK U KASAK JI
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