Dil Mein Utar Jaane De....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb' / दिल में उतर जाने दे...सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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jee meN aayaa hai mujhe aaj woh kar jaane de
apnee zulfeN mere shaanoN pe bikhar jaane de

jism kee khushboo meree baad-e-saba pahuNcha de
mujhse pahle mere aane kee khabar jaane de

shaakh se kar na juda sabra bhi kar ai gulcheeN
husn kaliyoN ka zara aur nikhar jaane de

do ghadee aur thahar, dekh looN, chehara tera
akash, aankhoN se mere dil meN utar jaane de

tere aagosh meN, maiN khud hee chala aaooNga
aaj, aramaanoN ki,  kashtee ko bhaNwar jaane de

tujh se maiN rah ke juda, zindagee kaise kar looN
jaan bhi, jism se, ai jaane jighar jaane de

roothe dilbar ko yaqeenan hi mana lega 'Raqeeb'
footee taqdeer to ek baar sanwar jaane de
        
                       ---- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


जी में आया है, मुझे आज वो, कर जाने दे
अपनी ज़ुल्फ़ें मेरे शानों पे बिख़र जाने दे

जिस्म की खुश्बू मेरी बादे-सबा पहुँचा दे  
मुझसे पहले मेरे आने की ख़बर जाने दे

शाख से कर न जुदा सब्र भी कर ऐ गुलचीं
हुस्न कलियों का ज़रा और निखर जाने दे

दो घड़ी और ठहर, देख लूँ , चेहरा तेरा
अक्श, आँखों से मेरे, दिल में उतर जाने दे

तेरे आगोश में, मैं ख़ुद ही चला आऊँगा
आज, अरमानों की कश्ती को, 'भंवर' जाने दे

तुझ से मैं रह के जुदा, ज़िन्दगी कैसे कर लूँ  
जान भी, जिस्म से, ऐ जाने जिगर, जाने दे

रूठे दिलबर को यक़ीनन ही मना लेगा 'रक़ीब'
फूटी तक़दीर तो एक बार संवर जाने दे
                            
                ---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

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«Reply #1 on: October 10, 2011, 08:16:39 PM »
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Waah-Waah, kyaa khoob likha hai. Bahut hi acchi lagi aapki ye ghazal mujhe. Bahut hi acche alfaaz se sajaaya hai aapne isse.

Iftakhar Ahmad is ghazal ko bahut sari daad se nawaazta hai.
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«Reply #2 on: October 10, 2011, 09:11:41 PM »
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Bahut Bahut khoob Satish ji... Usual Smile

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 10, 2011, 10:00:38 PM »
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Bahut hee khoobsoorat gazal pesh kee hai aap ne Satish jee!humaaree or se is khoobsoorat rachnaa ke liye shataadhik shubh-kaamnaayeN.......
isee zameen par ek tootee footee koshish meree jaanib se bhee...........


koi kahataa hai tujhe 'shokh' to dil jaltaa hai
phir bhee dil kahtaa hai 'ab jaane bhee de jaane de'
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«Reply #4 on: October 10, 2011, 11:35:57 PM »
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Satish ji,Bahut khoobsurat ghazal inaayat ki hai.Khas taur se 2nd aur 3rd she'r mein bahut naya khayaal pesh kiya hai.Bahut shukriya aur mubarakbaad.HASAN
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«Reply #5 on: October 11, 2011, 10:30:13 AM »
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Waah-Waah, kyaa khoob likha hai. Bahut hi acchi lagi aapki ye ghazal mujhe. Bahut hi acche alfaaz se sajaaya hai aapne isse.

Iftakhar Ahmad is ghazal ko bahut sari daad se nawaazta hai.

Iftakhar Sahab,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka
tahe dil se shukriya.

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«Reply #6 on: October 11, 2011, 01:15:06 PM »
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bahut khoob janaab --

hazaron daad aapki ghazal par kubul karen

muskurate rahen
khus rahen
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«Reply #7 on: October 11, 2011, 03:31:05 PM »
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bahut umda rangetaggzul pesh kiyaa hai satishji dheron shubhkaamnaayen  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: October 11, 2011, 05:24:04 PM »
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Touhid Sahab,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

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«Reply #9 on: October 11, 2011, 08:09:57 PM »
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Mamta Ji,

Bahut dino baad mere kalaam par
nazar-e-inaayat ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

Aap ka she'r achchha laga.

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«Reply #10 on: October 11, 2011, 08:25:48 PM »
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जी में आया है, मुझे आज वो, कर जाने दे
अपनी ज़ुल्फ़ें मेरे शानों पे बिख़र जाने दे

जिस्म की खुश्बू मेरी बादे-सबा पहुँचा दे   
मुझसे पहले मेरे आने की ख़बर जाने दे

शाख से कर न जुदा सब्र भी कर ऐ गुलचीं
हुस्न कलियों का ज़रा और निखर जाने दे

दो घड़ी और ठहर, देख लूँ , चेहरा तेरा
अक्श, आँखों से मेरे, दिल में उतर जाने दे

तेरे आगोश में, मैं ख़ुद ही चला आऊँगा
आज, अरमानों की कश्ती को, 'भंवर' जाने दे

तुझ से मैं रह के जुदा, ज़िन्दगी कैसे कर लूँ 
जान भी, जिस्म से, ऐ जाने जिगर, जाने दे

रूठे दिलबर को यक़ीनन ही मना लेगा 'रक़ीब'
फूटी तक़दीर तो एक बार संवर जाने दे
                           
                ---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'



Bahut khoob! Raqeeb Saheb.Daad kubul kijiye. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 12, 2011, 10:25:18 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.


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«Reply #12 on: October 12, 2011, 10:33:16 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Satish Ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: October 12, 2011, 01:29:20 PM »
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sarfira ji,

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab
dene ka bahut bahut shukriya

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«Reply #14 on: October 12, 2011, 03:13:16 PM »
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sksaini4 ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut bahut
shukriya.

Take care of your health. Wish
you all the best for your good
health.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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