Kya Zaroori Hai Badan Ki Yoon...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: August 05, 2011, 12:15:09 PM »
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saahill ji,

Thanks for reply...


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«Reply #16 on: August 05, 2011, 12:25:48 PM »
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Janab Abdul Qadeer Sahab

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka Bahut
bahut shukriya aur jis she'r ka aapne zikra kiya hai
mujhe bhi pahle thoda thoda lag raha tha, ab jyada
lagne laga hai saani misra hi naheen aazad misra bhi
durust karna padega...

Ek baar phir se shukriya, aage bhi aaise hee
ishaara karte rahenge to achchha rahega.

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«Reply #17 on: August 06, 2011, 01:17:48 PM »
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Satish jee aap kee ye nayee kaawish paRhne ko milee ......behad pasand aayee ......ab qadeer jee ke dakhal se khuchh seekhne ko bhee milaa ...dilii daad kubool farmaayeN.
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«Reply #18 on: August 07, 2011, 11:55:20 AM »
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Mamta Ji,

Bahut..bahut shukriya, ghazal padhne, pasand karne aur
jawab dene ke liye..ab post karne se pahle aapki latest
post bhi dekhni padegi...aap bhi behichak Abdul Qadeer
Sahab ki tarah ishara kar den agar kaheen nazar ruke..

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«Reply #19 on: August 10, 2011, 12:47:41 PM »
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Buzrugwaar aadab ,,


apki ghazal nahi balke nagina hai jisko parhke suroor ata hai aur dil se besahakta daad nikalti hai ,,nazron se lab phir lab se zahen phir dil tak raasta taai kiya hai apki is shaandaar o jaandar ghazal ne ,, taham eak jaga khuch uljhan ho rahi hai ,,tu suncha kyun na apse puch lo.N ye sirf o sirf mere ilm me izafa karne ke liye kahe raha hun ap khiyal na kare.N chunke maidane sukhan me banda mubtadi o talib-e-ilm se ziyada khuch nahi ,,,aisi sanglak bhr me aisi rawan ghazal khal khal hi parhne ko milti hai ,,,,bus apke eak sher pe nazar ruk gaai ,,

jisne ummeed ka aaeena kuchal daala ho
usse bekaar hai dil, pyaar ki khwahish karna

Misra-e-saani kya taaqide lafzi ka shikar nahi ,, lafze hai jubke maujooda halat pe dalalat karta nazar aa raha hai ,,lekin na jaane kyun mujhe lag raha hai ke sher ko poora karne me shaair alfazon pe apni giraft barqarar na rakh saka ,,,,,

umid hai ke ap rahenumai farham kar sikhne ka mauqa denge ...


khair andesh

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Mahutram Satish Shukla Saheb aadab ,,

Maine jiss sher pe aitraz kiya tha ,,,,,wo sher acha hai mera aitraz galat tha ,,, mai in dino yahi dundh raha tha ,,ke kya misra yun kaha ja sakta hai ,,,kal der raat eak kuna mashk shaura "Janab Masood Hassas " sahab se baat howi to mahutram ne apke is sher ki bharpoor pazirai ki aur meri uljhan bhi door kar di ,, Mai apse dastbasta mazrat khaw hun ,,mauf kar den ,,,Jahan taak misra-e-oola baat hai mujhe wo tab bhi acha laga tha aur ab bhi chunke """"Lafze "Kuchalna " Toorna aor choor karne se bhi aage ki baat hai ,,,Eak baar phir apki is murassa ghazal pe dad hazir hai khubool karen ...Allah apko umr-e-khzir ata kare ..

Dua go

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«Reply #20 on: September 25, 2011, 12:30:18 PM »
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Abdul Qadeer Sahab,

Shukriya janab!

Waise main is tarah ke sher
avoid karta hoon.

Sorry for delay in reply.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #21 on: September 25, 2011, 04:11:48 PM »
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«Reply #22 on: September 26, 2011, 05:12:35 AM »
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awais_007 ji,

Hausala aafzai ka bahut
bahut shukriya.

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