TIRANGA UNHEEN KI SUNATA KAHANI****SATISH SHUKLA'RAQEEB'

by Satish Shukla on August 15, 2011, 08:33:06 AM
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shaheed-e-watan ka naheeN koee saani
watan waaloN par un ki hai maharbaani

watan par nichhaawar kiya apna sab kuchh
ladakpan ka aalam, budhaapaa, jawaani

kiya dil se har faisala zindagi ka
koee baat samjhee na boojhee, na jaani

lade khoon ki aakhiri booNd tak woH
lahoo ki nadi bhi padi hai bahani

kafan ki kasam, "ho hifazat watan ki"
waseeyat shaheedoN ki hai muHNjabani

watan ke liye jo fana ho gaye haiN
tiraNga unheeN ki sunata kahani

'Raqeeb' un ka kyoN zikra do din baras meN
wo haiN jaavida, zikra bhi jaavidani

                  --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2011, 08:46:42 AM »
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waah waah Raqeeb sahab -- baht lajawaab ghazal kahi aapne--
mindblowing post and ghazab ki soch.

sahi mayne me aaj ke din ke lie aisi hi ghazal ki jarurat thi.

kuch sawaal aur laakhon jawaab --waah behad umda kalaam

Kafan ki kasam-- kya khoob kaha aapne--

hazaaron daad aur mubarakbaad aapko.

haste rahiye Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2011, 10:46:43 AM »
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SATISH BHAI AZADI KA AAP NE
HAQ ADA KAR DIYA BEAUTIFUL.
ASGHAR
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2011, 06:12:50 PM »
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WAAHH...!!! BEHAD KHUBSURAT KALAAM... RAQEEB SAHAB...Usual Smile

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ROOH TAK AWAAZ PAHUCH GAYI...

BAHUT KHOOB..... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2011, 03:10:30 AM »
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 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

Bahut bahut or bahut hee khoob Satish jee!watanparastee ke jazbe se bharpoor khaas tour par shaheedoN ke prati arpit ye shradhaa suman qaabil e taareef haiN....ek sachche shair kaa shaeedoN ko naman sirf or sirf isee tarah kiyaa jaa saktaa hai...desh kee khaatir mar mitane waale un jaaNbaazoN ke prati mann kritagyataa se bhar uthaa...........or is ke liye aap kee ye kaawish beshumaar daad kee mustahiq hai.....samooche yoindia kee or se bhee aap ko is beshqeematee gazal par dheroN badhai....
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2011, 03:43:21 AM »
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Bahut Bahut KhooB Satish Ji
Bahut Hi Behtreen ............Jai Hind
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2011, 11:55:52 AM »
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sarfira ji,

Shukriya, aapka jawab achchha laga..

Raqeeb
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2011, 11:58:06 AM »
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ASGHAR SAHAB,

NAZM AAPKO ACHCHHEE LAGI
BAS YOON SAMJHIYE KI MERI
MEHNAT WASOOL HO GAYEE.

JAWAB DENE KA BAHUT BAHUT
SHUKRIYA...

RAQEEB
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2011, 12:00:16 PM »
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Touhid Sahab,

Nazm pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya..

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2011, 12:13:04 PM »
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Mamta Ji,

Aapka jawab to meri nazm se bhi jyada achchha hai
bas aaise hee aashirwaad ke phool chdhate rahiye
aage bhee..jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya..

Bas ek koshish hai apni..zara aazaadee ke saath
kisi ko aitraaz ho to ho..tamaam bandishoN ko dar
kinaar karke jo kuchh, jaisa kuchh ban pada kaha hai..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2011, 12:15:12 PM »
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Sanjeev Ji,

Nazm padhne, pasand karne aur jawab dene
ka bahut bahut shukriya..

Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2011, 02:20:57 AM »
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shaheed-e-watan ka naheeN koee saani
watan waaloN par un ki hai maharbaani

watan par nichhaawar kiya apna sab kuchh
ladakpan ka aalam, budhaapaa, jawaani

kiya dil se har faisala zindagi ka
koee baat samjhee na boojhee, na jaani

lade khoon ki aakhiri booNd tak woH
lahoo ki nadi bhi padi hai bahani

kafan ki kasam, "ho hifazat watan ki"
waseeyat shaheedoN ki hai muHNjabani

watan ke liye jo fana ho gaye haiN
tiraNga unheeN ki sunata kahani

'Raqeeb' un ka kyoN zikra do din baras meN
wo haiN jaavida, zikra bhi jaavidani

                  --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'




aadaab
aap ka kalaam parhaa
waah kiya akahtey hain aap aap lafzon ke jaadoogar hain khiyaalaat ke shahenshaah kholoos ka samundar .... aap ki rawaanee is qadar tezo tarraar thee ki main khud us me bah gayaa bahot peyaaraa qalam hai aap kaa jis pairaaye me aap jazbaat ko qalmband kartey hain wo dil ko moh leta ahai
mobaarak ho
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«Reply #12 on: August 17, 2011, 04:48:40 AM »
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masoodhassaas ji,

aapne Nazm padhee aur jawab diya, achchha laga
bahut bahut shukriya.

aap sab ka pyar aaisa hi aage bhi bana rahe
yahi kaamnaa hai.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #13 on: March 19, 2012, 10:25:17 AM »
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shaheed-e-watan ka naheeN koee saani
watan waaloN par un ki hai maharbaani

watan par nichhaawar kiya apna sab kuchh
ladakpan ka aalam, budhaapaa, jawaani

kiya dil se har faisala zindagi ka
koee baat samjhee na boojhee, na jaani

lade khoon ki aakhiri booNd tak woH
lahoo ki nadi bhi padi hai bahani

kafan ki kasam, "ho hifazat watan ki"
waseeyat shaheedoN ki hai muHNjabani

watan ke liye jo fana ho gaye haiN
tiraNga unheeN ki sunata kahani

'Raqeeb' un ka kyoN zikra do din baras meN
wo haiN jaavida, zikra bhi jaavidani

                  --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


wah wah bahut khoob............!

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«Reply #14 on: March 21, 2012, 05:15:31 AM »
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Sheba Ji,

Nazre inaayat aur hausala aafzai ka

bahut bahut shukriya.

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