Hawa Ke Dosh Pe Kis Gulbadan Ki Khushboo Hai*****Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on July 02, 2011, 02:38:22 PM
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hawa ke dosh pe kis gulbadan ki khushboo hai
gumaan hota hai saare chaman ki khushboo hai


हवा के दोश पे किस गुलबदन की ख़ुशबू है
गुमान होता है सारे चमन की ख़ुशबू है

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«Reply #1 on: July 02, 2011, 03:10:23 PM »
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ye khoob kahi…
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2011, 03:10:48 PM »
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ye khoob kahi…
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2011, 03:44:37 PM »
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sarfira ji,

jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya..

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«Reply #4 on: July 02, 2011, 10:48:50 PM »
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Applause Applause
Khoob..

Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: July 03, 2011, 04:29:23 AM »
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Bahut hi pyaara she'r hai,Satish ji.Magar eik jaam se tishnagi nahii.n bujhti...Hasan
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«Reply #6 on: July 03, 2011, 05:11:15 AM »
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Rahim Sahab,

Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya..

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«Reply #7 on: July 03, 2011, 05:26:22 AM »
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Janab Hasan Sahab,

Aapka jawab padhkar achchha laga, bahut
bahut shukriya.

Kuchh karno se filhaal pooree ghazal ek saath post
naheen kee hai, haan..nazm ho to baat alag hai..ummeed
hai bardaast kar lenge.

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«Reply #8 on: July 03, 2011, 05:41:06 AM »
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Satish jee ! sher bahut haseen hai ....Hasan saaheb theek hee farmaa rahe haiN....

do chaar phooloN se mousam naheeN aataa
baarish halkee ho to abra naheeN bhaataa
nawaazish hai mujhpe to jaam bhar saaqee
qataroN ko sooNghne se suroor nahee aataa
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«Reply #9 on: July 03, 2011, 05:54:03 AM »
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Mamta Ji,

Pahle to jawab dene aur matla pasand karne ka
bahut bahut shukriya..

Aapke she'r laajwaab hain is tarah ke she'r
log agar jawaab men quote karen to kya kahne..

Hasan sahab aur aap dono kaa huqm sar aankhon
par thoda mohlat deejiye...filjhaal bardaashat
kar len.

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