ZameeN Par PaaNw Rakhate Bhi Kabhi Jinko Na Dekha Tha *** Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on May 13, 2011, 06:57:00 PM
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zameeN Par paaNw Rakhate bhi kabhi jinko na dekha tha
haiN unke paaNw meN chhaale haiN larzeeda qadam kuchh kuchh

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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2011, 12:11:58 AM »
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 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
Aap ko pahlee baar paRhaa or baar baar paRhaa ...........
bahut hee gahree soch ! behad umdah ...........
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2011, 05:42:23 AM »
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raqeeb saheb ab raqeeb na baniye aur poori ghazal hi inaayat kijiye. Bahut hi achchha sher kah diya aapne. Dili mubarakbaad qubul kijiye aur hazaaroN daad bhi.

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zameeN Par paaNw Rakhate bhi kabhi jinko na dekha tha
haiN unke paaNw meN chhaale haiN larzeeda qadam kuchh kuchh

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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2011, 12:48:01 PM »
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Mamta Ji,

Sochate sochate bahut gahrai men chala gaya
tha, wahaan se ye moti nikal kar laaya tha 5 din
ke baad aapkee nazar pahali baar is naacheej ke
moti par padi achchhee jauhari bhi hain aap.

Bahut bahut shukriya...

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«Reply #4 on: May 20, 2011, 12:59:25 PM »
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Ansari Sahab,

Bahut..bahut shukriya..

Aap pahle purush(male) hain jiski nazar 5 din baad
is naacheez ke she'r par padee.

Is ghazal ke do she'r pahle bhi post kar chuka hoon.

Sahee baat to ye hai ki mujhe is site par theek se
post karna naheen aata aur koee batata bhee naheen
poori ghazal ek saath hindi men post karoonga jaldi
hi, hindi men post karna seekh kar.

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sarfira ji,

Thanks for your reply

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