dil tujhe or sajja dunga,,,,ghazal,,,,jeet jainam saini

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seene main jo dhadkta  hai  usko bhoola dunga,
roo roo kar ey mere dil tujhe  or sajja dunga,

na chahte huye un bite pallo,n  ki yaado,n ko,
apne dil o dimag  se  puri tareh  mitta dunga,

akser khelti rahi takdeer meri zindagi ke sath,
khushi na sahi paas gam ka hi sath nibha dunga,

mahfil main hogi jab bhi tari meri baate aksar,
main tumara nahi  khud ka  tamasha  bana dunga,

jab tu hi chali gayi chor kar mujhe  tanha yuh,
to banaye huye us ashiyaane ko main jala dunga,

kashti main patwaar to hai koi maajhi nahi hai,
merne ki khateer kashti majdhar mai duba dunga,

ek eysi be dard kahani likh jaunga zamane main,
sunne walo,n ki nazaro,n main  aansu laa dunga,
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2015, 01:15:06 PM »
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श्री जीत जी,वास्तव में आपके दिल में एक दर्द है,वही दर्द आज गजल बनकर बाहर आ गई है,इसके लिए ढेरो   दाद एक राऊ के साथ|-आर के रस्तोगी
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2015, 03:32:25 PM »
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Bohat bohat shukriya ram sir Ji..
Asal. Main mare alfaaz mare nature se  nhi milte... Main sirf shayri likhta hu.ye pyaar mohhobat dhoka ye dosto se  Jana hai.. Main to bohat hasmukh ladka hu
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2015, 06:10:09 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: February 13, 2015, 12:03:19 AM »
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Bahut umda Jeet Jee.
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«Reply #5 on: February 13, 2015, 10:43:37 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2015, 12:51:15 PM »
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Bahut umda. dheron daad.
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वाह वाह अति सुंदर ढेरो दाद कबूल करे-
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Shukriya anmol Ji daaadddd kabool
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