Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh. -Panna 2:Ghazals

Ssaagar

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«Reply #15 on: October 21, 2013, 10:12:56 PM »

What a beautiful presentation aqsh ji

since my joining I was considering u as male author but today I came to know about u...

superb n perfectly grafted....

sorry for my mistake...


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #16 on: October 21, 2013, 10:24:39 PM »

Aqsh jii aapki shayri aur ghazals ki jitni taarif kru utni kam hai..
Wah bahot achha likha hai aapne..
Applause


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #17 on: October 21, 2013, 10:50:39 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on October 21, 2013, 12:11:16 PM

Na hi haya yaad rahi na hi parda yaad raha
Woh aane wale hai bas itna hi yaad raha

uuuufffff kyaa paagalpan hai, jawaab nahi sarkaar, bahut bahut khoob....!!!

Paigaam bheja hai, bas unka aana baaki hai
Muhabbat meiN diloN ka, aazmaana baaki hai

Machalte hue armaanoN ko, kuch aaraam mile
Betaab se mere is dil ko, behlaana baaki hai

Banakar apna gawah ,chaand aur sitaroN ko
Wafa ke rang se raat ko, sajaana baaki hai

Todhkar saari bandisheiN ,bikhar jaaye hum
JismoN ka jismoN se, abhi takraana baaki hai

Hoti rahe barsaat, pyaar bhare is mausam ki
Khamosh se laboN par, abhi afsaana baaki hai

Muhabbat ke chaman ko, guloN se saja lo “Aqsh”
Ke hawa ka aakar unhe, ab mehkaana baaki hai

waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Aqsh ji, bahut pyaari rachnaa, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne, jitni taarif ki jaaye kam hai, mohabbat mein likhnaa to koi aapse seekhe, thodi training humko bhi de dijiye, hum bhi kuch kuch aap jaisaa likhnaa seekh len, sach mein bahut bahut pasand aayi humko aapki yeh rachnaa...

mere aane kaa kuch pal aur intezaar kar lo
kuch der tum chaand kaa hi deedaar kar lo

jaantaa hoon main baithi ho aaine ke saamne
jee bhar ke tum aaj baith shringaar kar lo

guzar jaayenge bache kuch lamhe tanhaayi ke
dekh aaine ko kuch pal khud se pyaar kar lo

meri deewaangi kaa asar hogaa dheere dheere
ishq mein bikharne ko khud ko tayyaar kar lo

naa rahe baaki tamannaa koi dil mein tumhaare
mujhse poori apni khwaahishein hazaar kar lo

rok lo khud ko kuch der aur ki aajaaun main
mere aajaane par saari haddon ko paar kar lo

'Hriday' to banaa ki hai mohabbat ki khaatir
baahon mein leke tum bhi thodaa pyaar kar lo

*****HRIDAY*****


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #18 on: October 22, 2013, 12:10:54 AM »

Roomaaniyat se bhare khoobsurat aashaar par dheron daad Aqsh ji ...


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #19 on: October 22, 2013, 04:04:58 AM »

Bahat khoob aqsh jee bahat daad.


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #20 on: October 22, 2013, 01:24:36 PM »

Quote from: qalb on October 21, 2013, 01:59:42 PM

thnxxxxxx a lottttttt qalb ji...


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #21 on: October 22, 2013, 01:25:14 PM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on October 21, 2013, 03:14:45 PM

Na hi haya yaad rahi na hi parda yaad raha
Woh aane wale hai bas itna hi yaad raha

Paigaam bheja hai, bas unka aana baaki hai
Muhabbat meiN diloN ka, aazmaana baaki hai

Machalte hue armaanoN ko, kuch aaraam mile
Betaab se mere is dil ko, behlaana baaki hai

Banakar apna gawah ,chaand aur sitaroN ko
Wafa ke rang se raat ko, sajaana baaki hai
Behtreen Kalaam pesh kiya hai Aapne,
Applause

Bahyt Khoob.
Aqsh Jee.

thank you soooooooo much ravindera ji...


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #22 on: October 22, 2013, 01:26:56 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on October 21, 2013, 03:43:29 PM

beautiful

thank you soooooo much saini sir...


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aqsh

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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #23 on: October 22, 2013, 01:28:19 PM »

Quote from: Iqtedar on October 21, 2013, 04:02:10 PM

Todhkar saari bandisheiN ,bikhar jaaye hum
JismoN ka jismoN se, abhi takraana baaki hai
so to hai Laughing hard

bahot khoob Aqsh ji, dheron daad khubool kijiye Applause

Kyun iqtedar bahut hansi aa rahi hai...anyway thnxxxxxxxx a lottttttttt...


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #24 on: October 22, 2013, 01:29:40 PM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 21, 2013, 05:55:03 PM

bahut bahut khob aqsh ji . dheron daad.

thank you sooooooooooooooo much hasan ji...


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aqsh

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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #25 on: October 22, 2013, 01:30:19 PM »

Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on October 21, 2013, 07:21:03 PM

veriiiiiiiiiiiiiiii gud

thnx a lotttttt K.A ji..


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #26 on: October 22, 2013, 01:31:36 PM »

Quote from: saahill on October 21, 2013, 07:59:46 PM

wah wah wah bihut umda likha hai aqsh ji

thnxxxxxx a lottttttttt sahill ji...


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #27 on: October 22, 2013, 01:32:11 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 21, 2013, 08:30:01 PM

Aqsh Sahibaa Aadaab...!

WaaH jee waaH kia kahne jee bahut khoob... badi hi mahekti chaekti aur purasar kalaam kahi hai aapne...

behad khumaar bhare ahsaas O khayaal ko umdaa lafz diye haiN jee... Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

Parwaaz ji bahut bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaaa...


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aqsh

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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #28 on: October 22, 2013, 01:34:18 PM »

Quote from: Ssaagar on October 21, 2013, 10:12:56 PM

What a beautiful presentation aqsh ji

since my joining I was considering u as male author but today I came to know about u...

superb n perfectly grafted....

sorry for my mistake...

Hahahahaha saagar ji mere naam ke saath bahut log confuse ho gaye the.. aur is mein sorry kahene waali koi baat nahi.. thnxxxxx a lotttttt for reading my poetry and thnx for the appreciation..


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Re: Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

«Reply #29 on: October 22, 2013, 01:36:18 PM »

Quote from: Saman Firdaus on October 21, 2013, 10:24:39 PM

Aqsh jii aapki shayri aur ghazals ki jitni taarif kru utni kam hai..
Wah bahot achha likha hai aapne..
Applause

thnx a lottttttttt Firdaus...


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