Dilon ka aazmaana baaqi hai...........................................Aqsh.

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Na hi haya yaad rahi na hi parda yaad raha
Woh aane wale hai bas itna hi yaad raha


Paigaam bheja hai, bas unka aana baaki hai
Muhabbat meiN diloN ka, aazmaana baaki hai

Machalte hue armaanoN ko, kuch aaraam mile
Betaab se mere is dil ko, behlaana baaki hai

Banakar apna gawah ,chaand aur sitaroN ko
Wafa ke rang se raat ko, sajaana baaki hai

Tadap deedar ki, lamhoN meiN mit jaayegi
NigahoN ka nigahoN se, takraana baaki hai

Hoti rahe barsaat, pyaar bhare is mausam ki
Khamosh se laboN par, abhi afsaana baaki hai

Muhabbat ke chaman ko, guloN se saja lo “Aqsh”
Ke hawa ka aakar unhe, ab mehkaana baaki hai

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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2013, 06:00:45 PM »
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Na hi haya yaad rahi na hi parda yaad raha
Woh aane wale hai bas itna hi yaad raha


Paigaam bheja hai, bas unka aana baaki hai
Muhabbat meiN diloN ka, aazmaana baaki hai

Machalte hue armaanoN ko, kuch aaraam mile
Betaab se mere is dil ko, behlaana baaki hai

Banakar apna gawah ,chaand aur sitaroN ko
Wafa ke rang se raat ko, sajaana baaki hai

Todhkar saari bandisheiN ,bikhar jaaye hum
JismoN ka jismoN se, abhi takraana baaki hai

Hoti rahe barsaat, pyaar bhare is mausam ki
Khamosh se laboN par, abhi afsaana baaki hai

Muhabbat ke chaman ko, guloN se saja lo “Aqsh”
Ke hawa ka aakar unhe, ab mehkaana baaki hai


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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2013, 06:42:06 PM »
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Kya baat hai Aqsh ji, bahut hi khoobsurat Ghazal likhi aapne jaisa aap chah rahi thi ... saare ahsaar bahut khoobsurat rahe... Dheron Daad ..
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2013, 07:13:13 PM »
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Na hi haya yaad rahi na hi parda yaad raha
Woh aane wale hai bas itna hi yaad raha


Paigaam bheja hai, bas unka aana baaki hai
Muhabbat meiN diloN ka, aazmaana baaki hai

Machalte hue armaanoN ko, kuch aaraam mile
Betaab se mere is dil ko, behlaana baaki hai

Banakar apna gawah ,chaand aur sitaroN ko
Wafa ke rang se raat ko, sajaana baaki hai

Todhkar saari bandisheiN ,bikhar jaaye hum
JismoN ka jismoN se, abhi takraana baaki hai

Hoti rahe barsaat, pyaar bhare is mausam ki
Khamosh se laboN par, abhi afsaana baaki hai

Muhabbat ke chaman ko, guloN se saja lo “Aqsh”
Ke hawa ka aakar unhe, ab mehkaana baaki hai




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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2013, 07:29:42 PM »
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Na hi haya yaad rahi na hi parda yaad raha
Woh aane wale hai bas itna hi yaad raha


Paigaam bheja hai, bas unka aana baaki hai
Muhabbat meiN diloN ka, aazmaana baaki hai

Machalte hue armaanoN ko, kuch aaraam mile
Betaab se mere is dil ko, behlaana baaki hai

Banakar apna gawah ,chaand aur sitaroN ko
Wafa ke rang se raat ko, sajaana baaki hai

Todhkar saari bandisheiN ,bikhar jaaye hum
JismoN ka jismoN se, abhi takraana baaki hai

Hoti rahe barsaat, pyaar bhare is mausam ki
Khamosh se laboN par, abhi afsaana baaki hai

Muhabbat ke chaman ko, guloN se saja lo “Aqsh”
Ke hawa ka aakar unhe, ab mehkaana baaki hai




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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2013, 08:44:45 PM »
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Na hi haya yaad rahi na hi parda yaad raha
Woh aane wale hai bas itna hi yaad raha

Paigaam bheja hai, bas unka aana baaki hai
Muhabbat meiN diloN ka, aazmaana baaki hai

Machalte hue armaanoN ko, kuch aaraam mile
Betaab se mere is dil ko, behlaana baaki hai

Banakar apna gawah ,chaand aur sitaroN ko
Wafa ke rang se raat ko, sajaana baaki hai
Behtreen Kalaam pesh kiya hai Aapne,
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Aqsh Jee.
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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2013, 09:32:10 PM »
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Todhkar saari bandisheiN ,bikhar jaaye hum
JismoN ka jismoN se, abhi takraana baaki hai
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bahot khoob Aqsh ji, dheron daad khubool kijiye  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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 hello2 hello2 hello2 bahut bahut khob aqsh ji . dheron daad.
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2013, 12:51:03 AM »
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Na hi haya yaad rahi na hi parda yaad raha
Woh aane wale hai bas itna hi yaad raha


Paigaam bheja hai, bas unka aana baaki hai
Muhabbat meiN diloN ka, aazmaana baaki hai

Machalte hue armaanoN ko, kuch aaraam mile
Betaab se mere is dil ko, behlaana baaki hai

Banakar apna gawah ,chaand aur sitaroN ko
Wafa ke rang se raat ko, sajaana baaki hai

Todhkar saari bandisheiN ,bikhar jaaye hum
JismoN ka jismoN se, abhi takraana baaki hai

Hoti rahe barsaat, pyaar bhare is mausam ki
Khamosh se laboN par, abhi afsaana baaki hai

Muhabbat ke chaman ko, guloN se saja lo “Aqsh”
Ke hawa ka aakar unhe, ab mehkaana baaki hai




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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2013, 01:29:46 AM »
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wah wah wah bihut umda likha hai aqsh ji
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2013, 02:00:01 AM »
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Aqsh Sahibaa Aadaab...!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne jee bahut khoob... badi hi mahekti chaekti aur purasar kalaam kahi hai aapne...

behad khumaar bhare ahsaas O khayaal ko umdaa lafz diye haiN jee... Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...

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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2013, 02:02:08 AM »
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thnxxxxxx a lotttttttt rajan ji...
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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2013, 02:03:10 AM »
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Kya baat hai Aqsh ji, bahut hi khoobsurat Ghazal likhi aapne jaisa aap chah rahi thi ... saare ahsaar bahut khoobsurat rahe... Dheron Daad ..
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thnxxx a lotttttt musaahib ji...
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2013, 02:04:17 AM »
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wonderful,ma'am
thnx MB ji....
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