Diya hatho'n me lekar wo chalaa kiya

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on October 27, 2013, 06:16:13 AM
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Hai koi maut se barhkar sazaa kiya
na ho marna to jeene ka mazaa kiya

Raaste band ho chuke hain sabhi
ibadat ki kabhi na.. ab duaa kiya

shararat me jo us bachche ne mara
lagi hai chout usme hai mazaa kiya

mujhe kuch bhi nazar aata nahi hai
tumhi batlao timko kuch dikha kiya

meri rudaad pe kaisi hansi hai
na tum abtak ye samjhe hai wafa kiya

andhere me ye kaisi roushni hai
diya hatho'n me lekar wo chala kiya

chamak bijli ki humse poochti hai
nasheman aur bhi koi jalaa kiya

jama hone lage hain phir ye bhanwre
rangee phool gulshan me khilaa kiya

zamane bhar ne jab thukra diya to
tab aaya paas mere tha bachaa kiya

           ........S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2013, 06:17:16 AM »
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Raaste band ho chuke hain sabhi
ibadat ki kabhi na, ab duaa kiya

shararat me jo us bachche ne mara
lagi hai chot usme hai mazaa kiya

mujhe kuch bhi nazar aata nahi hai
tumhi batlao tumko kuch dikha kiya

meri rudaad pe kaisi hansi hai
na tum abtak ye samjhe hai wafa kiya

andhere me ye kaisi roushni hai
diya hatho'n me lekar wo chala kiya

chamak bijli ki humse poochti hai
nasheman aur bhi koi jalaa kiya

jama hone lage hain phir ye bhanwre
rangee phool gulshan me khilaa kiya

zamane bhar ne jab thukra diya to
tab aaya paas mere tha bachaa kiya

           ........S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #2 on: October 27, 2013, 06:36:29 AM »
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Raaste band ho chuke hain sabhi
ibadat ki kabhi na, ab duaa kiya

shararat me jo us bachche ne mara
lagi hai chot usme hai mazaa kiya

mujhe kuch bhi nazar aata nahi hai
tumhi batlao tumko kuch dikha kiya

meri rudaad pe kaisi hansi hai
na tum abtak ye samjhe hai wafa kiya

andhere me ye kaisi roushni hai
diya hatho'n me lekar wo chala kiya

chamak bijli ki humse poochti hai
nasheman aur bhi koi jalaa kiya

jama hone lage hain phir ye bhanwre
rangee phool gulshan me khilaa kiya

zamane bhar ne jab thukra diya to
tab aaya paas mere tha bachaa kiya

           ........S.M.Mahzar



waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 27, 2013, 06:44:58 AM »
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 Applause :clap:आपकी रचना सौन्दर्य से परिपूर्ण है sheel didi
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«Reply #4 on: October 27, 2013, 06:49:12 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause :clap:आपकी रचना सौन्दर्य से परिपूर्ण है
Raaste band ho chuke hain sabhi
ibadat ki kabhi na ab duaa kiya

shararat me jo us bachche ne mara
lagi hai chout usme hai mazaa kiya

mujhe kuch bhi nazar aata nahi hai
tumhi batlao timko kuch dikha kiya

meri rudaad pe kaisi hansi hai
na tum abtak ye samjhe hai wafa kiya

andhere me ye kaisi roushni hai
diya hatho'n me lekar wo chala kiya

chamak bijli ki humse poochti hai
nasheman aur bhi koi jalaa kiya

jama hone lage hain phir ye bhanwre
rangee phool gulshan me khilaa kiya

zamane bhar ne jab thukra diya to
tab aaya paas mere tha bachaa kiya
sheel didi
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«Reply #5 on: October 27, 2013, 09:12:17 AM »
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Raaste band ho chuke hain sabhi
ibadat ki kabhi na, ab duaa kiya
maut ke baad band hoga. jab tak zibda hain doa karte rahein to behter
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shararat me jo us bachche ne mara
lagi hai chot usme hai mazaa kiya
bachcho ki khushi mein insaan apni khushi dhoondta hai. per sirf bachche tak wahi bada ho kar maare to waqai chot lagti hai. bahut gahra sher hai ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clappingjavascript:void(0);: Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
mujhe kuch bhi nazar aata nahi hai
tumhi batlao tumko kuch dikha kiya
main bhi to aap ki hi nazar se dekhti hoon. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
meri rudaad pe kaisi hansi hai
na tum abtak ye samjhe hai wafa kiya
main to na samjh thahri aap hi mujhe dil ki baat sanjidgi se samjhaa dete to ye naubat nahin aati icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
andhere me ye kaisi roushni hai
diya hatho'n me lekar wo chala kiya
chiraag bhi jalne se aaj inkaar kar diya icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
chamak bijli ki humse poochti hai
nasheman aur bhi koi jalaa kiya
kambakhat jis cheez ka jaisa nature hota hai wo cheez usi kaam ko enjoy bhi karti hai icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
jama hone lage hain phir ye bhanwre
rangee phool gulshan me khilaa kiya
mere etraaf hi saare jamaa ho rahe hain Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
zamane bhar ne jab thukra diya to
tab aaya paas mere tha bachaa kiya
tum hi ne to kahaa thaaa......mera durr khula hai khula hi rahe ga hamaare liye....hamaare liye Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
           ........S.M.Mahzar



bahut khoob mahzar sahab per matle ka sher hota to kya kahne icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #6 on: October 27, 2013, 10:42:53 AM »
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nice bhot khob  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 27, 2013, 01:21:48 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2013, 03:13:55 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #9 on: October 27, 2013, 05:53:15 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut khooooob mazhar saab... dheron dheron daaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #10 on: October 27, 2013, 09:53:31 PM »
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bahut khoob saheb
Matla shayad typing ke waqt chhoot gaya.
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«Reply #11 on: October 28, 2013, 02:54:34 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
adil bechain saheb,
                   behad shukrguzar hoon.....
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«Reply #12 on: October 28, 2013, 02:58:31 AM »
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Applause :clap:आपकी रचना सौन्दर्य से परिपूर्ण है sheel didi
sushilbansal ji,
                mahodaya
meri rachna aapko saundarya yukt lagi, iska main aabhari hoon.
.................aapka
            Mahzar Bhaiyya
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«Reply #13 on: October 28, 2013, 03:06:12 AM »
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bahut khoob mahzar sahab per matle ka sher hota to kya kahne icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
sheba ji,
       her ek sher ka beshqeemat tajzia aapne kiya hai, main to itni fikr ka istemaal na kar saka jitni wazahat aapne farmayi hai, aapki tajveez ke mutabiq 'Mirza Ghalib' ke misre per girah lagaker Matla kah diya hai.
                     Behad mashkoor wa mamnoon hoon.

Hai koi maut se barhkar sazaa kiya
na ho marna to jeene ka mazaa kiya
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«Reply #14 on: October 28, 2013, 03:08:04 AM »
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nice bhot khob  Applause
Mast Khalander saheb,
                    bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaa
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