doosri kami hai tu ...

by janumanu on June 22, 2013, 09:52:46 AM
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मेरी ज़िंदगी  है तू
फिर भी अजनबी है तू

बस नज़र नही आता
वरना आदमी है तू

एक खुद नहीं हूँ मैं
दूसरी कमी है तू

देखने से लगता है
सोचने लगी है तू

आ मेरे सफीने में
डूबती नदी है तू

तुझसे भी न पूरी हो
ऐसी क्या कमी है तू

रूह आ निकलती है
जब पुकारती है तू

एक दम ठहर जा ना
क्यूँ घड़ी-घड़ी है तू

मेरे जैसी लगती है
इतनी अजनबी है तू

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meri zindgi hai tu
phir bhi ajnabi hai tu

bas nazar nahi aata
warna aadmi hai tu

ek khud nahiN hun maiN
doosri kami hai tu

dekhne se lagta hai
sochne lagi hai tu

aa mere safeene meiN
doobti nadi hai tu

tujhse bhi na poori ho
aisi kya kami hai tu

rooh aa nikalti hai
jab pukaarti hai tu

ek dam thahar ja na
kyuN ghaDi-ghaDi hai tu


mere jaisi lagti hai
itni ajnabi hai tu







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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2013, 09:54:46 AM »
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is sher ko main sau baar marr jaauN.... aaj tak shayad sabse khubsurat sher hai aapka mirzaa saaheb... bas dil karta hai ki kaash ye sher mera hota... haaye alfaaz kam ho gaye hain shayad...
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«Reply #2 on: June 22, 2013, 10:10:07 AM »
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is sher ko main sau baar marr jaauN.... aaj tak shayad sabse khubsurat sher hai aapka mirzaa saaheb... bas dil karta hai ki kaash ye sher mera hota... haaye alfaaz kam ho gaye hain shayad...

kis sher ko bhayee sahab Usual Smile

yaar socha tha... koe ghazal yun likhun ki har sher pe kuch na kuch nikle ab bhi ek hi sher ... Allaahhhh
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2013, 10:13:49 AM »
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एक खुद नहीं हूँ मैं
दूसरी कमी है तू

ye sher saaheb, yaar problem ye hoti hai ki koi ek sher hadd se jyada class hone ke baad baaNki bahut ahche hote hue hue dhundle ho jaate haiN... maiN iska sabse yada shikaar hota huN... tongue3 lol...!!
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«Reply #4 on: June 22, 2013, 10:16:45 AM »
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एक खुद नहीं हूँ मैं
दूसरी कमी है तू

ye sher saaheb, yaar problem ye hoti hai ki koi ek sher hadd se jyada class hone ke baad baaNki bahut ahche hote hue hue dhundle ho jaate haiN... maiN iska sabse yada shikaar hota huN... tongue3 lol...!!

yahi to baat hai yaar ......... pata nahi kaha kya hota hai Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: June 22, 2013, 11:06:02 AM »
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Atee Sundar.
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«Reply #6 on: June 22, 2013, 01:33:51 PM »
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Bahut khoob Janumanu jee.
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«Reply #7 on: June 22, 2013, 04:13:28 PM »
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chhote bahar ben naayaab tohfaa
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«Reply #8 on: June 22, 2013, 04:15:28 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: June 22, 2013, 05:36:28 PM »
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Awesomeeeeeeeeee. bahut pyaari ghazal rahi tumhari. sabhi ashaar dil ko choo gaye. aur yeh ashaar bahut zyaada pasand aaye.

rooh aa nikalti hai
jab pukaarti hai tu

ek dam thahar ja na
kyuN ghaDi-ghaDi hai tu


mere jaisi lagti hai
itni ajnabi hai tu

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«Reply #10 on: June 22, 2013, 05:46:41 PM »
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मेरी ज़िंदगी  है तू
फिर भी अजनबी है तू

बस नज़र नही आता
वरना आदमी है तू

एक खुद नहीं हूँ मैं
दूसरी कमी है तू

देखने से लगता है
सोचने लगी है तू

आ मेरे सफीने में
डूबती नदी है तू

तुझसे भी न पूरी हो
ऐसी क्या कमी है तू

रूह आ निकलती है
जब पुकारती है तू

एक दम ठहर जा ना
क्यूँ घड़ी-घड़ी है तू

मेरे जैसी लगती है
इतनी अजनबी है तू

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meri zindgi hai tu
phir bhi ajnabi hai tu

bas nazar nahi aata
warna aadmi hai tu

ek khud nahiN hun maiN
doosri kami hai tu

dekhne se lagta hai
sochne lagi hai tu

aa mere safeene meiN
doobti nadi hai tu

tujhse bhi na poori ho
aisi kya kami hai tu

rooh aa nikalti hai
jab pukaarti hai tu

ek dam thahar ja na
kyuN ghaDi-ghaDi hai tu


mere jaisi lagti hai
itni ajnabi hai tu










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«Reply #11 on: June 22, 2013, 06:56:38 PM »
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waah kya likha hai..bahut achha laga padh kar..dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: June 22, 2013, 09:51:37 PM »
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मेरी ज़िंदगी  है तू
फिर भी अजनबी है तू

बस नज़र नही आता
वरना आदमी है तू

एक खुद नहीं हूँ मैं
दूसरी कमी है तू

देखने से लगता है
सोचने लगी है तू

आ मेरे सफीने में
डूबती नदी है तू

तुझसे भी न पूरी हो
ऐसी क्या कमी है तू

रूह आ निकलती है
जब पुकारती है तू

एक दम ठहर जा ना
क्यूँ घड़ी-घड़ी है तू

मेरे जैसी लगती है
इतनी अजनबी है तू

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meri zindgi hai tu
phir bhi ajnabi hai tu

bas nazar nahi aata
warna aadmi hai tu

ek khud nahiN hun maiN
doosri kami hai tu

dekhne se lagta hai
sochne lagi hai tu

aa mere safeene meiN
doobti nadi hai tu

tujhse bhi na poori ho
aisi kya kami hai tu

rooh aa nikalti hai
jab pukaarti hai tu

ek dam thahar ja na
kyuN ghaDi-ghaDi hai tu


mere jaisi lagti hai
itni ajnabi hai tu








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«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2013, 10:06:39 PM »
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Wah Wah!!! Very Beautiful!! Awesome!!



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«Reply #14 on: June 22, 2013, 10:17:08 PM »
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WaaH WaaH Bahut Khoob..........
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