Duniya Ke iss Bheed Mein Apne Aap Ko Hi Dhoondhte Rehta Hoon Main!!!!!

by khwaish on September 04, 2009, 04:47:10 PM
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   "Bure Waqt Aur Dard Ki Kaali Raat mein Hi Insaan,
         Zindagi ka Sabse Keemti Sabak Seekh Leta Hai"
                             -Jashn-

Yeh Ek Dialouge Mujhe Khaas taur par Itna pasand Aaya Ke Mujhse Raha na Gaya..Yeh Do Line Mere Zehan mein Yuh Baithi Ke Naa Jaane Kitni Der Tak Main Yeh Do line Mein Kho Kar Reh Gaya...Issi Soch par Kuch Likhne Ki Koshish Kar raha Hoon....

Kuch Ankahe Lafzo Ka Matlab Dhoondhta Rehta Hoon Main!!!
Zindagi Aakhir Kya Hai?? Kabhi-Kabhi yehi Sochte rehta Hoon Main!!!

Zaroorto Ke Hisaab Se Apni Soch Ko Badalta Raha!!
Kya Tha Aur Ab Kya Hoon!! Apne Aap Mein Hi Jhaankte Rehta Hoon Main!!

Ek Toote Hue Khilone Ki Tarah Hoon Main Jo Kisi Ka Mann Naa Behla Saka!!
Duniya Ke Iss Bheed Mein Apne Aap Ko Hi Dhoondhte Rehta Hoon Main!!!

Eh Dost!! Mujhe Ab Iss Khwaab Ki Duniya Se Naa Jagaa!!
Haqeeqat Ki Duniya Se Ab Har Waqt Darte Rehta Hoon Main!!!

Apne Wahi Hai Jo Bure Waqt Par Kaam Aa Sake!!!
Ab Rishto Ko Bhi Sirf Paiso Ke Hi Dum Se Hi Kyon Tolte Rehta Hoon Main!!!

Kaash Ke Sambhal Jaata Main Apne Aap Se, To Ek Brahm Hi Reh Jaata!!!!
Apne Zakhmo Ko Apne Hi Ashko Se Ab Dhote Rehta Hoon Main!!!

"Bure Waqt Aur Dard Ki Kaali Raat Mein Hi
Insaan Zindagi ka Sabse Keemti Sabak Seekh Leta Hai"

Mere Haath Mein Kuch Bhi to Nahi, par Phir Bhi Dekh Meri Himmat!!!
Waqt Se Bekhauff Hokar Ladte Rehta Hoon Main!!!!

Insaan Ka Aakhri Mukaam Sirf Do Gaz Zameen Hi Hai!!!
Maut Ko Gale Lagaane Se Pehle Naa Jaane Kitno Ka Dil Todhte Rehta Hoon Main!!

Main Woh Insaan Hoon,Jo Apne Aap Ko Aaene Mein Dekh kar Sharmsaar Ho jaaye!!
Par phir bhi Apne Aap Ko Bahut Kuch Samajthe Rehta Hoon Main!!

Sach Hai Ke "Khwaish" Deewana Hi Hai!!!!
Kuch Bikhre Hue Lafzo mein Khud Ki pehchaan Ko Hi Khojte Rehta Hoon Main!!!

                         ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2009, 05:24:23 PM »
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Taarif k liye alfaaz nahi.....bahut khoob , bahut acche , behtrin , lajwaab....ye lafj bhi kam hai..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kaafi gehrai mein likhi hai aapne ye Ghajal khwaish ji...iss thread mein khuch likhe bina nahi rha ja sakta....abhi waqt ki kami hai...jald hi yha jarur khuch likhungi
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2009, 05:26:07 PM »
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Acche sabak sikhaye aapne
Zindagi ki keemat batayee aapne
Ehsaas dard ka kuch is tarah hua
jaise mere hi dil ki haalat sunayi aapne
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2009, 05:31:51 PM »
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Taarif k liye alfaaz nahi.....bahut khoob , bahut acche , behtrin , lajwaab....ye lafj bhi kam hai..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kaafi gehrai mein likhi hai aapne ye Ghajal khwaish ji...iss thread mein khuch likhe bina nahi rha ja sakta....abhi waqt ki kami hai...jald hi yha jarur khuch likhungi


Teh Dil Se Shukriya Pooja...Aapne Itna Kuch keh diya..Wahi bahut hai..Aur Rahi Baat Aapke Jawaab Ki, Besabri se Intezaar Hoga Apake Jawaab Ka..

Thankyou Soooooooooo much Pooja... icon_flower
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«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2009, 09:51:05 PM »
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Wakai bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji..

Zindgai ki chupi ankahi baat jo kai baa r man mea dabi reh jaati hai,,, unn sab baaton ko bakoobi bayaan kiya hai.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob !

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«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2009, 10:39:34 PM »
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Acche sabak sikhaye aapne
Zindagi ki keemat batayee aapne
Ehsaas dard ka kuch is tarah hua
jaise mere hi dil ki haalat sunayi aapne

Bahut bahut Shukriya Sanprem Ji...

Bahut Hi Shayara Andaaz Mein Aapne Saraha Hai..Bahut Khoob..

Thanks A Lot For Appreciating!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 04, 2009, 10:54:46 PM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  bahoot khoob Khwaish ji!!! Khas kar yah do  line behad pasand aai


Eh Dost!! Mujhe Ab Iss Khwaab Ki Duniya Se Naa Jagaa!!
Haqeeqat Ki Duniya Se Ab Har Waqt Darte Rehta Hoon Main!!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 05, 2009, 11:00:37 AM »
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Wakai bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji..

Zindgai ki chupi ankahi baat jo kai baa r man mea dabi reh jaati hai,,, unn sab baaton ko bakoobi bayaan kiya hai.. Bahoot bahoot Khoob !



Bahut bahut Shukriya Sophi,Aapne iss Ehsaas Ko bakhoobi Samjha Aur Phir Saraha,Teh Dil se Shukriya Dost.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2009, 04:23:57 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost, ek baar phir aapne apne is kalaam main kuch duniya ki kadwi sachi baaton ki taraf roshni daali hai.....Bohot hi achcha likha hai..... Bohot hi Khoob Dost icon_thumleft

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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2009, 04:49:28 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Khwaish ji,really touching,mindblowing creation.excellent.
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«Reply #10 on: September 08, 2009, 05:07:55 PM »
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...kya gehraai jatayi hai bhai...mazaa aa gaya padhkar...
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2009, 11:39:37 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  bahoot khoob Khwaish ji!!! Khas kar yah do  line behad pasand aai


Eh Dost!! Mujhe Ab Iss Khwaab Ki Duniya Se Naa Jagaa!!
Haqeeqat Ki Duniya Se Ab Har Waqt Darte Rehta Hoon Main!!!


Teh Dil Se Shukriya Pooja.. icon_salut icon_salut

Aapka Yeh Andaaz humehsa Se Dil Ko bhaata Hai Jo Aap Humesha Likhte ho Ke Aapko Iss ghazal mein Sabse Acha Ashaar kaun Sa Laga..

bahut bahut Shukriya Pooja Jo Aapne Iss Ghazal Ko Padha Aur Saraha.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 13, 2009, 07:09:29 AM »
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kya kehne hain khwaish bhut hi laajaab mashallah daad hazir hai dear
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«Reply #13 on: September 28, 2009, 09:27:31 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost, ek baar phir aapne apne is kalaam main kuch duniya ki kadwi sachi baaton ki taraf roshni daali hai.....Bohot hi achcha likha hai..... Bohot hi Khoob Dost icon_thumleft



Bhaut Bahut Shukriya Talat Dost!!! Aapne Humesha Se mera Hausla badhaya Hai..Thanks A Lot Dear!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: September 28, 2009, 09:32:42 PM »
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nice one khwaish ji  Applause Applause
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