Duniya Ki Fikr Naa Karna Kabhi Eh Mere Humdum "Khwahish"

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«Reply #15 on: April 18, 2013, 08:04:43 PM »
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Very Beautiful Ghazal Khwahish Jee!!!

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«Reply #16 on: April 18, 2013, 09:20:20 PM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #17 on: April 18, 2013, 09:36:59 PM »
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«Reply #18 on: April 18, 2013, 09:48:15 PM »
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Bahut Dard Deta Hai kisi Se Bichadkar jeena
Kuch paane Se Pehle jaise Usse Gawa Dena

Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Khwaish jee

Thanks a Lotttttt Mukesh Ji..

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«Reply #19 on: April 18, 2013, 10:43:37 PM »
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Aapke Talab Ki Hadd Ne Aisa Junoon Baksha Hai...!!!!!
Hum Neend Se Uth Baithe Aapko Khwab MeN Aata Dekh Kar



Yaad Jab Meri Aaye, Tum Bas Muskura Dena
Mera Ek Geet Inn Honton Pe Gunguna lena

Main Kaheen Bhi Rahoon, Tere Saath Hoon
Mujhe Aaena Samajkar Haal-e-Dil Suna Dena

Yeh Mumkin Bhi Nahi Ke Jo Chaaho Haasil Ho
Par Kabhi Yaadon Ko Dil Se Na Mita Dena

Bahut Dard Deta Hai kisi Se Bichadkar jeena
Kuch paane Se Pehle jaise Usse Gawa Dena

Dur Bhi Ho Jaye To Milne Ki Gunjaish Rakhna
Asaan Nahi Kisi Ko Pal Bhar MeN Bhula Dena

Meri DuayoN MeN Tum To Shaamil Ho Hi..!!!
Inn Duayon MeN Kabhi Haath Apne Bhi Utha lena

Duniya Ki Fikr Naa Karna Kabhi Eh Mere Humdum
Hum Ek Chirag Hain ,Duniya Ka Kaam Hai Hawa Dena

Main Jaanta Hoon Khwaab Tootne Par Dard Dete Hain
"Khwahish" Ko Khwaab Bana Kar Palkon MeN Basa lena


        
            ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~




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«Reply #20 on: April 19, 2013, 01:30:42 AM »
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वाह...वाह...लाजवाब, बेमिसाल, बहुत ही उम्दा कलाम, बहुत बहुत मुबारक
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«Reply #21 on: April 19, 2013, 03:07:02 AM »
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Aapke Talab Ki Hadd Ne Aisa Junoon Baksha Hai...!!!!!
Hum Neend Se Uth Baithe Aapko Khwab MeN Aata Dekh Kar



Yaad Jab Meri Aaye, Tum Bas Muskura Dena
Mera Ek Geet Inn Honton Pe Gunguna Dena

Main Kaheen Bhi Rahoon, Tere Saath Hoon
Mujhe Aaena Samajkar Haal-e-Dil Suna Dena

Yeh Mumkin Bhi Nahi Ke Jo Chaaho Haasil Ho
Par Kabhi Yaadon Ko Dil Se Na Mita Dena

Bahut Dard Deta Hai kisi Se Bichadkar jeena
Kuch paane Se Pehle jaise Usse Gawa Dena

Dur Bhi Ho Jaye To Milne Ki Gunjaish Rakhna
Asaan Nahi Kisi Ko Pal Bhar MeN Bhula Dena

Meri DuayoN MeN Tum To Shaamil Ho Hi..!!!
Inn Duayon MeN Kabhi Haath Apne Bhi Utha Dena

Duniya Ki Fikr Naa Karna Kabhi Eh Mere Humdum
Hum Ek Chirag Hai ,Duniya Ka Kaam Hai Hawa Dena

Main Jaanta Hoon Khwaab Tootne Par Dard Dete Hain
"Khwahish" Ko Khwaab Bana Kar Palkon MeN Basa Dena


       
            ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~~


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«Reply #22 on: April 22, 2013, 12:30:52 PM »
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