Dunya luta di.......~ shoaib ~

by admani on February 15, 2014, 06:32:54 PM
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Jis ki khaatir mein ne dunya luta di
Uss ne bichhar ke, mere pyaar ko saza di

Meri kashti mauj-o-toofaan se larr rahi thi
Abhi doobi na thi, aur tum ne duba di

Har din ke baad raat hai, lekin raat ke paas chaand hai
Meri shab-e-zindagi ki tum ne chaandni bujha di

Uss ne chora bhi tou kis be-hissi se 'Shoaib'
Na alvida kaha, na koi duaa di...
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2014, 07:40:07 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2014, 07:57:31 PM »
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bahut khoob....... Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 15, 2014, 08:28:32 PM »
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Too good!

Yun to karne ko kar jaate hum bhi pyaar mein bahut kuch
Magar na jaane kisne dil mein jagi huyi umeed bhujha di

Jab haosla jutaya izhaar- e- mohabbat karne ka
Tabb uska kisi aur ke liye janoon-e-mohabbat dekh kar
Humne khud ke khoabon ki duniya luta di
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«Reply #4 on: February 15, 2014, 08:30:02 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: February 15, 2014, 08:52:02 PM »
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bahut khoob
bohat shukriya Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2014, 03:59:31 AM »
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Jis ki khaatir mein ne dunya luta di
Uss ne bichhar ke, mere pyaar ko saza di

Meri kashti mauj-o-toofaan se larr rahi thi
Abhi doobi na thi, aur tum ne duba di

Har din ke baad raat hai, lekin raat ke paas chaand hai
Meri shab-e-zindagi ki tum ne chaandni bujha di

Uss ne chora bhi tou kis be-hissi se 'Shoaib'
Na alvida kaha, na koi duaa di...


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah bohut khub keep writing
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2014, 04:05:20 AM »
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Jis ki khaatir mein ne dunya luta di
Uss ne bichhar ke, mere pyaar ko saza di

Meri kashti mauj-o-toofaan se larr rahi thi
Abhi doobi na thi, aur tum ne duba di

Har din ke baad raat hai, lekin raat ke paas chaand hai
Meri shab-e-zindagi ki tum ne chaandni bujha di

Uss ne chora bhi tou kis be-hissi se 'Shoaib'
Na alvida kaha, na koi duaa di...


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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2014, 02:12:09 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahut hi khoobsurt...
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«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2014, 03:19:07 AM »
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bahut khoob....... Applause Applause
shukria Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: February 17, 2014, 03:19:45 AM »
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Too good!

Yun to karne ko kar jaate hum bhi pyaar mein bahut kuch
Magar na jaane kisne dil mein jagi huyi umeed bhujha di

Jab haosla jutaya izhaar- e- mohabbat karne ka
Tabb uska kisi aur ke liye janoon-e-mohabbat dekh kar
Humne khud ke khoabon ki duniya luta di
kya baat kya baat
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«Reply #12 on: February 17, 2014, 03:26:24 AM »
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Jis ki khaatir mein ne dunya luta di
Uss ne bichhar ke, mere pyaar ko saza di

Meri kashti mauj-o-toofaan se larr rahi thi
Abhi doobi na thi, aur tum ne duba di

Har din ke baad raat hai, lekin raat ke paas chaand hai
Meri shab-e-zindagi ki tum ne chaandni bujha di

Uss ne chora bhi tou kis be-hissi se 'Shoaib'
Na alvida kaha, na koi duaa di...


wah wah wah bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #13 on: February 17, 2014, 02:54:46 PM »
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waah waah waah
bohat bohat shukriya dr jee
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«Reply #14 on: February 17, 2014, 02:55:48 PM »
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Jis ki khaatir mein ne dunya luta di
Uss ne bichhar ke, mere pyaar ko saza di

Meri kashti mauj-o-toofaan se larr rahi thi
Abhi doobi na thi, aur tum ne duba di

Har din ke baad raat hai, lekin raat ke paas chaand hai
Meri shab-e-zindagi ki tum ne chaandni bujha di

Uss ne chora bhi tou kis be-hissi se 'Shoaib'
Na alvida kaha, na koi duaa di...


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah bohut khub keep writing
thankyou Usual Smile
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