Fizayein baat karti hai............................Aqsh.

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Milte the ham jahaN aksar, aaj wahan ki fizayeiN baat karti hain
Beshak laboN ko toh see liya, par ab bhi hawayeiN baat karti hain

Rozana mulaqatoN ka, wohi lamha aakar guzar hi jaata hai
Dil ko jaise bhi samjha lete haiN, par tamannayeiN baat karti hain

Tumse juda hote hue, kitna dard aankhoN mein chhupa liya tha
Behte hue ashkoN ke sang, bebas dil ki duaayeiN baat karti hain

Raat ke andhere mein jab bhi, tumhe talash karti hai meri nazar
Chahat ke is tadap ke sang, chaand ki adaayeiN baat karti hain

Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hain..

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«Reply #1 on: March 04, 2014, 07:18:28 PM »
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Tumse juda hote hue, kitna dard aankhoN mein chhupa liya tha
Behte hue ashkoN ke sang, bebas dil ki duaayeiN baat karti hai

Raat ke andhere mein jab bhi, tumhe talash karti hai meri nazar
Chahat ke is tadap ke sang, chaand ki adaayeiN baat karti hai

Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hai

Wah wah wah Aqsh jee
Bahut behatreen likha hai aapne..
lajavaab..bas yun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: March 04, 2014, 07:41:13 PM »
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wah wah bahoot umda ma'am
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«Reply #3 on: March 04, 2014, 07:41:28 PM »
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wah wah wah bohut umda likhiya ap ne
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«Reply #4 on: March 04, 2014, 08:32:53 PM »
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Bahut khub aqsh ji..
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«Reply #5 on: March 04, 2014, 09:04:23 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: March 04, 2014, 09:49:02 PM »
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Milte the ham jahaN aksar, aaj wahan ki fizayeiN baat karti hai
Beshak laboN ko toh see liya, par ab bhi hawayeiN baat karti hai

Rozana mulaqatoN ka, wohi lamha aakar guzar hi jaata hai
Dil ko jaise bhi samjha lete haiN, par tamannayeiN baat karti hai

Tumse juda hote hue, kitna dard aankhoN mein chhupa liya tha
Behte hue ashkoN ke sang, bebas dil ki duaayeiN baat karti hai

Raat ke andhere mein jab bhi, tumhe talash karti hai meri nazar
Chahat ke is tadap ke sang, chaand ki adaayeiN baat karti hai

Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hai..

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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqsh ji.Behad khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai.Really Nice.Aik RAU ke saath dili daad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #8 on: March 04, 2014, 10:15:44 PM »
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beautiful ghazal rau shaam ko
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«Reply #9 on: March 04, 2014, 10:51:57 PM »
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Milte the ham jahaN aksar, aaj wahan ki fizayeiN baat karti hai
Beshak laboN ko toh see liya, par ab bhi hawayeiN baat karti hai

Rozana mulaqatoN ka, wohi lamha aakar guzar hi jaata hai
Dil ko jaise bhi samjha lete haiN, par tamannayeiN baat karti hai
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tumse juda hote hue, kitna dard aankhoN mein chhupa liya tha
Behte hue ashkoN ke sang, bebas dil ki duaayeiN baat karti hai

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Raat ke andhere mein jab bhi, tumhe talash karti hai meri nazar
Chahat ke is tadap ke sang, chaand ki adaayeiN baat karti hai
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hai.
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ek rau ke saath dheron daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #10 on: March 05, 2014, 05:15:41 AM »
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Milte the ham jahaN aksar, aaj wahan ki fizayeiN baat karti hain
Beshak laboN ko toh see liya, par ab bhi hawayeiN baat karti hain
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Rozana mulaqatoN ka, wohi lamha aakar guzar hi jaata hai
Dil ko jaise bhi samjha lete haiN, par tamannayeiN baat karti hain
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Tumse juda hote hue, kitna dard aankhoN mein chhupa liya tha
Behte hue ashkoN ke sang, bebas dil ki duaayeiN baat karti hain
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Raat ke andhere mein jab bhi, tumhe talash karti hai meri nazar
Chahat ke is tadap ke sang, chaand ki adaayeiN baat karti hain
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hain..

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Hats off to you!
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«Reply #11 on: March 05, 2014, 07:25:36 AM »
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Milte the ham jahaN aksar, aaj wahan ki fizayeiN baat karti hain
Beshak laboN ko toh see liya, par ab bhi hawayeiN baat karti hain

Rozana mulaqatoN ka, wohi lamha aakar guzar hi jaata hai
Dil ko jaise bhi samjha lete haiN, par tamannayeiN baat karti hain

Tumse juda hote hue, kitna dard aankhoN mein chhupa liya tha
Behte hue ashkoN ke sang, bebas dil ki duaayeiN baat karti hain

Raat ke andhere mein jab bhi, tumhe talash karti hai meri nazar
Chahat ke is tadap ke sang, chaand ki adaayeiN baat karti hain

Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hain..



aqsh sahiba,
umda kalaam likha hai...... kuch zyada hil taweel misro'n ka istemal kiya hai, jo ek mushkil karnama hai, sirf ayse hi kisi misre me ghazal hoti to mazeed lutf aata................ .............................................
"jaha'n milte the hum aksar, fizayein baat karti hain"
ye meri ray hai, eytraaz ya islaah nahi,bura na maniyega , ray aur mashwira apno'n ko hi diya jata hai
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«Reply #12 on: March 05, 2014, 07:37:04 AM »
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वाह....वाह.....वाह....बहुत ही शानदार पेशकश....ढेरों ढेरों दाद और तहे दिल से मुबारकबाद....
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«Reply #13 on: March 05, 2014, 03:20:40 PM »
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Wah. Kya baat !
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«Reply #14 on: March 05, 2014, 05:34:04 PM »
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Bahut khoob Aqsh ji , khas taur se Maqta bahut khubsurat hai .

Bhala aur kitna aazmaoge tum, “Aqsh” ki muhabbat ko jaana
DooriyoN meiN bhi dhadkanoN se, aati sadaayeiN baat karti hain..
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