Gareebi Boriye pe so Rahi hai ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on November 30, 2012, 04:43:17 PM
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«Reply #15 on: November 30, 2012, 08:44:06 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on November 30, 2012, 04:43:17 PM
Yaarane bazm meri tazaah ghazal ke khuch sher aap hazraat ke hawale ...


Meri pahchaan jaise kho rahi hai
Mujhe tumse mahubbat ho rahi hai

Yaka yak kya hua hai zindagi ko
Mera daman pakad ke ro rahi hai

Ameeri narm bistar pe parishan
Gareebi buriye pe so rahi hai


Shafarat bhi hai khuddari ana bhi
Gareebi bhojh kitna dho rahi hai

Qadeer urdu ka aisa haal hai ab
Ghazal bhi sar patak ke ro rahi hai

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #16 on: December 01, 2012, 12:59:11 AM »
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Subhan Allah Kya Ghazal Se Nawaaza Hai Bhai, Aapke Kalam Ki Gehraai Zindagi Ki Sachchai Ko LafOn Mein Dhaalti Hai,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahe Aate Rahe,.
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«Reply #17 on: December 01, 2012, 02:32:23 AM »
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bahut hi khoobsurat pesh kash. padhkar mazaa aa gaya
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«Reply #18 on: December 01, 2012, 03:07:46 AM »
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ek rau quboool farmaayeN huzooor...
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«Reply #19 on: December 01, 2012, 03:10:40 AM »
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«Reply #20 on: December 01, 2012, 11:33:05 AM »
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very very very nice qadeer jee
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«Reply #21 on: December 01, 2012, 11:37:45 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on November 30, 2012, 04:43:17 PM
Yaarane bazm meri tazaah ghazal ke khuch sher aap hazraat ke hawale ...


Meri pahchaan jaise kho rahi hai
Mujhe tumse mahubbat ho rahi hai

Yaka yak kya hua hai zindagi ko
Mera daman pakad ke ro rahi hai

Ameeri narm bistar pe parishan
Gareebi buriye pe so rahi hai


Shafarat bhi hai khuddari ana bhi
Gareebi bhojh kitna dho rahi hai

Qadeer urdu ka aisa haal hai ab
Ghazal bhi sar patak ke ro rahi hai

Qadeertoopchi
wonderful ,,,,:clap:ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #22 on: December 01, 2012, 05:56:20 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 30, 2012, 06:01:47 PM
qadeer saheb.Arse baad aapki Yoindia Shayariadab per aamad se aur yeh khubsurat ghazal parh ke bahut khushi hui.Khas taur se haqeeqat ke akkas teesra sher aur maqta bahut pasand aaya.Ummeed hai ki agli peshkash ke liye zyada intezar nahi karaayeige.bahut mubarakbad.

Hasan Sahib ,, Ghazal pe apka tabsera sanad se kamm nahi ,, apse adab nawaz hazrat ki dad mere liye tabaruk hai ,,, Apke husn-e-zaan ko salam ,, Allah apko khush rakhe
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«Reply #23 on: December 04, 2012, 12:50:22 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on November 30, 2012, 07:02:54 PM
Behtareen Qadeer saheb. Bahut achhi lagi aapki ye ghazal hamesha ki tarah.

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