Kanne Se Katt rahi hai Dil ki Patang Abke ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on January 25, 2012, 07:02:00 AM
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Yaarane bazm tasleemat ,, Meri ik ghazal Ilm tabsere ke liye apki khidmat me ,,Umid hai ke apni khimti ara se nawazenge ..


Kanne se katt rahi hai dil ki patang ab ke
Chunri se dikh raha hai goori ka ang abke

Usne nazar chura li gulshan se yaar shayad
Phika pada hai dekho pholon ka rang abke

Khuch haadsau.N ne mujh per aisa asar hai chora
Uthti nahi hai dil me koi umang abbe

Na to adab barhon ka na hai wo inkesaari
Kitna badal gaya hai bachon ka dhang abke

Ye kiss ada se zalim tone mujhe chuaa hai
Nas nas me baj rahi hai koi tarang ab ke

Janta watan ki dekho ab raqs hi karegi
Neta baja rahe hain bulbul tarang abke

Kaase me apne duniya jo dekh muskuraye
Dondo Qadeer tum bhi aisa malang abke


Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #1 on: January 25, 2012, 08:31:58 AM »
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Yaarane bazm tasleemat ,, Meri ik ghazal Ilm tabsere ke liye apki khidmat me ,,Umid hai ke apni khimti ara se nawazenge ..


Kanni se katt rahi hai dil ki patang ab ke
Chunri se dikh raha hai goori ka ang abke

Usne nazar chura li gulshan se yaar shayad
Phika pada hai dekho pholon ka rang abke

Khuch haadsau.N ne mujh per aisa asar hai chora
Uthti nahi hai dil me koi umang abbe

Na to adab barhon ka na hai wo inkesaari
Kitna badal gaya hai bachon ka dhang abke

Ye kiss ada se zalim tone mujhe chuaa hai
Nas nas me baj rahi hai koi tarang ab ke

Janta watan ki dekho ab raqs hi karegi
Neta baja rahe hain bulbul tarang abke

Kaase me apne duniya jo dekh muskuraye
Dondo Qadeer tum bhi aisa malang abke


Qadeertoopchi


Waah waah Waah!!!!!

Har Ek Ashaar Apna Asar Chodhta Hua..

Bahut Bahut Khooooooob!!!!!

Kya kehne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: January 25, 2012, 08:45:13 AM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 25, 2012, 08:46:27 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #4 on: January 25, 2012, 11:06:02 AM »
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Qadeer saheb.Tah e dil se daad pesh hai ghazl par uske andaz ,uske rang aur khoobsurat radeef o qafiye keliye. Kanne se katna to patangbaazon ka manpasand muhaavra bhi hai . khoob istemaal kiya hai.Har sher bahut khoob hai.Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.Duago, Hasan
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«Reply #5 on: January 25, 2012, 11:24:22 AM »
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Khawish Sahab ,,, Apka behad shukriyah bhai ,,Apne khadam khadam meri hausla afzai ki hai ,, Allah apko khush rakhe ,,

Dua go

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«Reply #6 on: January 25, 2012, 11:25:11 AM »
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Applause Applause


Dr.Sahab Shukriyah ,,

Dua go

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«Reply #7 on: January 25, 2012, 11:29:54 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause

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Badi Nawazish Aatish Sahab ,,

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«Reply #8 on: January 25, 2012, 11:32:17 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: January 25, 2012, 11:32:59 AM »
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Qadeer saheb.Tah e dil se daad pesh hai ghazl par uske andaz ,uske rang aur khoobsurat radeef o qafiye keliye. Kanne se katna to patangbaazon ka manpasand muhaavra bhi hai . khoob istemaal kiya hai.Har sher bahut khoob hai.Bahut bahut mubarakbaad.Duago, Hasan

Mahutram Hasan Siddiqui Sahab salam

Yaqeen Jaaniye Mai us Lafz ko lekar ke bada parishan tha ,, Apne mujhe rahe raushnai ata ki badi nawazish ,, Apke huzoor sarapa sipaas hun ,, Mai ne Lafz badal diya hai dekh le.N ,, Allah apko khush rakhe ,,,,

Dua go

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«Reply #10 on: January 25, 2012, 01:15:02 PM »
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Akhri shaer,
Aha bahaut bahaut bahautttttttt acha laga hume..
Kya baat hai Qadeer Sahab..
Yunhi aa kay dil ko choote rahiyega..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: January 25, 2012, 03:38:38 PM »
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Oye Hoye .. Kya baat hai Itna Romantic Kalaam ..Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. Bahoot Shandaar... !!!

Yo Ke Ladko ka tho Dil hi Machal Gaya hoga yea Kalam pad ke  Winking


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«Reply #12 on: January 25, 2012, 05:40:24 PM »
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Yaarane bazm tasleemat ,, Meri ik ghazal Ilm tabsere ke liye apki khidmat me ,,Umid hai ke apni khimti ara se nawazenge ..


Kanne se katt rahi hai dil ki patang ab ke
Chunri se dikh raha hai goori ka ang abke Applause Applause

Usne nazar chura li gulshan se yaar shayad
Phika pada hai dekho pholon ka rang abke Applause Applause

Khuch haadsau.N ne mujh per aisa asar hai chora
Uthti nahi hai dil me koi umang abbe Applause Applause Applause Applause

Na to adab barhon ka na hai wo inkesaari
Kitna badal gaya hai bachon ka dhang abke Applause Applause

Ye kiss ada se zalim tone mujhe chuaa hai
Nas nas me baj rahi hai koi tarang ab ke Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause bemishaal khyaal vaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

Janta watan ki dekho ab raqs hi karegi
Neta baja rahe hain bulbul tarang abke

Kaase me apne duniya jo dekh muskuraye
Dondo Qadeer tum bhi aisa malang abke Applause Applause Applause Applause


Qadeertoopchi
kya ghajal pesh ki janaab
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
dil khush ho gaya...
naacheej ki taaliyan apne aap sab bayaN kar rahi hai
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«Reply #13 on: January 25, 2012, 05:56:08 PM »
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Bahot khub Abdul Qadeer sahab. Shandar munfarid peshkash hai ye apki. Hazaro daad pesh hain.
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«Reply #14 on: January 25, 2012, 06:23:44 PM »
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