Gazal Urdu-hindiSamander ker diye mere havale bana kagaz ka safina

by R.M. Dixit on November 09, 2010, 08:21:56 PM
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              Gamon ke saye main hans - hans ke jeena
              Bari muddet main aaya ye kareena.

              Samunder ker diye mere havale
              Banaker mujhko kaagez ka safeena.
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              Jiger sulge, lahoo uble baden main
              Mager aaye na maathe pe paseena.

              Galet hum koste rehte hai unko
              Falek ka aap bhi chalni hai seena.

              Sabhi hain paara-paara resha-resha
              Para hai kin garebanon ko seena.

              Kahan 'Akhter'  kahan   Firoz-bakhti
              ki paaker kho diya un-sa nageena.
             
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«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2010, 09:37:39 PM »
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Janab Dixit sahab bahot behtreen ghazal aapne share ki hai. Aapki pasand bahot achhi lagi. Thanks for sharing such a nice ghazal.
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              Gamon ke saye main hans - hans ke jeena
              Bari muddet main aaya ye kareena.

              Samunder ker diye mere havale
              Banaker mujhko kaagez ka safeena.
 love9
              Jiger sulge, lahoo uble baden main
              Mager aaye na maathe pe paseena.

              Galet hum koste rehte hai unko
              Falek ka aap bhi chalni hai seena.

              Sabhi hain paara-paara resha-resha
              Para hai kin garebanon ko seena.

              Kahan 'Akhter'  kahan   Firoz-bakhti
              ki paaker kho diya un-sa nageena.
             


bahut khoob kaha dixit sahab...
daad kabool ho

regardds
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2010, 08:09:13 PM »
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Janab Dixit sahab bahot behtreen ghazal aapne share ki hai. Aapki pasand bahot achhi lagi. Thanks for sharing such a nice ghazal.

  
Shukriya Mohterm, aapne Gazal ko
                 Saraha apni daad se navaja. Tahe dil
               se
                 aapki daad qabool ki humne. Nic of U.
                 Bye Bye.  
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«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2010, 08:15:01 PM »
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bahut khoob kaha dixit sahab...
daad kabool ho

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                     Shukriya Ziddi Miyan. AApne hamri
                     pesh ki gazal ko ehmiyet aur daad se
                     nawaja. So nice of u.
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«Reply #5 on: November 12, 2010, 01:20:52 AM »
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dixit ji. waqai bahaut hi nafees kalam share kiya apne. shukriya.
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«Reply #6 on: November 12, 2010, 07:22:45 AM »
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      Shukriya Zarra, aapne hamare
      pesh ki gazal ko ahmiyet di
      aur bare sunder alfaaz se daad
      inayet ki.
      Maaf kijeye Zarra is 'F' hai or 'M'
      bataiyega plese.   
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«Reply #7 on: November 12, 2010, 11:28:21 AM »
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RM dixit sahab daad hazir he bahut badhiya peshkash~
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«Reply #8 on: November 12, 2010, 11:15:47 PM »
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 Shukriya Janab shukriya apne
 hamari pesh ki gazal ki kadra ki
 daad di. Hum tahe dil sedaad qabool
 kerte hain.
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